"Will Dockery" <will.dockery@gmail.com> wrote in news:6a78fff0.f21dca0dae5cb1d5@csiph.com:
Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> wrote:
Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> wrote in
news:1786287960-3274@newsgrouper.org:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa@gmail.comNOSPAM> posted:
George J. Dance wrote in article <1786286544-2782
@newsgrouper.org>:
I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet newsgroup
portals, though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.
I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there,
all right.
A web gate to Usenet is not Usenet! There's no such thing as
removal of a post! All of the posts are messages being sent among
servers around the world, and there is absolutely no way to go
get into all those servers and delete all the copies.
Basically the same thing I wrote, but well put.
Why are you replying to someone who killfiled you
Actually, you did the same thing yesterday, and I asked you about it.
will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery) posted:
George J. Dance wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa> posted:
Did Melissa delete her post? If so: Wow!Verily, in article <LjOdnRUuepIHknf0nZ2dnZfqn_WdnZ2d>, did
will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid deliver unto us this message:
"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J
***
On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: >>> in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at >>> will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:
When.
When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.
-Will Dockery
This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and
then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line.
Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments,
and I never threatened you)
***
When the Mill Shut Down
When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.
-Will Dockery
Nice. It sums up the dull, plodding feeling of getting on with our lives
after something huge has ended with a wet splat.
Thanks again, and hope you'll stuck with us for more poetry, Melissa.
I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet newsgroup portals, though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.
I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there, all right.
Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> wrote:
"Will Dockery" <will.dockery@gmail.com> wrote in
news:6a78fff0.f21dca0dae5cb1d5@csiph.com:
Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> wrote:
Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> wrote in
news:1786287960-3274@newsgrouper.org:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa@gmail.comNOSPAM> posted:
George J. Dance wrote in article <1786286544-2782
@newsgrouper.org>:
I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet
newsgroup portals, though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.
I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there,
all right.
A web gate to Usenet is not Usenet! There's no such thing as
removal of a post! All of the posts are messages being sent
among servers around the world, and there is absolutely no way
to go get into all those servers and delete all the copies.
Basically the same thing I wrote, but well put.
Why are you replying to someone who killfiled you
Actually, you did the same thing yesterday, and I asked you about
it.
Again, so, why did *you* do it?
I just checked the thread just after Melissa stated she had blocked
you me and Bruce, you continue posting to Melissa as if she could see
your post.
Hypocrite much, Kevin?
"Will Dockery" <will.dockery@gmail.com> wrote in news:6a794f09.c5bffa21ac9894c0@csiph.com:
Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> wrote:
"Will Dockery" <will.dockery@gmail.com> wrote in
news:6a78fff0.f21dca0dae5cb1d5@csiph.com:
Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> wrote:
Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> wrote in
news:1786287960-3274@newsgrouper.org:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa@gmail.comNOSPAM> posted:
George J. Dance wrote in article <1786286544-2782
@newsgrouper.org>:
I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet
newsgroup portals, though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.
I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there,
all right.
A web gate to Usenet is not Usenet! There's no such thing as
removal of a post! All of the posts are messages being sent
among servers around the world, and there is absolutely no way
to go get into all those servers and delete all the copies.
Basically the same thing I wrote, but well put.
Why are you replying to someone who killfiled you
Actually, you did the same thing yesterday, and I asked you about
it.
Again, so, why did *you* do it?
I just checked the thread just after Melissa stated she had blocked
you me and Bruce, you continue posting to Melissa as if she could see
your post.
I don't care one way or another. Other people will, even Douchebags.
Hypocrite much, Kevin?
Not like you by any stretch
Will Dockery wrote:
George J. Dance wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J
***
On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: >>>
in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at >>>> will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:
When.
When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.
-Will Dockery
This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and >>>> then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line.
Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments,
and I never threatened you)
***
Stuart's right, but I don't expect my opinion is going to convince anyone. >> But he and I aren't the only ones who liked that poem of yours. For instance,
you know that last week I had my "trusted source" AI, X, do an overview of >> your poetry. Yes, I told you the result was yours, to decide when and where
you wanted to make it public; but I don't think you'd mind my quoting X's >> assessment of this poem:
"Strengths
Authenticity and emotional directness: Poems often feel lived-in.
rCLWhen the Mill Shut DownrCY is concise and effective:
When the mill shut down
we hit the pavement with a thud
then we all got up
and kept on walking.
Some to the work house
some to the poor house
some to the whorehouse
and the grave.
"The rhythm and list land with working-class bluntness; it captures collective
resilience and attrition without overstatement."
That's pretty good, quotable, even.
Thanks, George.
Yes, that does make a good quote. I'm sure the "trusted source" would
give you a lot of equally positive critiques about many of your poems.
Since you're one of the few who knows who the "trusted source" is,
I'd urge you to start using it yourself. I've been very impressed by how
well that AI works, and would like to see more people using it.
This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=660861078#660861078--
Will Dockery wrote:
George J. Dance wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J
***
On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: >>>
in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at >>>> will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:
When.
When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.
-Will Dockery
This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and >>>> then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line.
Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments,
and I never threatened you)
***
Stuart's right, but I don't expect my opinion is going to convince anyone. >> But he and I aren't the only ones who liked that poem of yours. For instance,
you know that last week I had my "trusted source" AI, X, do an overview of >> your poetry. Yes, I told you the result was yours, to decide when and where
you wanted to make it public; but I don't think you'd mind my quoting X's >> assessment of this poem:
"Strengths
Authenticity and emotional directness: Poems often feel lived-in.
rCLWhen the Mill Shut DownrCY is concise and effective:
When the mill shut down
we hit the pavement with a thud
then we all got up
and kept on walking.
Some to the work house
some to the poor house
some to the whorehouse
and the grave.
"The rhythm and list land with working-class bluntness; it captures collective
resilience and attrition without overstatement."
That's pretty good, quotable, even.
Thanks, George.
Yes, that does make a good quote. I'm sure the "trusted source" would
give you a lot of equally positive critiques about many of your poems.
Since you're one of the few who knows who the "trusted source" is,
I'd urge you to start using it yourself. I've been very impressed by how
well that AI works, and would like to see more people using it.
This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=660861078#660861078
Will Dockery wrote:
"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J
***
On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote:
in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at
will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:
When.
When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.
-Will Dockery
This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and >> then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line.
Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments,
and I never threatened you)
***
Stuart's right, but I don't expect my opinion is going to convince anyone. But he and I aren't the only ones who liked that poem of yours. For instance, you know that last week I had my "trusted source" AI, X, do an overview of your poetry. Yes, I told you the result was yours, to decide when and where you wanted to make it public; but I don't think you'd mind my quoting X's assessment of this poem:
"StrengthsAuthenticity and emotional directness: Poems often feel lived-in. rCLWhen the Mill Shut DownrCY is concise and effective:
When the mill shut down
we hit the pavement with a thud
then we all got up
and kept on walking.
Some to the work house
some to the poor house
some to the whorehouse
and the grave.
The rhythm and list land with working-class bluntness; it captures collective resilience and attrition without overstatement."
This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=660861078#660861078--
Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> wrote in news:1786924594-3274@newsgrouper.org:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa@gmail.comNOSPAM> posted:
Will Dockery wrote in article <1786862715-3274@newsgrouper.org>:
georgedance04@yahoo-dot-ca.no-spam.invalid (George J. Dance)
posted:
[quoted text muted]
aapc, and that she still posts here as well (as this post shows),
while also claiming that she no longer has anything to do with
the group (she's "washed her hands of it") That sounds enough
like what her new "publisher" says about aapc, to conclude that
she's just taking a leaf from her "publisher's" playbook.
Never said it. That's not an expression I use.
You're making things up, to try to pretend that I'm speaking
similarly to people I barely know.
I never wrote what you just responded to, also.
Try to keep up.
Definitely, although either way, stay or go, is her choice.
I did write that ^^^
As I said in reality, I'll continue to monitor the group. If you
don't like that, you do have the choice to end the trash talk.
Stop lying that I'm deleting messages and "saying" things I never
said and all the rest of it, and I'll have no reason to post.
Your claim to be blocking me is apparently also not true, for
starters.
That said, you've jumbled your response, because some of it is in
response to George J. Dance and some of it to me.
If you actually read what you wrote you would have spotted
Will Dockery wrote in article <1786862715-3274@newsgrouper.org>:
georgedance04@yahoo-dot-ca.no-spam.invalid (George J. Dance) posted:
[quoted text muted]
aapc, and that she still posts here as well (as this post shows),
while also claiming that she no longer has anything to do with the group
(she's "washed her hands of it") That sounds enough like what her new "publisher" says about aapc, to conclude that she's just
taking a leaf from her "publisher's" playbook.
Never said it. That's not an expression I use.
You're making things up, to try to pretend that I'm speaking
similarly to people I barely know.
I never wrote what you just responded to, also.
Try to keep up.
Definitely, although either way, stay or go, is her choice.
I did write that ^^^
As I said in reality, I'll continue to monitor the group. If you
don't like that, you do have the choice to end the trash talk.
Stop lying that I'm deleting messages and "saying" things I never
said and all the rest of it, and I'll have no reason to post.
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