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doctor@doctor.nl2k.ab.ca (The Doctor) wrote:

In article <18ca2c255fc9735b$121322$704772$26dd2c6e@news.thecubenet.com>, Pedophile Bruce <Bruce@guffaw.noneya> wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

George J. Dance <user2782@newsgrouper.org.invalid> posted:

will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery) posted:

George J. Dance wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

The True Melissa <thetruemelissa> posted:

Verily, in article <LjOdnRUuepIHknf0nZ2dnZfqn_WdnZ2d>, did
will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid deliver unto us this message:

"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at

least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review: >>>>>>>

https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J

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On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote:

in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at >>>>>>> will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:

When.

When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.

-Will Dockery

This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and
then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line. >>>>>>> Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from >sentiments,
and I never threatened you)

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When the Mill Shut Down

When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.

-Will Dockery

Nice. It sums up the dull, plodding feeling of getting on with our lives
after something huge has ended with a wet splat.

Thanks again, and hope you'll stuck with us for more poetry, Melissa. >>>>>>

Did Melissa delete her post? If so: Wow!

I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet newsgroup

portals, though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.

I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there, all right.

Same here.

That happens on Usenet, a post deleted

NSP's don't honor cancels anymore

Have you been talking lessons in the use of the apostrophe from Jim
Senetto, Bruce?

EfyA
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From Newsgroup: rec.arts.poems

Bruce <Bruce@guffaw.noneya> wrote:

George J. Dance wrote:

Bruce wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:

Thanks again, and hope you'll stuck with us for more poetry, Melissa.

https://troll imgs.org/trollimage/Locxxxx94xxxxxrsG

We've seen that, Bruce. It's been posted at least 20 times already.

How about

Troll much, Bruce?

We know.

EfyA


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Bruce <Bruce@guffaw.noneya> wrote:

Will-Dockery wrote:

Bruce wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:

George J. Dance <user2782> posted:
will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery) posted:
George J. Dance wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
The True Melissa <thetruemelissa> posted:

Verily, in article <LjOdnRUuepIHknf0nZ2dnZfqn_WdnZ2d>, did
will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid deliver unto us this message: >>>
"When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least
July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review:

https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J


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On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55rC>PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: >>>
in article c018b$44cce4fb$18d6510f$16...@KNOLOGY.NET, Will Dockery at
will_d...@knology.net wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM:

When.

When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.

-Will Dockery

This one's good, Will.
The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and >>> then continue with the 2nd and following lines).
I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line.
Stuart
(crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from
sentiments,
and I never threatened you)

***

When the Mill Shut Down

When the mill shut down,
we hit the pavement with a thud,
then we all got up and kept walking.
Some to the work house,
some to the poor house,
some to the whorehouse,
and the grave.

-Will Dockery

Nice. It sums up the dull, plodding feeling of getting on with our lives >>> after something huge has ended with a wet splat.

Thanks again, and hope you'll stuck with us for more poetry, Melissa.

Did Melissa delete her post? If so: Wow!

I'm not sure, it will still appear on other Usenet newsgroup portals, >>> though, if so, such as Newsgrouper.org.

I'm replying from newsgrouper. Her post is still there, all right.

Same here.

That happens on Usenet, a post deleted

NSP's don't honor

Here ^^^

Again, speaking of clueless, where did you learn how to use the
apostrophe, from Jim Senetto?

EfyA


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