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Friends,
A couple of days ago, one of my dad's friends sent me some Punjabi ghazals =
of the legendary Urdu poet Zafar Iqbal. It was a pleasant surprise for me s= ince I had never read ZI's Punjabi poetry. In fact, dad's friend, who himse=
lf is a Punjabi poet, is now planning to collaborate with some people to ge=
t ZI's Punjabi ghazals printed in Gurmukhi script from Shahmukhi script. I = think it is a wonderful idea and will allow the people in Indian Punjab, mo=
st of whom can not read Urdu script, access to ZI's Punjabi poetry.
I have always been a huge Zafar Iqbal fan and suddenly started craving his = asha'ar, and have been reading his kuliyat again.
ab aap ZI kaa voh she'r suniye jo pichhle do din se mere zehn-o-dil par taa=
ri hai, aur maiN ne ise pehle kabhi post nahiiN kiyaa.
TakTakii baaNdh ke maiN dekh raha huuN jis ko
yeh bhi mumkin hai k vo saamne baiTha hi na ho!
This thought just wowed me.....maybe because there are times I can so relat=
e to it.......
___________Zoya
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sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2023 at 3:04:11=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,=20
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
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On Wednesday, June 7, 2023 at 9:03:43=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,=20
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking a= bout posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
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Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
muhabbat ek khushbuu hai humesha saath chalti hai,
koi insaan tanhaai mein tanha nahi rehta - Bashir Badr
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking about posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
I am good Mam, hope everyone else is doing good as well... I keep coming here almost everyday and it saddens me to see no conversation here... for me this platform is like a classroom where I get to learn something everyday...
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kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 1:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
shukriya, Mohit sahib, kyaa Khuub she'r pesh kiyaa hai aap ne. :-)
agar ijaazat ho to inheeN Hazrat ka aek halka-phulka qit'a sunaataa chaluuN=
. arz hai
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
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dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
shayad ma'ashuuq ki ghalati nahi hogi unko bhi
ishq ne Ghalib nikamma kar diya,
warna hum bhi aadmi the kaam ke :)
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa ga= ya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 2:31:18=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:=20
=20
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' si=
r
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa =
gaya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:=20
=20
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?=20
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?
Raj Kumar***
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 9:03:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko=20
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?=20
=20
Raj Kumar***
RK sahib, yeh she'r suniye, I find it kind of 'cute':
dil ki taKhtii pe naam hai teraa
yaaN nahiiN to kahaaN rahoge tum?! :)
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remind=
ed me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii
=20
R.K.
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrot=
e:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remi=
nded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------
***To change the topic,
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!
R.K.***
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On Sunday, 1 October 2023 at 05:15:26 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:=20
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wr=
ote:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this re=
minded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------=20
=20
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of subj= ect as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short space=
of time in recent days. But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my=
contribution.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe
Miir Babr Ali Anees
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On Saturday, September 30, 2023 at 11:15:26=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wro= te:
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
Hmmm, back to JE:
ab mirii koi zindagii hi nahiiN
ab bhi tum meri zindagii ho kyaa??
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On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of su=
bject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short spa=
ce of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.=20
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa
_________Zoya
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On Friday, 6 October 2023 at 21:19:55 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:=20
=20
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of =
subject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short s= pace of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones=
.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:=20
=20
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib=20
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa=20
=20
_________Zoya
bahut bahut shukriyah, Zoya saaHibah.
aap kaa pesh-kardah shi3r to Chemistry meN entropy kaa do misr3oN meN xulaa= sah hai!
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai
maut ke din qariib hote haiN
Nooh Narvi
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?
Naseer
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mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se
~ JE
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On Saturday, October 7, 2023 at 3:01:03=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai=20
maut ke din qariib hote haiN=20
=20
Nooh Narvi=20
Naseer sahib, baqaul Mohsin Naqvi:
vo zaKhm de ke mujhe hauslaa bhi detaa hai
ab is se baRh ke tabiiyat shanaas kyaa hogaa!
=20
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?=20
abhi chand roz pehle maiN ne Irfan sahib ko ek message kyaa tha, Khairiyat =
se haiiN, aur masruuf rehte haiN. maiN to unheN idhar aane ki guzaarish ka=
r hii diyaa karti huuN, aur kabhi kabhi vo sun bhi lete haiN. :)
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On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.
________Zoya
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On Sunday, October 15, 2023 at 10:26:55=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)=20
=20
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:=20
=20
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz=20
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)=20
=20
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.=20
=20
________Zoya
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,
Nagesh
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2023 at 4:53:11=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Nagesh wrote:
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,=20
Nagesh
Yes Nagesh sahib, absolutely, totally Meer! Dah! Did someone say Ghalib, wh=
at were they thinking?! :-)
I could try to pull one and say it was a bait to lure Prof RK back in this = thread! Well, it hooked you for sure. :)
Honestly, I have no idea how this error crept in, you have to believe I kno=
w better.
How have you been my friend? Hoping to see more of you around here.
__________Zoya
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'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
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On Wednesday, October 25, 2023 at 7:21:56=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de=20
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
***apni hastii meN jo maHduud hai, voh bhii mujrim
apni hastii se guzarnaa bhi sitam hotaa hai***
RK
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nazr-e-Alup:
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 16:34:11 UTC, Zoya wrote:
nazr-e-Alup:=20
=20
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN=20
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations. Thank you=
for this shi3r. You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to p= ost in ALUP here after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's pos=
t. I have spoken with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to = have a word with you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time = for us to move over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obv= iously, this is everyone's personal decision.
Best Wishes,
Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai=20
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.=20
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I got = there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is b= etter now and I am back home.
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this ti= me. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has in=
store. Let us hope for the best!=20
Thank you for this shi3r.=20
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.=20
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP here=
after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spoken=
with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word with=
you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move o= ver to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this is = everyone's personal decision.=20
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotional=
reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time, = just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have n=
ot been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave me=
solace.
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am no=
t much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, I =
am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activate = it.
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages in = Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify that=
I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. Ju=
st wondering if anyone else is having such issues.
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer
More later,
________Zoya
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ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 17:44:00 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:=
=20
=20
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I go=
t there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is=
better now and I am back home.=20
=20
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this =
time. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has =
in store. Let us hope for the best!
Thank you for this shi3r.
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP he=
re after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spok=
en with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word wi=
th you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move=
over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this i=
s everyone's personal decision.
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotion=
al reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time=
, just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have=
not been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave =
me solace.=20
=20
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am =
not much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, =
I am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activat=
e it.=20
=20
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages i=
n Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify th=
at I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. = Just wondering if anyone else is having such issues.=20
=20
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer=20
=20
More later,=20
=20
________Zoya
Zoya SaaHiba, aadaab
I have been trying to post for weeks but have faced the same problem as you=
have encountered. Only today I was able to post a messge to you. Thank you=
for your prompt response. Even now, I am having difficulty writing this me= ssage. I couldn't open the link to UVR SaaHib's link to Option 2. Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 1:29:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali=20
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye!
aadaab arz hai, Shoaib sahib.
Happy 2024? :)
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After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes:
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 5:33:38=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes=
:=20
=20
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN=20
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Maj=
az himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Ma=
jaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
Amit, I totally agree.
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and r= emain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisite.
One more, in same behr:
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!=20
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2024 at 11:27:23=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps =
Majaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this news= group is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetr= y/c/1HAOY7PGIKE)
Amit, I totally agree.=20
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and=
remain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisit=
e.=20
=20
One more, in same behr:=20
=20
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN=20
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
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On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
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On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir =
wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" faci= lity. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah cou=
ld be a "taalaab"! :-)
Naseer
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On Friday, January 19, 2024 at 9:04:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:=20
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvi=
r wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.=20
=20
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" fa=
cility. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah c= ould be a "taalaab"! :-)=20
Naseer sahib, I noticed the 'pool' too. Well, it could be "taalaab", or it = could be a group of "maHbuubahs", I mean he could be 'pooling' a whole bunc=
h of them together! :-))
But we can't really pick on him for this, he has his tracks covered by post= ing 'phool' in Urdu script.
But 'maHbuubah'? Really?? I would have typed 'mehbuuba'. Would you let me g=
et away with that? :)
Talking about editing, I posted the above she'r from my long term memory, a=
nd am now thinking that it is actually 'nisbat', not 'raghbat' in the first=
misra. So, the edited version is:
shaayad huzuur se koii nisbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye!
_____________Zoya
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Friends,
aaj kal maiN ek arse ke baa'd dobaara 'Ishrat Afreen' ki kitaab paRh rahii huuN.
Absolutely brilliant, stark, contemporary female perspective.
she'r dekhiye:
ab ek rishta-e-benaam se use puujuuN
k por por vo paththar mujhe banaa hi gayaa!
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vo harf thaa na sitaaraa magar chamaktaa thaa
k mere zard gulaaboN ke biich mehkaa thaa
ye aur baat k kam_hauslaa to maiN bhii thii
magar ye sach hai use pehle maiN ne chaahaa thaa
na mere haath hinaaii na us ke Khwaab gulaab
to phir ye rang sa pairaahanoN pe kaisaa thaa
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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On Saturday, January 27, 2024 at 11:12:57=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub=20
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN=20
=20
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN=20
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN=20
=20
Ishrat Afreen=20
___________Zoya
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 3:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
waah!=20
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN kah= iiN
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN ja= ayeNge??
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 8:51:49=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w= rote:
tu nigaahoN ki zabaaN khoob samajhta ho ga
teri jaanib to uTha karti haiN aksar aaNkheN
Sure!
mere chehre pe ghazal likhti gaiiN
she'r kehtii hui aaNkheN us kii
So says Parveen Shakir.
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ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 4:07:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab=20
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 4:33:35=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:=20
=20
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.=20
=20
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN k=
ahiiN=20
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN =
jaayeNge??
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Fri Feb 2 13:41:12 2024
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yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
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hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer
I really hope this sher gets through...
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:27:37=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai=20
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
havaaeN jab ghaNTiyaaN bajaayeN to lauT aanaa
kisii ki aaNkheN diye jalaayeN to lauT aanaa!
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Sat Feb 3 07:19:42 2024
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:30:09=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar=20
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
This reminds me of a gem by Firaaq Goarkhpuri:
vo uTh bhi chuke kab ke, vo jaa bhi chuke kab ke
dil hai k 'Firaaq" ab tak daaman ko ChhuRaaye hai!
Disclaimer: Prof RK remembers a slightly different version of this she'r, w=
e have not been able to find it in any authentic printed source, the quest = continues.
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:41:14=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrot=
e:
yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay=20
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
bas jaan gayaa maiN tiri pehchaan yahii hai
tuu dil meN to aataa hai samajh meN nahiiN aata! :-)
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On Saturday, February 3, 2024 at 8:03:00=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Welcome back Mohit :)
hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,=20
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer=20
=20
I really hope this sher gets through...
I am reading Ishrat Afreen's book these days. This classic Meer she'r remin=
ds me of the one I just read yesterday, and liked:
muhabbatoN meN mashaqqat bahut thi so tum ne
mire Khayaal se shaayad mujhe thakaaya nahiiN
Beautiful thought, isn't it?
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JjinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
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On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is so=
'you'! :)
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 10:38:37=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w=
rote:=20
=20
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is =
so 'you'! :)=20
=20
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:=20
=20
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa=20
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 9:50:16=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
jii bilkul Shoaib sahib, 'chaahte haiN so aap kare haiN.......', "aap" as i=
n "ham". :)
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja=20
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
But of course, you know tabassum is my middle name. :-))
vaise bhi bichhaR kaun rahaa hai? I am moving with the gang to the alternat=
e Alup sites, varnaa phir aap kuchh yuuN na kehne lageN:
tum se bichhaR kar zindaa haiN
jaan, bahut sharmindaa haiN!
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Wed Feb 7 12:39:21 2024
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
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On Wednesday 7 February 2024 at 20:39:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai=20
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN=20
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
Salaam,
I came across a Urdu nazm (poem) translated into English.
Poem is written by lyricist (poet) Sahir Ludhianvi from India in 1943 when =
he was 19 year old.
He wrote this for a female friend, Amrita Pritam.
This song is regarded to have been a masterpiece by lyricist Sahir Ludhianv=
i.
"Kabhi Kabhie Mere Dil Mein" (English: 'Sometimes...in My Heart') is a song=
from=20
1976 Bollywood movie Kabhi Kabhie (English title: Sometimes...)
Translated by Elizabeth Kurian =E2=80=98Mona=E2=80=99, a multilingual poet.
Enjoy...
Now and again the thought crosses my heart
That life may have brimmed with happiness
If spent in the soft shadow of your tresses;
The destiny of my existence...this darkness,=20
May have melted in the bright rays of your eyes
It wouldn=E2=80=99t be strange if, estranged from this world,=20
I lost myself in the brilliance of your beauty,=20
Immersed myself in the exquisite romance =20
Of your supple body and half closed eyes.
When the world=E2=80=99s bitterness called out to me,
I could drink the sweet nectar from your lips
When life shrieked and roamed bare-headed
I could hide in the shade of your thick tresses
***
=20
But this did not happen and now my condition is this
Neither you, nor your grief, nor your craving remains,
Life trudges along in such a fashion as though
It has no desire for the support of any soul
I have embraced entire humanity=E2=80=99s sorrows=20
I make my way through unfamiliar paths
Advancing towards me are frightening shadows
From the scary thorny jungles of life and death=20
No pathway, no purpose, no sign of radiance=20
My life drifts aimlessly in the barrenness
I shall be lost some day in this nothingness
I=E2=80=99m aware of this, my love, but nevertheless,
Now and again the thought crosses my heart...
(Translated by Elizabeth Kurian 'Mona')
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan wro= te:
Hi,
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are app= roaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this included =
in the group archives.
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam, = but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it h=
as gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more o=
f a one sided affair on her part.
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, details =
in a separate thread.
___________Zoya
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qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
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On Friday, February 16, 2024 at 2:08:40=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,=20
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
jinheN ham dekh kar jiite the 'Nasir'
vo log aankhoN se ojhal ho gaye haiN :(
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On Wednesday 14 February 2024 at 22:29:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan w=
rote:=20
=20
Hi,=20
=20
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are a=
pproaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this include=
d in the group archives.=20
=20
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam=
, but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it=
has gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more=
of a one sided affair on her part.=20
=20
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, detail=
s in a separate thread.=20
=20
___________Zoya
Hi,
Thanks for correction. I will try to post something whenever I could.
Regards,
Nasir
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So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tarah thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tarah :-((
__________Zoya
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 7:00:14=E2=80=AFAM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(=20
=20
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:=20
=20
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tar=
ah=20
thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tara=
h :-((=20
=20
__________Zoya
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 6:19:22=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,=20
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
Nice. This is one of those asha'ar that stayed with me the first time I hea=
rd it. I remember quoting it at the memorial service of a young Sikh, hands= ome, dedicated local sheriff's deputy who was gunned down by a criminal dur= ing a routine traffic stop. Horrific tragedy.
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Dear friends,
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so su= ccessful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all the=
asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group ov=
er the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having fo= und many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In pa= rticular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar Al=
am Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects o=
f Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life is=
so much richer because of them.
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this Us= enet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotra = sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting points=
. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here i=
s a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searcha= ble, a gold mine for any future visitors here.
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)
So friends,
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.
My love and regards to all,
__________Zoya
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On Thursday 22 February 2024 at 05:10:32 UTC, Zoya wrote:
Dear friends,=20
=20
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so =
successful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all t=
he asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group =
over the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having = found many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In = particular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar = Alam Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects=
of Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life =
is so much richer because of them.=20
=20
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this =
Usenet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotr=
a sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting poin= ts. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here=
is a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:=20
=20
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk=20
=20
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searc=
hable, a gold mine for any future visitors here.=20
=20
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:=20
=20
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa=20
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)=20
=20
So friends,=20
=20
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........=20
=20
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.=20
=20
My love and regards to all,=20
=20
__________Zoya
jaate ho, xudaa Haafiz, haaN itnii guzaarish hai
jab yaad ham aa jaa'eN, milne kii du3aa karnaa
Jaleel Maanakpuri
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And now continuing with Irfan Siddiqui:
Haal zaalim shikaarii ki suurat mujhe, vaqt ki ziin se baandh kar le chalaa mera maazii mire saath chaltaa rahaa duur tak ek majbuur maaN kii tarah
I can't think of any other term that would describe the situation here better than a 'majbuur maaN'. One of the reasons this she'r is also on my all time favorite list.
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Christmas Day:
ibn-e-Mariam huaa kare koii
mere dukh kii davaa kare koii
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On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positive=
" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best out =
of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in t= hem are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bring=
your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azmi = and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic s= ongs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashiq =
is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "Do = Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better known=
as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occasio=
ns where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.smul= e.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/121= 6696826_4241148234=20
Irfan :Abid:
Irfan sahib,
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago wh= ile channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of th=
e channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie ti=
ll you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and all=
! :)
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to m=
e, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about t=
he duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent ex= ample of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as U= rdu.
I love such random coincidences. :-)
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2022 at 5:55:27 PM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:=20
=20
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positi=
ve" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best ou=
t of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in=
them are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bri=
ng your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azm=
i and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic=
songs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashi=
q is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "D=
o Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better kno=
wn as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occas= ions where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.sm= ule.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/1= 216696826_4241148234
Irfan :Abid:=20
=20
Irfan sahib,=20
=20
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago =
while channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of = the channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie = till you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and a= ll! :)=20
=20
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to=
me, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about=
the duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent = example of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as=
Urdu.=20
=20
I love such random coincidences. :-)=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!
Thanks for sharing this! It's really interesting to know about these coinci= dences. And yes, "saaraa moraa kajraa" was perhaps the most famous song of = "Do Dil."
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (197=
9) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri. The thing I f= ind interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, almost selfish = plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Here is the link=
:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-yun-hi-sajegi= /1216696826_4268977991
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
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On Saturday, January 22, 2022 at 1:55:01 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!=20
aadaab Irfan sahib,
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (1=
979) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri.=20
Ahh, another one of those songs I am not familiar with. Great!=20
I had not thought about any Naqsh Lyallpuri in a while. Now that you mentio=
n his name, a few of his songs are coming to my mind, maybe you will record=
one of those in future, we'll see. :)
The thing I find interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, al= most selfish plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Her=
e is the link:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-= yun-hi-sajegi/1216696826_4268977991
You have aptly described the attitude of this song, kind of unusual. Also, = you have rendered in very well. I have not heard the original song, but I a=
m sure your version is pretty close to it. Thanks.
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa=20
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)=20
But of course! You know how I love Nasir Kazmi in general.=20
And now the she'r this song immediately reminded me of, from one of Zauq's=
most famous ghazals:
dunyaa ne kis kaa raah-e-fanaa meN diyaa hai saath
tum bhi chale chalo yuN hi jab tak chalii chale
This one is a pretty good fit too, right?=20
Already waiting for whatever surprise you will pull out of what I now call = your 'magician's bag'. :-)
________Zoya
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On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 23:18:22 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, May 10, 2022 at 9:42:28 AM UTC-7, Naseer wrote:=20
On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 05:13:20 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:=20
On Monday, May 9, 2022 at 8:54:42 PM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:=20
Mohit, aap ki is baat aur is she'r par to maiN bas yahii keh sakt=
i huuN:=20
=20
hazrat-e-Daagh, hai yeh kuucha-e-qaatil uThiye=20
jis jagah baiThte haiN aap to jam jaate haiN! :-)=20
aur mam is sher par mujhe ye sher yaad aaya=20
=20
ab to jaate hai=C3=B1 but-kade se 'meer'=20
phir mileNge agar =E1=B8=B3huda laaya :)=20
***aap kaheN ge "phir aa gayaa GhalatiyaaN nikaalne vaalaa". kyaa kar=
uuN, Mohit ji, aadat se majbuur huuN. :-)=20
=20
mere Khayaal meN, yahaaN "but-kade" ki bajaaye "mai-kade" hona chaahi=
ye. Please double check!=20
=20
R.K.***=20
Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab 3arz hai=20
=20
Mohit SaaHib kaa tahriir-kardah shi3r durust hai. yih shi3r Meer ke dii=
vaan-i-avval kii Ghazal no.85 kaa maqta3 hai.=20
=20
aap kaa xair-andesh,=20
Naseer
***janaab Mohit sahib v Naseer sahib:=20
=20
aap donoN Hazraat ka is Khush-Khabari ke liye shukriya k --------- ab ki =
baar ReKhta durust Thaihraa! :-)=20
=20
B/W, arz hai maiN ne roz-e-avval hi se is misr'e ko lafz "mai-kade" ke sa=
ath sunaa hai. aaj pahli baar is baat ka aHsaas hu'aa k yahaaN asl lafz "bu= t-kade" hai. mere paas aek kitaab hai jis ka unvaan hai "zarb-ul-masal ash'= aar". is kitaab ko tarteeb dii hai mohtarma Sarvat Sultaana Sarvat ne. is k= itaab meN yeh she'r lafz "mai-kade" ke saath darj hai. mere liye yeh kahna = mushkil hai k yeh saaHiba kahaaN tak mo'tabar haiN.=20
=20
duusri baat yeh k ham ALUPers ne ReKhta ko kayee baar Ghalat paaya hai. a=
lbatta, mujhe yaqeen hai k Naseer sahib ka javaab zaruur kisi mo'tabar maaK= hiz par mabni hoga.=20
=20
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
moHtaram Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab.
Huzuur is meN hamaaraa kyaa qusuur hai agar aap is shi3r ko roz-i-avval hii=
se Ghalat sun rahe haiN! :-) muHtaramah Sarvat Sultanah, haiN to professor=
lekin achchaa hotaa vuh is shi3r kii siHHat par thoRii taftiish kar letiiN=
! mere mu3tabir hone par aap ko rattii-bhar shakk nahiiN honaa chaahiye lek=
in agar aap kaa iimaan qadre kam-zor hai to bandah aap kii xidmat-i-3aaliya=
h meN kuchh subuut pesh kartaa hai.
jis kitaab se maiN ne is shi3r ko talaash kiyaa, us kaa naam hai "kulliyaat= -i-Meer" aur ise Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi ne murattab kiyaa hai aur taraqqii-i-U= rdu bureau, na'ii sihlii ne 1983 meN shaa'i3 kiyaa hai. is ke shuruu3 meN c= hand daanishvaroN ne apne mazaamiin shaamil kiye haiN jin meN aap ke "guruu=
" janaab-i-Professor Raghupati Sahay "Firaq" bhii jalvah-afroz haiN. diigar=
Hazraat haiN, Professor Rasheed Ahmed Siddiqi, Qazi Abdul Waduud, Professo=
r Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor aur Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi.
Professor Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor farmaate haiN, "Meer kii kulliyaat kaa vuh edi= tion jo Naval Kishor Press ne aaxirii baar shaa'i3 kiaa thaa aur jis kii si= HHat Abdulbari Aasi ne kii thii ab kahiiN dastyaab nahiiN hotaa (1). Ibadat=
Barelvi ne Pakistan se kulliyaat-i-Meer kaa ek nayaa edition ek taviil mu= qaddime ke saath shaa'i3 kiyaa thaa, us ke matn meN bahut sii GhalatiyaaN r= aah paa ga'ii thiiN magar yih bhii ab Hindustan meN nahiiN mil saktaa (2). =
is liye kulliyaat-i-Meer kii ek aise mustanad edition kii zaruurat saxtii s=
e maHsuus kii jaa rahii thii jo diidah-zeb bhii ho. xushii kii baat hai kih=
zer-i-nazar edition is zaruurat ko baRii Had tak puuraa kartaa hai. vaise = adabii dunyaa meN Harf-i-aaxir to ko'ii bhii nahiiN hotaa."(3)
(1) In the 1941 edition, this shi3r is give as;
buto jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(2) In the 1958 edition, the shi3r is..
ab to jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(3) This is the book I've quoted from and the shi3r is as in (2) above.
In 1960, Sayyid Ja'fri compiled "diivaan-i-Meer" in which the shi3r as per = (2). Later in 1972, Sayyid Ihtisham Hussain compiled a kulliyaat in which t= his shi3r is also as per (2).
The earliest nusxah for "diivaan-i-Meer" is the "nusxah-i-Mahmoodabad" writ= ten down in 1203 hijrii (1788), twenty three years prior to Meer's death. = This has been compiled by Doctor Akbar Haidari. AND the shi3r in question i=
s quoted as:
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(emphasis mine!:-))
I think it makes more sense for "xudaa" to bring Meer back to a "but-kadah"=
, than to a "mai-kadah". After all, "xudaa" has to compete with the other x= udaas in the but-kadah!
Naseer=20
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
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Gentlemen, aadaab,
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
baat butkade se chali thi aur maiKhaane se hoti hui phir butkade par hii Khatm ho rahi hai, to maiN ne sochaa Riyaz Khairabadi kaa yeh she'r aap sab ko sunaati chaluuN:
dunyaa se alag ham ne maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa
maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa, Allah ka ghar dekhaa!
Naseer
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.
________Zoya
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On Thursday, 19 May 2022 at 02:10:06 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na=
maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.=20
=20
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.=20
=20
________Zoya
No, you'e misunderstood what I was trying to say, Zoya SaaHibah.
Raj Kumar SaaHib wrote "aHsaas" and I am suggesting to him (baRii 3aajizii =
ke saath) that the word is iHsaas, just like iqraar, inkaar, insaaf (all wi=
th alif zer and not alif zabar). Another word that is similarly mispronounc=
ed is "iHsaan". I pray and hope all is well with Professor SaaHib.
Naseer
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ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
On Thursday, August 11, 2022 at 6:30:13 PM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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On Thursday, September 1, 2022 at 10:58:03 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
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haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
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On Saturday, September 3, 2022 at 9:50:48 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
goya:
aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
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aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2022 at 9:58:14 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
Nice. Mohit, yeh she'r mujhe bhi pasand hai. ise maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud Rahat Indori sahib kii zubaani sunaa tha, un kaa sunaane kaa andaaz bhi bahut lutf_aNdoz tha.
aur is she'r ko sun kar aksar mere zehn meN Bahir Badr kaa yeh she'r aayaa kartaa hai:
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back in a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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On Thursday, September 8, 2022 at 12:41:20 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,=20
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back i=
n a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
Mohit, nice attitude in this she'r. And it is perfectly in meter, no worrie=
s. :)
Now that the Covid curve is on a decreasing path, the still-masked-me is ge= tting more comfortable with some indoor gatherings. Last night I attended a=
mehfil featuring a classical singer, who is a disciple of Shanti Hiranand = who had trained directly under the legendary Begam Akhtar. It was amazing s= inging, Thumri, daadra, kajri, awadhi folk and best of all some Begam Akhta=
r ghazals that are like nursery rhymes for me, I spent my entire childhood,=
starting at about age two, listening to those timeless compositions!
ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn=
meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
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ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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On Sunday, September 11, 2022 at 9:39:50 AM UTC-6, Zoya wrote:
<snip>
=20
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa=20
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho ki=
na yaad ho=20
Dinesh
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 2:56:07 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
Yes, many different singers have sung this ghazal over the years, but I am particularly biased towards Begam Akhtar version, my first love. :)
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
hakiim Momin kii is ghazal kaa zikr ho rahaa hai, phir yeh she'r to laazim hai:
tum mire paas hote ho goyaa
jab koii duusraa nahiiN hotaa
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 7:19:44 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...=20
=20
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho =
ki na yaad ho=20
=20
Dinesh
Dinesh sahib,=20
Very interesting that you have brought up this particular she'r. Every time=
I read this ghazal, I have always paused over this she'r. I find it sort o=
f intriguing, perhaps because I find this qaafia to be somewhat unexpected.=
I mean unless I have already uttered the "baat", how would I know that 'tu= mhaare jii ko burii lagii'? This is the ambiguity that makes me pause and p= erhaps expect the qaafia to be different. Maybe something like "bayaaN se p= ehle hi Toknaa", like you are about to say something insensitive, the other=
person sees it coming and stops you in your tracks.=20
Of course, I dare not question any she'r of Momin, I am totally unqualified=
to do so. However, I wanted to share my thoughts on this one, since I have=
pondered over it more than once. Let us see if I am making sense to anyone=
else, including you.
________Zoya
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ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=
=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad h=
o ki na yaad ho=20
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it = even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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I interpret in this way
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain...
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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aaj ka sher
sunne wale ghaNtoN sunte rehte haiN,
mera fasana sabka fasana lagta hai - Kaif Bhopali
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 6:08:49 PM UTC-4, Zoya wrote:
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bu=
r=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad=
ho ki na yaad ho
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.=20
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:=20
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot i=
t even before you responded, do you still remember that??"=20
=20
I do, what a loss! :-)
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it's =
in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means "=
to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2022 at 10:16:19 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I interpret in this way=20
=20
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other =
one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain
On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 12:47:01 AM UTC-5,
ami...@gmail.com wrot=
e:
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it'=
s in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means = "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at fa=
ce value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first glan= ce, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first pe= rson or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it co= uld be either one?=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I believe=
is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are few = and far between these days.
____________Zoya
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I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...=20
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why i=
t's in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only mean=
s "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)=20
=20
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.=20
=20
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at =
face value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first gl= ance, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first = person or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it = could be either one?=20
=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I belie=
ve is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.=20
=20
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are fe=
w and far between these days.=20
=20
ALUP must be saying
meharbaaN ho ke bula lo mujhe chaho jis waqt
maiN gaya waqt nahiN hooN ki phir aa bhi naa sakooN :)
____________Zoya
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On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 9:43:59 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote=20
=20
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,=20
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa:
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About 1=
5 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically trai= ned Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghulam=
Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu po= etry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring him=
to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during th=
e ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for m=
e. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also told =
me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorded = numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always t= hink of it very fondly.
Cheerio,
___________Zoya
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I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewing = him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself writ=
e, then he recited his own sher,=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I stil=
l have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tragi=
c car accident... and that's today's sher too :)
=20
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa=
:=20
=20
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa=20
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise=20
=20
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About=
15 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically tr= ained Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghul=
am Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu = poetry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring h=
im to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during = the ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for=
me. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also tol=
d me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorde=
d numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always=
think of it very fondly.=20
=20
Cheerio,=20
=20
___________Zoya
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On Tuesday, September 20, 2022 at 10:08:21 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewin=
g him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself wr= ite, then he recited his own sher,=20
=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,=20
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,=20
=20
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,=20
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great question,=
I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one has=
ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I bet = most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I st=
ill have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tra= gic car accident...=20
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'chiT=
hi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, al= ways gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagjit=
Singh:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
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This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great questio=
n, I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one h=
as ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I be=
t most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though I =
am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn't=
have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tune= '=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I =
still have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a t= ragic car accident...
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'ch=
iThi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, = always gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagj=
it Singh:=20
=20
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and to=
be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to be=
here...=20
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya=20
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though =
I am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn=
't have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tu= ne'=20
=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...
What a loss, I hope the recording can be found in some archives somewhere. = The good thing is you at least preserved the asha'ar he quoted. This remind=
s me, I had recorded an amazing interview with Amjad sahib for Mehfil-e-Suk= han once, don't have it anymore. Maybe Shoaib sahib has it archived, I'll h= ave to ask him. I am generally bad about preserving important pictures/reco= rdings. But as you said, we have the memories! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and =
to be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to =
be here...=20
I agree, Jagjit Singh singlehandedly brought ghazals to masses in India, hu=
ge contribution. His selection of poetry in relatively simple Urdu helped t= oo. There is a sort of vacuum since he passed away.
=20
_________Zoya
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya
Ahhhhh JE! One of my favorite asha'ar by one of my favorite poets.
aur ab aap yeh she'r suniye, Ahmad Mushtaq kaa, another one of my favorites:
abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
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abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
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On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 10:42:11 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
Profound. 'aavaaz meN silvaT' is so typical Gulzar, kind of like 'aaNkhoN kii Khushbu'.
is vaqt besaaKhtaa mere zehn meN Azhar Inayati kaa ek she'r aa rahaa hai. yeh un asha'ar meN se hai jo ek baar paRhne/sun_ne par hii mujhe hameshaa ke liye yaad reh jaate haiN:
kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
_________Zoya
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kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2022 at 1:28:28 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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On Friday, September 30, 2022 at 10:18:04 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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On Saturday, October 1, 2022 at 9:36:12 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2022 at 1:40:55 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
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Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
this reminds me of a sher I read when I was probably 13-14 years old, not sure if the meter etc is right... but here it goes
tujhe bhula ke tere khat jala diye maine,
lutaa ke apna asasa udaas tha maiN bhi...
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apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
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roshni aadhi idhar aadhi udhar,
ik diyaa rakha hai deewaroN ke beech - Obaidullah Aleem
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yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
On Thursday, December 1, 2022 at 10:13:45 AM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:22:29 PM UTC+5:30, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN,
kabhi to wo aaNkheiN wo rukhsaar padhna...
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Wishing everyone a Happy New Year here... hoping everyone is doing fine.
ik ajnabi ke haath meiN de kar humara haath,
lo saath chhodne laga aakHir ye saal bhi - Hafeez Merathhi
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adaab dosto,
Here I am, after a relatively long absence from the group. Hope everyone is doing well.
On this Valentine's Day, let me quote my friend Amjad Islam Amjad sahib.
Amjad sahib muhabbat kii nazmoN ke betaaj baadshah the.
"muhabbat aisa daryaa hai
k baarish ruuThh bhii jaaye
to paanii kam nahiiN hotaa"
_______Zoya
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2022 at 7:41:20 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
Well, Dinesh sahib, in that case, try harder! :)
baqaul Iftikhar Arif:
kare kalaam jo mujh se to mere lehje meN
maiN chup rahuuN to mere tevaroN kaa saathii ho!
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On Wednesday, November 30, 2022 at 10:43:45 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
Ahhh Mohit, one of my all time favorites, I call it a gem. And this always reminds me of another 'gem', by our very own Mohib:
itni muddat Khafaa nahiiN rehtaa
voh mujhe bhuul hii gayaa hogaa :(
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On Saturday, December 3, 2022 at 11:58:01 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehandedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii haiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!
Yes? :)
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:52:29 AM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
aadaab arz hai Shoaib sahib. is baat par to aap kii nazr yeh she'r:
ilm-o-fan ke diivane, aashiqii se Darte haiN
zindagii ke KhwaahaN haiN, zindagii se Darte haiN!
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Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometimes = even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group, a=
nd I honestly tried searching for that as well :) ek ghabrahat si hone lagi=
thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school chhodna pade... bahut ba= hut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon... 13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthda=
y tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/Devnagri meiN hai to pata nahi = sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-sh= er-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
=20
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehan=
dedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,=20
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii h=
aiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo=
maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:=20
=20
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa=20
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!=20
=20
Yes? :)
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2023 at 11:05:35 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometime=
s even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group,=
and I honestly tried searching for that as well :)=20
Awww Mohit, of course not. Alup is like a home to me, of course there is no=
new group, at least not that I am aware of. In any case, I am not at all a= ctive on other social media.=20
ek ghabrahat si hone lagi thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school=
chhodna pade... bahut bahut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon...=20
I understand, I can actually relate to that. I get worried too if long time=
Alup friends are absent for extended periods of time. In future, if you ha=
ve any such concerns, feel free to reach out to me via email. Our group is=
so small now, at least I should try to participate somewhat regularly.
13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthday tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/De= vnagri meiN hai to pata nahi sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
=20
https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-=
sher-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html=20
Thanks for the link. I enjoyed reading your article. Very well written. Kee=
p up the good work.
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua=20
=20
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,=20
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
baat Faiz kii ho rahi hai, to yeh suniye:
jab tujhe yaad kar liyaa subH mehak mehak uThhii
jab tiraa gham jaga liyaa raat machal machal gayii
______Zoya
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Friends,
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably w= ell. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer an= ymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Alup=
is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to keep = the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occasi= onally, if not regularly, in future.
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his own:
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.
_________Zoya
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On Friday, February 24, 2023 at 9:18:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
Friends,=20
=20
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably=
well. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer = anymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Al=
up is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to kee=
p the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occa= sionally, if not regularly, in future.=20
=20
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his ow=
n:=20
=20
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham=20
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye=20
=20
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.=20
=20
_________Zoya
I, too, am returning after a long absence. News of Jamil Sahib's passing c= ame as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted, he was universally admired fo=
r his great knowledge and his willingness to share his wisdom with those wh=
o would most benefit from it - laypersons like me. I am also saddened to h= ear of Aslam Sahib's passing. On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib=
's condition makes an already dark day even darker. My prayers for his qui=
ck recovery.
Nagesh
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On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
I, too, am returning after a long absence.=20
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted,=
he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness to = share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons lik=
e me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. His = contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.=20
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the group=
over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of Bol= lywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definitel=
y creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already d= ark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.=20
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come b= ack, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit worr= ying so much.=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one of= ten, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently quo= ted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and e= ven he loved it!
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.
Nagesh
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.
_________Zoya
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2023 at 5:41:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:=
=20
=20
I, too, am returning after a long absence.
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib note=
d, he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness t=
o share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons l= ike me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. Hi=
s contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the gro=
up over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of B= ollywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definit= ely creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already=
dark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come=
back, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit wo= rrying so much.=20
=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one =
often, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently q= uoted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and=
even he loved it!=20
=20
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii=20
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN=20
=20
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.=20
=20
Nagesh=20
=20
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya Sahiba:
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew hi=
m and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) a= necdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahib.
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed = and also those who remain with us.
Nagesh
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On Friday, March 3, 2023 at 10:50:50=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
Zoya Sahiba:=20
=20
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew h=
im and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) = anecdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.=20
Well put Nagesh sahib, I can echo this.
=20
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahi=
b.=20
Ahhh, you mean my friend Amjad sahib. Thank you. I still haven't absorbed t=
he loss fully, it is global as well as personal.
=20
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed=
and also those who remain with us.=20
Amen.
Nagesh
Now let me share a beautiful short nazm of Amjad sahib that I heard from hi=
m in person more than twenty years ago. I loved it then, and still love it = just as much. I remember back then I had asked Amjad sahib to explain the m= eaning of the title. Also, during my last meeting with him in Fall 2022, I = had asked him to recite this poem impromptu in a private mehfil, and he sai=
d he couldn't recall it fully right at that moment.=20
Here it is:
inkeshaaf
na vaadaa hai koii tum se koii rishtaa nibhaane kaa
na koii aur hii dil meN iraadaa hai
kaii din se magar dil meN ajab uljhan si rehtii hai
na tum is daastaaN ke sarsarii kirdaar ho koii
na qisaa itnaa saadaa hai
ta'alluq jo maiN samjha thaa
kahiiN us se zyaadaa hai!
Amjad Islam Amjad
What a profound thought, and what an appropriate title.
_________Zoya
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Friends,
A couple of days ago, one of my dad's friends sent me some Punjabi ghazals =
of the legendary Urdu poet Zafar Iqbal. It was a pleasant surprise for me s= ince I had never read ZI's Punjabi poetry. In fact, dad's friend, who himse=
lf is a Punjabi poet, is now planning to collaborate with some people to ge=
t ZI's Punjabi ghazals printed in Gurmukhi script from Shahmukhi script. I = think it is a wonderful idea and will allow the people in Indian Punjab, mo=
st of whom can not read Urdu script, access to ZI's Punjabi poetry.
I have always been a huge Zafar Iqbal fan and suddenly started craving his = asha'ar, and have been reading his kuliyat again.
ab aap ZI kaa voh she'r suniye jo pichhle do din se mere zehn-o-dil par taa=
ri hai, aur maiN ne ise pehle kabhi post nahiiN kiyaa.
TakTakii baaNdh ke maiN dekh raha huuN jis ko
yeh bhi mumkin hai k vo saamne baiTha hi na ho!
This thought just wowed me.....maybe because there are times I can so relat=
e to it.......
___________Zoya
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sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2023 at 3:04:11=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,=20
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
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On Wednesday, June 7, 2023 at 9:03:43=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,=20
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking a= bout posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
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Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
muhabbat ek khushbuu hai humesha saath chalti hai,
koi insaan tanhaai mein tanha nahi rehta - Bashir Badr
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking about posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
I am good Mam, hope everyone else is doing good as well... I keep coming here almost everyday and it saddens me to see no conversation here... for me this platform is like a classroom where I get to learn something everyday...
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kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 1:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
shukriya, Mohit sahib, kyaa Khuub she'r pesh kiyaa hai aap ne. :-)
agar ijaazat ho to inheeN Hazrat ka aek halka-phulka qit'a sunaataa chaluuN=
. arz hai
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
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dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
shayad ma'ashuuq ki ghalati nahi hogi unko bhi
ishq ne Ghalib nikamma kar diya,
warna hum bhi aadmi the kaam ke :)
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa ga= ya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 2:31:18=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:=20
=20
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' si=
r
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa =
gaya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:=20
=20
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?=20
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?
Raj Kumar***
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 9:03:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko=20
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?=20
=20
Raj Kumar***
RK sahib, yeh she'r suniye, I find it kind of 'cute':
dil ki taKhtii pe naam hai teraa
yaaN nahiiN to kahaaN rahoge tum?! :)
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remind=
ed me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii
=20
R.K.
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrot=
e:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remi=
nded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------
***To change the topic,
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!
R.K.***
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On Sunday, 1 October 2023 at 05:15:26 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:=20
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wr=
ote:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this re=
minded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------=20
=20
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of subj= ect as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short space=
of time in recent days. But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my=
contribution.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe
Miir Babr Ali Anees
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On Saturday, September 30, 2023 at 11:15:26=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wro= te:
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
Hmmm, back to JE:
ab mirii koi zindagii hi nahiiN
ab bhi tum meri zindagii ho kyaa??
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On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of su=
bject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short spa=
ce of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.=20
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa
_________Zoya
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On Friday, 6 October 2023 at 21:19:55 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:=20
=20
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of =
subject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short s= pace of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones=
.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:=20
=20
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib=20
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa=20
=20
_________Zoya
bahut bahut shukriyah, Zoya saaHibah.
aap kaa pesh-kardah shi3r to Chemistry meN entropy kaa do misr3oN meN xulaa= sah hai!
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai
maut ke din qariib hote haiN
Nooh Narvi
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?
Naseer
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mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se
~ JE
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On Saturday, October 7, 2023 at 3:01:03=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai=20
maut ke din qariib hote haiN=20
=20
Nooh Narvi=20
Naseer sahib, baqaul Mohsin Naqvi:
vo zaKhm de ke mujhe hauslaa bhi detaa hai
ab is se baRh ke tabiiyat shanaas kyaa hogaa!
=20
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?=20
abhi chand roz pehle maiN ne Irfan sahib ko ek message kyaa tha, Khairiyat =
se haiiN, aur masruuf rehte haiN. maiN to unheN idhar aane ki guzaarish ka=
r hii diyaa karti huuN, aur kabhi kabhi vo sun bhi lete haiN. :)
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On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.
________Zoya
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On Sunday, October 15, 2023 at 10:26:55=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)=20
=20
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:=20
=20
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz=20
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)=20
=20
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.=20
=20
________Zoya
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,
Nagesh
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2023 at 4:53:11=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Nagesh wrote:
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,=20
Nagesh
Yes Nagesh sahib, absolutely, totally Meer! Dah! Did someone say Ghalib, wh=
at were they thinking?! :-)
I could try to pull one and say it was a bait to lure Prof RK back in this = thread! Well, it hooked you for sure. :)
Honestly, I have no idea how this error crept in, you have to believe I kno=
w better.
How have you been my friend? Hoping to see more of you around here.
__________Zoya
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'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
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On Wednesday, October 25, 2023 at 7:21:56=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de=20
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
***apni hastii meN jo maHduud hai, voh bhii mujrim
apni hastii se guzarnaa bhi sitam hotaa hai***
RK
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Sat Jan 13 08:34:09 2024
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nazr-e-Alup:
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 16:34:11 UTC, Zoya wrote:
nazr-e-Alup:=20
=20
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN=20
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations. Thank you=
for this shi3r. You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to p= ost in ALUP here after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's pos=
t. I have spoken with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to = have a word with you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time = for us to move over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obv= iously, this is everyone's personal decision.
Best Wishes,
Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai=20
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.=20
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I got = there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is b= etter now and I am back home.
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this ti= me. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has in=
store. Let us hope for the best!=20
Thank you for this shi3r.=20
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.=20
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP here=
after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spoken=
with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word with=
you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move o= ver to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this is = everyone's personal decision.=20
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotional=
reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time, = just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have n=
ot been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave me=
solace.
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am no=
t much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, I =
am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activate = it.
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages in = Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify that=
I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. Ju=
st wondering if anyone else is having such issues.
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer
More later,
________Zoya
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ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 17:44:00 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:=
=20
=20
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I go=
t there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is=
better now and I am back home.=20
=20
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this =
time. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has =
in store. Let us hope for the best!
Thank you for this shi3r.
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP he=
re after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spok=
en with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word wi=
th you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move=
over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this i=
s everyone's personal decision.
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotion=
al reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time=
, just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have=
not been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave =
me solace.=20
=20
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am =
not much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, =
I am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activat=
e it.=20
=20
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages i=
n Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify th=
at I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. = Just wondering if anyone else is having such issues.=20
=20
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer=20
=20
More later,=20
=20
________Zoya
Zoya SaaHiba, aadaab
I have been trying to post for weeks but have faced the same problem as you=
have encountered. Only today I was able to post a messge to you. Thank you=
for your prompt response. Even now, I am having difficulty writing this me= ssage. I couldn't open the link to UVR SaaHib's link to Option 2. Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 1:29:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali=20
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye!
aadaab arz hai, Shoaib sahib.
Happy 2024? :)
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After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes:
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 5:33:38=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes=
:=20
=20
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN=20
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Maj=
az himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Ma=
jaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
Amit, I totally agree.
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and r= emain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisite.
One more, in same behr:
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!=20
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2024 at 11:27:23=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps =
Majaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this news= group is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetr= y/c/1HAOY7PGIKE)
Amit, I totally agree.=20
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and=
remain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisit=
e.=20
=20
One more, in same behr:=20
=20
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN=20
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
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On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
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On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir =
wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" faci= lity. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah cou=
ld be a "taalaab"! :-)
Naseer
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On Friday, January 19, 2024 at 9:04:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:=20
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvi=
r wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.=20
=20
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" fa=
cility. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah c= ould be a "taalaab"! :-)=20
Naseer sahib, I noticed the 'pool' too. Well, it could be "taalaab", or it = could be a group of "maHbuubahs", I mean he could be 'pooling' a whole bunc=
h of them together! :-))
But we can't really pick on him for this, he has his tracks covered by post= ing 'phool' in Urdu script.
But 'maHbuubah'? Really?? I would have typed 'mehbuuba'. Would you let me g=
et away with that? :)
Talking about editing, I posted the above she'r from my long term memory, a=
nd am now thinking that it is actually 'nisbat', not 'raghbat' in the first=
misra. So, the edited version is:
shaayad huzuur se koii nisbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye!
_____________Zoya
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Friends,
aaj kal maiN ek arse ke baa'd dobaara 'Ishrat Afreen' ki kitaab paRh rahii huuN.
Absolutely brilliant, stark, contemporary female perspective.
she'r dekhiye:
ab ek rishta-e-benaam se use puujuuN
k por por vo paththar mujhe banaa hi gayaa!
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vo harf thaa na sitaaraa magar chamaktaa thaa
k mere zard gulaaboN ke biich mehkaa thaa
ye aur baat k kam_hauslaa to maiN bhii thii
magar ye sach hai use pehle maiN ne chaahaa thaa
na mere haath hinaaii na us ke Khwaab gulaab
to phir ye rang sa pairaahanoN pe kaisaa thaa
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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On Saturday, January 27, 2024 at 11:12:57=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub=20
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN=20
=20
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN=20
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN=20
=20
Ishrat Afreen=20
___________Zoya
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 3:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
waah!=20
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN kah= iiN
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN ja= ayeNge??
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 8:51:49=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w= rote:
tu nigaahoN ki zabaaN khoob samajhta ho ga
teri jaanib to uTha karti haiN aksar aaNkheN
Sure!
mere chehre pe ghazal likhti gaiiN
she'r kehtii hui aaNkheN us kii
So says Parveen Shakir.
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ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 4:07:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab=20
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
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yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
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hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer
I really hope this sher gets through...
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:27:37=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai=20
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
havaaeN jab ghaNTiyaaN bajaayeN to lauT aanaa
kisii ki aaNkheN diye jalaayeN to lauT aanaa!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:30:09=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar=20
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
This reminds me of a gem by Firaaq Goarkhpuri:
vo uTh bhi chuke kab ke, vo jaa bhi chuke kab ke
dil hai k 'Firaaq" ab tak daaman ko ChhuRaaye hai!
Disclaimer: Prof RK remembers a slightly different version of this she'r, w=
e have not been able to find it in any authentic printed source, the quest = continues.
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:41:14=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrot=
e:
yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay=20
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
bas jaan gayaa maiN tiri pehchaan yahii hai
tuu dil meN to aataa hai samajh meN nahiiN aata! :-)
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On Saturday, February 3, 2024 at 8:03:00=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Welcome back Mohit :)
hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,=20
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer=20
=20
I really hope this sher gets through...
I am reading Ishrat Afreen's book these days. This classic Meer she'r remin=
ds me of the one I just read yesterday, and liked:
muhabbatoN meN mashaqqat bahut thi so tum ne
mire Khayaal se shaayad mujhe thakaaya nahiiN
Beautiful thought, isn't it?
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JjinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
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On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is so=
'you'! :)
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 10:38:37=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w=
rote:=20
=20
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is =
so 'you'! :)=20
=20
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:=20
=20
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa=20
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 9:50:16=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
jii bilkul Shoaib sahib, 'chaahte haiN so aap kare haiN.......', "aap" as i=
n "ham". :)
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja=20
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
But of course, you know tabassum is my middle name. :-))
vaise bhi bichhaR kaun rahaa hai? I am moving with the gang to the alternat=
e Alup sites, varnaa phir aap kuchh yuuN na kehne lageN:
tum se bichhaR kar zindaa haiN
jaan, bahut sharmindaa haiN!
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
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On Wednesday 7 February 2024 at 20:39:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai=20
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN=20
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
Salaam,
I came across a Urdu nazm (poem) translated into English.
Poem is written by lyricist (poet) Sahir Ludhianvi from India in 1943 when =
he was 19 year old.
He wrote this for a female friend, Amrita Pritam.
This song is regarded to have been a masterpiece by lyricist Sahir Ludhianv=
i.
"Kabhi Kabhie Mere Dil Mein" (English: 'Sometimes...in My Heart') is a song=
from=20
1976 Bollywood movie Kabhi Kabhie (English title: Sometimes...)
Translated by Elizabeth Kurian =E2=80=98Mona=E2=80=99, a multilingual poet.
Enjoy...
Now and again the thought crosses my heart
That life may have brimmed with happiness
If spent in the soft shadow of your tresses;
The destiny of my existence...this darkness,=20
May have melted in the bright rays of your eyes
It wouldn=E2=80=99t be strange if, estranged from this world,=20
I lost myself in the brilliance of your beauty,=20
Immersed myself in the exquisite romance =20
Of your supple body and half closed eyes.
When the world=E2=80=99s bitterness called out to me,
I could drink the sweet nectar from your lips
When life shrieked and roamed bare-headed
I could hide in the shade of your thick tresses
***
=20
But this did not happen and now my condition is this
Neither you, nor your grief, nor your craving remains,
Life trudges along in such a fashion as though
It has no desire for the support of any soul
I have embraced entire humanity=E2=80=99s sorrows=20
I make my way through unfamiliar paths
Advancing towards me are frightening shadows
From the scary thorny jungles of life and death=20
No pathway, no purpose, no sign of radiance=20
My life drifts aimlessly in the barrenness
I shall be lost some day in this nothingness
I=E2=80=99m aware of this, my love, but nevertheless,
Now and again the thought crosses my heart...
(Translated by Elizabeth Kurian 'Mona')
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan wro= te:
Hi,
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are app= roaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this included =
in the group archives.
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam, = but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it h=
as gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more o=
f a one sided affair on her part.
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, details =
in a separate thread.
___________Zoya
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qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
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On Friday, February 16, 2024 at 2:08:40=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,=20
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
jinheN ham dekh kar jiite the 'Nasir'
vo log aankhoN se ojhal ho gaye haiN :(
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On Wednesday 14 February 2024 at 22:29:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan w=
rote:=20
=20
Hi,=20
=20
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are a=
pproaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this include=
d in the group archives.=20
=20
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam=
, but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it=
has gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more=
of a one sided affair on her part.=20
=20
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, detail=
s in a separate thread.=20
=20
___________Zoya
Hi,
Thanks for correction. I will try to post something whenever I could.
Regards,
Nasir
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So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tarah thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tarah :-((
__________Zoya
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 7:00:14=E2=80=AFAM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(=20
=20
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:=20
=20
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tar=
ah=20
thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tara=
h :-((=20
=20
__________Zoya
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 6:19:22=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,=20
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
Nice. This is one of those asha'ar that stayed with me the first time I hea=
rd it. I remember quoting it at the memorial service of a young Sikh, hands= ome, dedicated local sheriff's deputy who was gunned down by a criminal dur= ing a routine traffic stop. Horrific tragedy.
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Dear friends,
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so su= ccessful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all the=
asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group ov=
er the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having fo= und many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In pa= rticular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar Al=
am Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects o=
f Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life is=
so much richer because of them.
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this Us= enet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotra = sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting points=
. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here i=
s a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searcha= ble, a gold mine for any future visitors here.
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)
So friends,
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.
My love and regards to all,
__________Zoya
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On Thursday 22 February 2024 at 05:10:32 UTC, Zoya wrote:
Dear friends,=20
=20
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so =
successful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all t=
he asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group =
over the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having = found many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In = particular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar = Alam Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects=
of Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life =
is so much richer because of them.=20
=20
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this =
Usenet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotr=
a sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting poin= ts. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here=
is a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:=20
=20
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk=20
=20
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searc=
hable, a gold mine for any future visitors here.=20
=20
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:=20
=20
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa=20
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)=20
=20
So friends,=20
=20
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........=20
=20
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.=20
=20
My love and regards to all,=20
=20
__________Zoya
jaate ho, xudaa Haafiz, haaN itnii guzaarish hai
jab yaad ham aa jaa'eN, milne kii du3aa karnaa
Jaleel Maanakpuri
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And now continuing with Irfan Siddiqui:
Haal zaalim shikaarii ki suurat mujhe, vaqt ki ziin se baandh kar le chalaa mera maazii mire saath chaltaa rahaa duur tak ek majbuur maaN kii tarah
I can't think of any other term that would describe the situation here better than a 'majbuur maaN'. One of the reasons this she'r is also on my all time favorite list.
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Christmas Day:
ibn-e-Mariam huaa kare koii
mere dukh kii davaa kare koii
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On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positive=
" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best out =
of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in t= hem are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bring=
your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azmi = and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic s= ongs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashiq =
is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "Do = Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better known=
as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occasio=
ns where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.smul= e.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/121= 6696826_4241148234=20
Irfan :Abid:
Irfan sahib,
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago wh= ile channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of th=
e channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie ti=
ll you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and all=
! :)
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to m=
e, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about t=
he duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent ex= ample of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as U= rdu.
I love such random coincidences. :-)
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2022 at 5:55:27 PM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:=20
=20
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positi=
ve" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best ou=
t of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in=
them are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bri=
ng your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azm=
i and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic=
songs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashi=
q is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "D=
o Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better kno=
wn as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occas= ions where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.sm= ule.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/1= 216696826_4241148234
Irfan :Abid:=20
=20
Irfan sahib,=20
=20
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago =
while channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of = the channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie = till you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and a= ll! :)=20
=20
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to=
me, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about=
the duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent = example of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as=
Urdu.=20
=20
I love such random coincidences. :-)=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!
Thanks for sharing this! It's really interesting to know about these coinci= dences. And yes, "saaraa moraa kajraa" was perhaps the most famous song of = "Do Dil."
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (197=
9) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri. The thing I f= ind interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, almost selfish = plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Here is the link=
:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-yun-hi-sajegi= /1216696826_4268977991
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
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On Saturday, January 22, 2022 at 1:55:01 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!=20
aadaab Irfan sahib,
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (1=
979) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri.=20
Ahh, another one of those songs I am not familiar with. Great!=20
I had not thought about any Naqsh Lyallpuri in a while. Now that you mentio=
n his name, a few of his songs are coming to my mind, maybe you will record=
one of those in future, we'll see. :)
The thing I find interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, al= most selfish plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Her=
e is the link:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-= yun-hi-sajegi/1216696826_4268977991
You have aptly described the attitude of this song, kind of unusual. Also, = you have rendered in very well. I have not heard the original song, but I a=
m sure your version is pretty close to it. Thanks.
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa=20
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)=20
But of course! You know how I love Nasir Kazmi in general.=20
And now the she'r this song immediately reminded me of, from one of Zauq's=
most famous ghazals:
dunyaa ne kis kaa raah-e-fanaa meN diyaa hai saath
tum bhi chale chalo yuN hi jab tak chalii chale
This one is a pretty good fit too, right?=20
Already waiting for whatever surprise you will pull out of what I now call = your 'magician's bag'. :-)
________Zoya
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On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 23:18:22 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, May 10, 2022 at 9:42:28 AM UTC-7, Naseer wrote:=20
On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 05:13:20 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:=20
On Monday, May 9, 2022 at 8:54:42 PM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:=20
Mohit, aap ki is baat aur is she'r par to maiN bas yahii keh sakt=
i huuN:=20
=20
hazrat-e-Daagh, hai yeh kuucha-e-qaatil uThiye=20
jis jagah baiThte haiN aap to jam jaate haiN! :-)=20
aur mam is sher par mujhe ye sher yaad aaya=20
=20
ab to jaate hai=C3=B1 but-kade se 'meer'=20
phir mileNge agar =E1=B8=B3huda laaya :)=20
***aap kaheN ge "phir aa gayaa GhalatiyaaN nikaalne vaalaa". kyaa kar=
uuN, Mohit ji, aadat se majbuur huuN. :-)=20
=20
mere Khayaal meN, yahaaN "but-kade" ki bajaaye "mai-kade" hona chaahi=
ye. Please double check!=20
=20
R.K.***=20
Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab 3arz hai=20
=20
Mohit SaaHib kaa tahriir-kardah shi3r durust hai. yih shi3r Meer ke dii=
vaan-i-avval kii Ghazal no.85 kaa maqta3 hai.=20
=20
aap kaa xair-andesh,=20
Naseer
***janaab Mohit sahib v Naseer sahib:=20
=20
aap donoN Hazraat ka is Khush-Khabari ke liye shukriya k --------- ab ki =
baar ReKhta durust Thaihraa! :-)=20
=20
B/W, arz hai maiN ne roz-e-avval hi se is misr'e ko lafz "mai-kade" ke sa=
ath sunaa hai. aaj pahli baar is baat ka aHsaas hu'aa k yahaaN asl lafz "bu= t-kade" hai. mere paas aek kitaab hai jis ka unvaan hai "zarb-ul-masal ash'= aar". is kitaab ko tarteeb dii hai mohtarma Sarvat Sultaana Sarvat ne. is k= itaab meN yeh she'r lafz "mai-kade" ke saath darj hai. mere liye yeh kahna = mushkil hai k yeh saaHiba kahaaN tak mo'tabar haiN.=20
=20
duusri baat yeh k ham ALUPers ne ReKhta ko kayee baar Ghalat paaya hai. a=
lbatta, mujhe yaqeen hai k Naseer sahib ka javaab zaruur kisi mo'tabar maaK= hiz par mabni hoga.=20
=20
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
moHtaram Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab.
Huzuur is meN hamaaraa kyaa qusuur hai agar aap is shi3r ko roz-i-avval hii=
se Ghalat sun rahe haiN! :-) muHtaramah Sarvat Sultanah, haiN to professor=
lekin achchaa hotaa vuh is shi3r kii siHHat par thoRii taftiish kar letiiN=
! mere mu3tabir hone par aap ko rattii-bhar shakk nahiiN honaa chaahiye lek=
in agar aap kaa iimaan qadre kam-zor hai to bandah aap kii xidmat-i-3aaliya=
h meN kuchh subuut pesh kartaa hai.
jis kitaab se maiN ne is shi3r ko talaash kiyaa, us kaa naam hai "kulliyaat= -i-Meer" aur ise Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi ne murattab kiyaa hai aur taraqqii-i-U= rdu bureau, na'ii sihlii ne 1983 meN shaa'i3 kiyaa hai. is ke shuruu3 meN c= hand daanishvaroN ne apne mazaamiin shaamil kiye haiN jin meN aap ke "guruu=
" janaab-i-Professor Raghupati Sahay "Firaq" bhii jalvah-afroz haiN. diigar=
Hazraat haiN, Professor Rasheed Ahmed Siddiqi, Qazi Abdul Waduud, Professo=
r Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor aur Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi.
Professor Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor farmaate haiN, "Meer kii kulliyaat kaa vuh edi= tion jo Naval Kishor Press ne aaxirii baar shaa'i3 kiaa thaa aur jis kii si= HHat Abdulbari Aasi ne kii thii ab kahiiN dastyaab nahiiN hotaa (1). Ibadat=
Barelvi ne Pakistan se kulliyaat-i-Meer kaa ek nayaa edition ek taviil mu= qaddime ke saath shaa'i3 kiyaa thaa, us ke matn meN bahut sii GhalatiyaaN r= aah paa ga'ii thiiN magar yih bhii ab Hindustan meN nahiiN mil saktaa (2). =
is liye kulliyaat-i-Meer kii ek aise mustanad edition kii zaruurat saxtii s=
e maHsuus kii jaa rahii thii jo diidah-zeb bhii ho. xushii kii baat hai kih=
zer-i-nazar edition is zaruurat ko baRii Had tak puuraa kartaa hai. vaise = adabii dunyaa meN Harf-i-aaxir to ko'ii bhii nahiiN hotaa."(3)
(1) In the 1941 edition, this shi3r is give as;
buto jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(2) In the 1958 edition, the shi3r is..
ab to jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(3) This is the book I've quoted from and the shi3r is as in (2) above.
In 1960, Sayyid Ja'fri compiled "diivaan-i-Meer" in which the shi3r as per = (2). Later in 1972, Sayyid Ihtisham Hussain compiled a kulliyaat in which t= his shi3r is also as per (2).
The earliest nusxah for "diivaan-i-Meer" is the "nusxah-i-Mahmoodabad" writ= ten down in 1203 hijrii (1788), twenty three years prior to Meer's death. = This has been compiled by Doctor Akbar Haidari. AND the shi3r in question i=
s quoted as:
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(emphasis mine!:-))
I think it makes more sense for "xudaa" to bring Meer back to a "but-kadah"=
, than to a "mai-kadah". After all, "xudaa" has to compete with the other x= udaas in the but-kadah!
Naseer=20
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
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Gentlemen, aadaab,
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
baat butkade se chali thi aur maiKhaane se hoti hui phir butkade par hii Khatm ho rahi hai, to maiN ne sochaa Riyaz Khairabadi kaa yeh she'r aap sab ko sunaati chaluuN:
dunyaa se alag ham ne maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa
maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa, Allah ka ghar dekhaa!
Naseer
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.
________Zoya
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On Thursday, 19 May 2022 at 02:10:06 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na=
maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.=20
=20
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.=20
=20
________Zoya
No, you'e misunderstood what I was trying to say, Zoya SaaHibah.
Raj Kumar SaaHib wrote "aHsaas" and I am suggesting to him (baRii 3aajizii =
ke saath) that the word is iHsaas, just like iqraar, inkaar, insaaf (all wi=
th alif zer and not alif zabar). Another word that is similarly mispronounc=
ed is "iHsaan". I pray and hope all is well with Professor SaaHib.
Naseer
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ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
On Thursday, August 11, 2022 at 6:30:13 PM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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On Thursday, September 1, 2022 at 10:58:03 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
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haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
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On Saturday, September 3, 2022 at 9:50:48 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
goya:
aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
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aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2022 at 9:58:14 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
Nice. Mohit, yeh she'r mujhe bhi pasand hai. ise maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud Rahat Indori sahib kii zubaani sunaa tha, un kaa sunaane kaa andaaz bhi bahut lutf_aNdoz tha.
aur is she'r ko sun kar aksar mere zehn meN Bahir Badr kaa yeh she'r aayaa kartaa hai:
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back in a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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On Thursday, September 8, 2022 at 12:41:20 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,=20
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back i=
n a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
Mohit, nice attitude in this she'r. And it is perfectly in meter, no worrie=
s. :)
Now that the Covid curve is on a decreasing path, the still-masked-me is ge= tting more comfortable with some indoor gatherings. Last night I attended a=
mehfil featuring a classical singer, who is a disciple of Shanti Hiranand = who had trained directly under the legendary Begam Akhtar. It was amazing s= inging, Thumri, daadra, kajri, awadhi folk and best of all some Begam Akhta=
r ghazals that are like nursery rhymes for me, I spent my entire childhood,=
starting at about age two, listening to those timeless compositions!
ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn=
meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
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ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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On Sunday, September 11, 2022 at 9:39:50 AM UTC-6, Zoya wrote:
<snip>
=20
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa=20
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho ki=
na yaad ho=20
Dinesh
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 2:56:07 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
Yes, many different singers have sung this ghazal over the years, but I am particularly biased towards Begam Akhtar version, my first love. :)
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
hakiim Momin kii is ghazal kaa zikr ho rahaa hai, phir yeh she'r to laazim hai:
tum mire paas hote ho goyaa
jab koii duusraa nahiiN hotaa
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 7:19:44 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...=20
=20
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho =
ki na yaad ho=20
=20
Dinesh
Dinesh sahib,=20
Very interesting that you have brought up this particular she'r. Every time=
I read this ghazal, I have always paused over this she'r. I find it sort o=
f intriguing, perhaps because I find this qaafia to be somewhat unexpected.=
I mean unless I have already uttered the "baat", how would I know that 'tu= mhaare jii ko burii lagii'? This is the ambiguity that makes me pause and p= erhaps expect the qaafia to be different. Maybe something like "bayaaN se p= ehle hi Toknaa", like you are about to say something insensitive, the other=
person sees it coming and stops you in your tracks.=20
Of course, I dare not question any she'r of Momin, I am totally unqualified=
to do so. However, I wanted to share my thoughts on this one, since I have=
pondered over it more than once. Let us see if I am making sense to anyone=
else, including you.
________Zoya
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ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=
=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad h=
o ki na yaad ho=20
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it = even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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I interpret in this way
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain...
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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aaj ka sher
sunne wale ghaNtoN sunte rehte haiN,
mera fasana sabka fasana lagta hai - Kaif Bhopali
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 6:08:49 PM UTC-4, Zoya wrote:
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bu=
r=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad=
ho ki na yaad ho
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.=20
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:=20
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot i=
t even before you responded, do you still remember that??"=20
=20
I do, what a loss! :-)
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it's =
in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means "=
to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2022 at 10:16:19 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I interpret in this way=20
=20
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other =
one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain
On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 12:47:01 AM UTC-5,
ami...@gmail.com wrot=
e:
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it'=
s in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means = "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at fa=
ce value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first glan= ce, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first pe= rson or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it co= uld be either one?=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I believe=
is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are few = and far between these days.
____________Zoya
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I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...=20
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why i=
t's in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only mean=
s "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)=20
=20
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.=20
=20
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at =
face value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first gl= ance, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first = person or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it = could be either one?=20
=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I belie=
ve is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.=20
=20
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are fe=
w and far between these days.=20
=20
ALUP must be saying
meharbaaN ho ke bula lo mujhe chaho jis waqt
maiN gaya waqt nahiN hooN ki phir aa bhi naa sakooN :)
____________Zoya
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On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 9:43:59 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote=20
=20
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,=20
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa:
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About 1=
5 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically trai= ned Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghulam=
Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu po= etry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring him=
to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during th=
e ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for m=
e. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also told =
me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorded = numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always t= hink of it very fondly.
Cheerio,
___________Zoya
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I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewing = him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself writ=
e, then he recited his own sher,=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I stil=
l have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tragi=
c car accident... and that's today's sher too :)
=20
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa=
:=20
=20
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa=20
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise=20
=20
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About=
15 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically tr= ained Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghul=
am Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu = poetry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring h=
im to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during = the ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for=
me. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also tol=
d me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorde=
d numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always=
think of it very fondly.=20
=20
Cheerio,=20
=20
___________Zoya
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On Tuesday, September 20, 2022 at 10:08:21 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewin=
g him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself wr= ite, then he recited his own sher,=20
=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,=20
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,=20
=20
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,=20
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great question,=
I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one has=
ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I bet = most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I st=
ill have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tra= gic car accident...=20
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'chiT=
hi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, al= ways gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagjit=
Singh:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
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This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great questio=
n, I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one h=
as ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I be=
t most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though I =
am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn't=
have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tune= '=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I =
still have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a t= ragic car accident...
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'ch=
iThi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, = always gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagj=
it Singh:=20
=20
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and to=
be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to be=
here...=20
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya=20
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though =
I am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn=
't have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tu= ne'=20
=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...
What a loss, I hope the recording can be found in some archives somewhere. = The good thing is you at least preserved the asha'ar he quoted. This remind=
s me, I had recorded an amazing interview with Amjad sahib for Mehfil-e-Suk= han once, don't have it anymore. Maybe Shoaib sahib has it archived, I'll h= ave to ask him. I am generally bad about preserving important pictures/reco= rdings. But as you said, we have the memories! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and =
to be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to =
be here...=20
I agree, Jagjit Singh singlehandedly brought ghazals to masses in India, hu=
ge contribution. His selection of poetry in relatively simple Urdu helped t= oo. There is a sort of vacuum since he passed away.
=20
_________Zoya
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya
Ahhhhh JE! One of my favorite asha'ar by one of my favorite poets.
aur ab aap yeh she'r suniye, Ahmad Mushtaq kaa, another one of my favorites:
abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
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abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
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On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 10:42:11 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
Profound. 'aavaaz meN silvaT' is so typical Gulzar, kind of like 'aaNkhoN kii Khushbu'.
is vaqt besaaKhtaa mere zehn meN Azhar Inayati kaa ek she'r aa rahaa hai. yeh un asha'ar meN se hai jo ek baar paRhne/sun_ne par hii mujhe hameshaa ke liye yaad reh jaate haiN:
kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
_________Zoya
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kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2022 at 1:28:28 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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On Friday, September 30, 2022 at 10:18:04 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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On Saturday, October 1, 2022 at 9:36:12 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2022 at 1:40:55 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
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Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
this reminds me of a sher I read when I was probably 13-14 years old, not sure if the meter etc is right... but here it goes
tujhe bhula ke tere khat jala diye maine,
lutaa ke apna asasa udaas tha maiN bhi...
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apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
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roshni aadhi idhar aadhi udhar,
ik diyaa rakha hai deewaroN ke beech - Obaidullah Aleem
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vO karam karte haiN ya hum pe sitam karte haiN
is nazar se unheiN hum ne kabhi dekha hi nahiiN
Shamiim Jaipuri
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yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
On Thursday, December 1, 2022 at 10:13:45 AM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:22:29 PM UTC+5:30, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN,
kabhi to wo aaNkheiN wo rukhsaar padhna...
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Wishing everyone a Happy New Year here... hoping everyone is doing fine.
ik ajnabi ke haath meiN de kar humara haath,
lo saath chhodne laga aakHir ye saal bhi - Hafeez Merathhi
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adaab dosto,
Here I am, after a relatively long absence from the group. Hope everyone is doing well.
On this Valentine's Day, let me quote my friend Amjad Islam Amjad sahib.
Amjad sahib muhabbat kii nazmoN ke betaaj baadshah the.
"muhabbat aisa daryaa hai
k baarish ruuThh bhii jaaye
to paanii kam nahiiN hotaa"
_______Zoya
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2022 at 7:41:20 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
Well, Dinesh sahib, in that case, try harder! :)
baqaul Iftikhar Arif:
kare kalaam jo mujh se to mere lehje meN
maiN chup rahuuN to mere tevaroN kaa saathii ho!
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On Wednesday, November 30, 2022 at 10:43:45 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
Ahhh Mohit, one of my all time favorites, I call it a gem. And this always reminds me of another 'gem', by our very own Mohib:
itni muddat Khafaa nahiiN rehtaa
voh mujhe bhuul hii gayaa hogaa :(
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On Saturday, December 3, 2022 at 11:58:01 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehandedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii haiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!
Yes? :)
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:52:29 AM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
aadaab arz hai Shoaib sahib. is baat par to aap kii nazr yeh she'r:
ilm-o-fan ke diivane, aashiqii se Darte haiN
zindagii ke KhwaahaN haiN, zindagii se Darte haiN!
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Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometimes = even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group, a=
nd I honestly tried searching for that as well :) ek ghabrahat si hone lagi=
thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school chhodna pade... bahut ba= hut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon... 13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthda=
y tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/Devnagri meiN hai to pata nahi = sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-sh= er-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
=20
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehan=
dedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,=20
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii h=
aiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo=
maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:=20
=20
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa=20
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!=20
=20
Yes? :)
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2023 at 11:05:35 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometime=
s even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group,=
and I honestly tried searching for that as well :)=20
Awww Mohit, of course not. Alup is like a home to me, of course there is no=
new group, at least not that I am aware of. In any case, I am not at all a= ctive on other social media.=20
ek ghabrahat si hone lagi thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school=
chhodna pade... bahut bahut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon...=20
I understand, I can actually relate to that. I get worried too if long time=
Alup friends are absent for extended periods of time. In future, if you ha=
ve any such concerns, feel free to reach out to me via email. Our group is=
so small now, at least I should try to participate somewhat regularly.
13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthday tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/De= vnagri meiN hai to pata nahi sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
=20
https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-=
sher-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html=20
Thanks for the link. I enjoyed reading your article. Very well written. Kee=
p up the good work.
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua=20
=20
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,=20
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
baat Faiz kii ho rahi hai, to yeh suniye:
jab tujhe yaad kar liyaa subH mehak mehak uThhii
jab tiraa gham jaga liyaa raat machal machal gayii
______Zoya
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Friends,
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably w= ell. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer an= ymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Alup=
is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to keep = the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occasi= onally, if not regularly, in future.
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his own:
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.
_________Zoya
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On Friday, February 24, 2023 at 9:18:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
Friends,=20
=20
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably=
well. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer = anymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Al=
up is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to kee=
p the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occa= sionally, if not regularly, in future.=20
=20
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his ow=
n:=20
=20
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham=20
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye=20
=20
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.=20
=20
_________Zoya
I, too, am returning after a long absence. News of Jamil Sahib's passing c= ame as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted, he was universally admired fo=
r his great knowledge and his willingness to share his wisdom with those wh=
o would most benefit from it - laypersons like me. I am also saddened to h= ear of Aslam Sahib's passing. On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib=
's condition makes an already dark day even darker. My prayers for his qui=
ck recovery.
Nagesh
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On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
I, too, am returning after a long absence.=20
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted,=
he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness to = share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons lik=
e me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. His = contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.=20
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the group=
over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of Bol= lywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definitel=
y creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already d= ark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.=20
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come b= ack, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit worr= ying so much.=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one of= ten, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently quo= ted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and e= ven he loved it!
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.
Nagesh
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.
_________Zoya
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2023 at 5:41:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:=
=20
=20
I, too, am returning after a long absence.
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib note=
d, he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness t=
o share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons l= ike me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. Hi=
s contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the gro=
up over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of B= ollywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definit= ely creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already=
dark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come=
back, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit wo= rrying so much.=20
=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one =
often, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently q= uoted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and=
even he loved it!=20
=20
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii=20
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN=20
=20
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.=20
=20
Nagesh=20
=20
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya Sahiba:
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew hi=
m and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) a= necdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahib.
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed = and also those who remain with us.
Nagesh
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On Friday, March 3, 2023 at 10:50:50=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
Zoya Sahiba:=20
=20
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew h=
im and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) = anecdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.=20
Well put Nagesh sahib, I can echo this.
=20
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahi=
b.=20
Ahhh, you mean my friend Amjad sahib. Thank you. I still haven't absorbed t=
he loss fully, it is global as well as personal.
=20
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed=
and also those who remain with us.=20
Amen.
Nagesh
Now let me share a beautiful short nazm of Amjad sahib that I heard from hi=
m in person more than twenty years ago. I loved it then, and still love it = just as much. I remember back then I had asked Amjad sahib to explain the m= eaning of the title. Also, during my last meeting with him in Fall 2022, I = had asked him to recite this poem impromptu in a private mehfil, and he sai=
d he couldn't recall it fully right at that moment.=20
Here it is:
inkeshaaf
na vaadaa hai koii tum se koii rishtaa nibhaane kaa
na koii aur hii dil meN iraadaa hai
kaii din se magar dil meN ajab uljhan si rehtii hai
na tum is daastaaN ke sarsarii kirdaar ho koii
na qisaa itnaa saadaa hai
ta'alluq jo maiN samjha thaa
kahiiN us se zyaadaa hai!
Amjad Islam Amjad
What a profound thought, and what an appropriate title.
_________Zoya
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Friends,
A couple of days ago, one of my dad's friends sent me some Punjabi ghazals =
of the legendary Urdu poet Zafar Iqbal. It was a pleasant surprise for me s= ince I had never read ZI's Punjabi poetry. In fact, dad's friend, who himse=
lf is a Punjabi poet, is now planning to collaborate with some people to ge=
t ZI's Punjabi ghazals printed in Gurmukhi script from Shahmukhi script. I = think it is a wonderful idea and will allow the people in Indian Punjab, mo=
st of whom can not read Urdu script, access to ZI's Punjabi poetry.
I have always been a huge Zafar Iqbal fan and suddenly started craving his = asha'ar, and have been reading his kuliyat again.
ab aap ZI kaa voh she'r suniye jo pichhle do din se mere zehn-o-dil par taa=
ri hai, aur maiN ne ise pehle kabhi post nahiiN kiyaa.
TakTakii baaNdh ke maiN dekh raha huuN jis ko
yeh bhi mumkin hai k vo saamne baiTha hi na ho!
This thought just wowed me.....maybe because there are times I can so relat=
e to it.......
___________Zoya
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sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2023 at 3:04:11=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,=20
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
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On Wednesday, June 7, 2023 at 9:03:43=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,=20
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking a= bout posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
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Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
muhabbat ek khushbuu hai humesha saath chalti hai,
koi insaan tanhaai mein tanha nahi rehta - Bashir Badr
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking about posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
I am good Mam, hope everyone else is doing good as well... I keep coming here almost everyday and it saddens me to see no conversation here... for me this platform is like a classroom where I get to learn something everyday...
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kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 1:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
shukriya, Mohit sahib, kyaa Khuub she'r pesh kiyaa hai aap ne. :-)
agar ijaazat ho to inheeN Hazrat ka aek halka-phulka qit'a sunaataa chaluuN=
. arz hai
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
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dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
shayad ma'ashuuq ki ghalati nahi hogi unko bhi
ishq ne Ghalib nikamma kar diya,
warna hum bhi aadmi the kaam ke :)
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa ga= ya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 2:31:18=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:=20
=20
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' si=
r
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa =
gaya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:=20
=20
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?=20
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?
Raj Kumar***
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 9:03:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko=20
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?=20
=20
Raj Kumar***
RK sahib, yeh she'r suniye, I find it kind of 'cute':
dil ki taKhtii pe naam hai teraa
yaaN nahiiN to kahaaN rahoge tum?! :)
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remind=
ed me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii
=20
R.K.
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrot=
e:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remi=
nded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------
***To change the topic,
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!
R.K.***
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On Sunday, 1 October 2023 at 05:15:26 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:=20
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wr=
ote:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this re=
minded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------=20
=20
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of subj= ect as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short space=
of time in recent days. But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my=
contribution.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe
Miir Babr Ali Anees
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On Saturday, September 30, 2023 at 11:15:26=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wro= te:
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
Hmmm, back to JE:
ab mirii koi zindagii hi nahiiN
ab bhi tum meri zindagii ho kyaa??
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On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of su=
bject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short spa=
ce of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.=20
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa
_________Zoya
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On Friday, 6 October 2023 at 21:19:55 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:=20
=20
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of =
subject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short s= pace of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones=
.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:=20
=20
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib=20
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa=20
=20
_________Zoya
bahut bahut shukriyah, Zoya saaHibah.
aap kaa pesh-kardah shi3r to Chemistry meN entropy kaa do misr3oN meN xulaa= sah hai!
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai
maut ke din qariib hote haiN
Nooh Narvi
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?
Naseer
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mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se
~ JE
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On Saturday, October 7, 2023 at 3:01:03=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai=20
maut ke din qariib hote haiN=20
=20
Nooh Narvi=20
Naseer sahib, baqaul Mohsin Naqvi:
vo zaKhm de ke mujhe hauslaa bhi detaa hai
ab is se baRh ke tabiiyat shanaas kyaa hogaa!
=20
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?=20
abhi chand roz pehle maiN ne Irfan sahib ko ek message kyaa tha, Khairiyat =
se haiiN, aur masruuf rehte haiN. maiN to unheN idhar aane ki guzaarish ka=
r hii diyaa karti huuN, aur kabhi kabhi vo sun bhi lete haiN. :)
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On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.
________Zoya
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On Sunday, October 15, 2023 at 10:26:55=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)=20
=20
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:=20
=20
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz=20
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)=20
=20
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.=20
=20
________Zoya
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,
Nagesh
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2023 at 4:53:11=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Nagesh wrote:
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,=20
Nagesh
Yes Nagesh sahib, absolutely, totally Meer! Dah! Did someone say Ghalib, wh=
at were they thinking?! :-)
I could try to pull one and say it was a bait to lure Prof RK back in this = thread! Well, it hooked you for sure. :)
Honestly, I have no idea how this error crept in, you have to believe I kno=
w better.
How have you been my friend? Hoping to see more of you around here.
__________Zoya
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'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
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On Wednesday, October 25, 2023 at 7:21:56=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de=20
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
***apni hastii meN jo maHduud hai, voh bhii mujrim
apni hastii se guzarnaa bhi sitam hotaa hai***
RK
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nazr-e-Alup:
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 16:34:11 UTC, Zoya wrote:
nazr-e-Alup:=20
=20
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN=20
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations. Thank you=
for this shi3r. You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to p= ost in ALUP here after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's pos=
t. I have spoken with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to = have a word with you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time = for us to move over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obv= iously, this is everyone's personal decision.
Best Wishes,
Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai=20
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.=20
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I got = there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is b= etter now and I am back home.
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this ti= me. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has in=
store. Let us hope for the best!=20
Thank you for this shi3r.=20
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.=20
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP here=
after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spoken=
with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word with=
you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move o= ver to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this is = everyone's personal decision.=20
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotional=
reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time, = just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have n=
ot been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave me=
solace.
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am no=
t much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, I =
am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activate = it.
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages in = Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify that=
I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. Ju=
st wondering if anyone else is having such issues.
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer
More later,
________Zoya
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ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 17:44:00 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:=
=20
=20
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I go=
t there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is=
better now and I am back home.=20
=20
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this =
time. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has =
in store. Let us hope for the best!
Thank you for this shi3r.
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP he=
re after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spok=
en with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word wi=
th you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move=
over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this i=
s everyone's personal decision.
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotion=
al reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time=
, just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have=
not been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave =
me solace.=20
=20
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am =
not much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, =
I am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activat=
e it.=20
=20
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages i=
n Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify th=
at I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. = Just wondering if anyone else is having such issues.=20
=20
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer=20
=20
More later,=20
=20
________Zoya
Zoya SaaHiba, aadaab
I have been trying to post for weeks but have faced the same problem as you=
have encountered. Only today I was able to post a messge to you. Thank you=
for your prompt response. Even now, I am having difficulty writing this me= ssage. I couldn't open the link to UVR SaaHib's link to Option 2. Naseer
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Sun Jan 14 14:55:04 2024
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 1:29:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali=20
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye!
aadaab arz hai, Shoaib sahib.
Happy 2024? :)
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Tue Jan 16 14:33:37 2024
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After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes:
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 5:33:38=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes=
:=20
=20
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN=20
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Maj=
az himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Wed Jan 17 20:27:22 2024
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Ma=
jaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
Amit, I totally agree.
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and r= emain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisite.
One more, in same behr:
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!=20
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2024 at 11:27:23=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps =
Majaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this news= group is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetr= y/c/1HAOY7PGIKE)
Amit, I totally agree.=20
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and=
remain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisit=
e.=20
=20
One more, in same behr:=20
=20
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN=20
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
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On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
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On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir =
wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" faci= lity. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah cou=
ld be a "taalaab"! :-)
Naseer
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On Friday, January 19, 2024 at 9:04:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:=20
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvi=
r wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.=20
=20
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" fa=
cility. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah c= ould be a "taalaab"! :-)=20
Naseer sahib, I noticed the 'pool' too. Well, it could be "taalaab", or it = could be a group of "maHbuubahs", I mean he could be 'pooling' a whole bunc=
h of them together! :-))
But we can't really pick on him for this, he has his tracks covered by post= ing 'phool' in Urdu script.
But 'maHbuubah'? Really?? I would have typed 'mehbuuba'. Would you let me g=
et away with that? :)
Talking about editing, I posted the above she'r from my long term memory, a=
nd am now thinking that it is actually 'nisbat', not 'raghbat' in the first=
misra. So, the edited version is:
shaayad huzuur se koii nisbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye!
_____________Zoya
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Friends,
aaj kal maiN ek arse ke baa'd dobaara 'Ishrat Afreen' ki kitaab paRh rahii huuN.
Absolutely brilliant, stark, contemporary female perspective.
she'r dekhiye:
ab ek rishta-e-benaam se use puujuuN
k por por vo paththar mujhe banaa hi gayaa!
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vo harf thaa na sitaaraa magar chamaktaa thaa
k mere zard gulaaboN ke biich mehkaa thaa
ye aur baat k kam_hauslaa to maiN bhii thii
magar ye sach hai use pehle maiN ne chaahaa thaa
na mere haath hinaaii na us ke Khwaab gulaab
to phir ye rang sa pairaahanoN pe kaisaa thaa
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Sat Jan 27 20:12:56 2024
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kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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On Saturday, January 27, 2024 at 11:12:57=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub=20
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN=20
=20
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN=20
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN=20
=20
Ishrat Afreen=20
___________Zoya
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 3:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
waah!=20
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN kah= iiN
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN ja= ayeNge??
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 8:51:49=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w= rote:
tu nigaahoN ki zabaaN khoob samajhta ho ga
teri jaanib to uTha karti haiN aksar aaNkheN
Sure!
mere chehre pe ghazal likhti gaiiN
she'r kehtii hui aaNkheN us kii
So says Parveen Shakir.
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ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 4:07:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab=20
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 4:33:35=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:=20
=20
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.=20
=20
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN k=
ahiiN=20
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN =
jaayeNge??
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
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yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
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hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer
I really hope this sher gets through...
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:27:37=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai=20
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
havaaeN jab ghaNTiyaaN bajaayeN to lauT aanaa
kisii ki aaNkheN diye jalaayeN to lauT aanaa!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:30:09=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar=20
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
This reminds me of a gem by Firaaq Goarkhpuri:
vo uTh bhi chuke kab ke, vo jaa bhi chuke kab ke
dil hai k 'Firaaq" ab tak daaman ko ChhuRaaye hai!
Disclaimer: Prof RK remembers a slightly different version of this she'r, w=
e have not been able to find it in any authentic printed source, the quest = continues.
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:41:14=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrot=
e:
yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay=20
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
bas jaan gayaa maiN tiri pehchaan yahii hai
tuu dil meN to aataa hai samajh meN nahiiN aata! :-)
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On Saturday, February 3, 2024 at 8:03:00=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Welcome back Mohit :)
hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,=20
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer=20
=20
I really hope this sher gets through...
I am reading Ishrat Afreen's book these days. This classic Meer she'r remin=
ds me of the one I just read yesterday, and liked:
muhabbatoN meN mashaqqat bahut thi so tum ne
mire Khayaal se shaayad mujhe thakaaya nahiiN
Beautiful thought, isn't it?
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JjinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
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On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is so=
'you'! :)
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 10:38:37=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w=
rote:=20
=20
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is =
so 'you'! :)=20
=20
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:=20
=20
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa=20
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 9:50:16=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
jii bilkul Shoaib sahib, 'chaahte haiN so aap kare haiN.......', "aap" as i=
n "ham". :)
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja=20
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
But of course, you know tabassum is my middle name. :-))
vaise bhi bichhaR kaun rahaa hai? I am moving with the gang to the alternat=
e Alup sites, varnaa phir aap kuchh yuuN na kehne lageN:
tum se bichhaR kar zindaa haiN
jaan, bahut sharmindaa haiN!
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
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On Wednesday 7 February 2024 at 20:39:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai=20
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN=20
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
Salaam,
I came across a Urdu nazm (poem) translated into English.
Poem is written by lyricist (poet) Sahir Ludhianvi from India in 1943 when =
he was 19 year old.
He wrote this for a female friend, Amrita Pritam.
This song is regarded to have been a masterpiece by lyricist Sahir Ludhianv=
i.
"Kabhi Kabhie Mere Dil Mein" (English: 'Sometimes...in My Heart') is a song=
from=20
1976 Bollywood movie Kabhi Kabhie (English title: Sometimes...)
Translated by Elizabeth Kurian =E2=80=98Mona=E2=80=99, a multilingual poet.
Enjoy...
Now and again the thought crosses my heart
That life may have brimmed with happiness
If spent in the soft shadow of your tresses;
The destiny of my existence...this darkness,=20
May have melted in the bright rays of your eyes
It wouldn=E2=80=99t be strange if, estranged from this world,=20
I lost myself in the brilliance of your beauty,=20
Immersed myself in the exquisite romance =20
Of your supple body and half closed eyes.
When the world=E2=80=99s bitterness called out to me,
I could drink the sweet nectar from your lips
When life shrieked and roamed bare-headed
I could hide in the shade of your thick tresses
***
=20
But this did not happen and now my condition is this
Neither you, nor your grief, nor your craving remains,
Life trudges along in such a fashion as though
It has no desire for the support of any soul
I have embraced entire humanity=E2=80=99s sorrows=20
I make my way through unfamiliar paths
Advancing towards me are frightening shadows
From the scary thorny jungles of life and death=20
No pathway, no purpose, no sign of radiance=20
My life drifts aimlessly in the barrenness
I shall be lost some day in this nothingness
I=E2=80=99m aware of this, my love, but nevertheless,
Now and again the thought crosses my heart...
(Translated by Elizabeth Kurian 'Mona')
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan wro= te:
Hi,
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are app= roaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this included =
in the group archives.
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam, = but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it h=
as gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more o=
f a one sided affair on her part.
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, details =
in a separate thread.
___________Zoya
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qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
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On Friday, February 16, 2024 at 2:08:40=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,=20
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
jinheN ham dekh kar jiite the 'Nasir'
vo log aankhoN se ojhal ho gaye haiN :(
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On Wednesday 14 February 2024 at 22:29:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan w=
rote:=20
=20
Hi,=20
=20
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are a=
pproaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this include=
d in the group archives.=20
=20
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam=
, but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it=
has gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more=
of a one sided affair on her part.=20
=20
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, detail=
s in a separate thread.=20
=20
___________Zoya
Hi,
Thanks for correction. I will try to post something whenever I could.
Regards,
Nasir
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So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tarah thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tarah :-((
__________Zoya
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 7:00:14=E2=80=AFAM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(=20
=20
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:=20
=20
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tar=
ah=20
thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tara=
h :-((=20
=20
__________Zoya
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 6:19:22=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,=20
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
Nice. This is one of those asha'ar that stayed with me the first time I hea=
rd it. I remember quoting it at the memorial service of a young Sikh, hands= ome, dedicated local sheriff's deputy who was gunned down by a criminal dur= ing a routine traffic stop. Horrific tragedy.
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Dear friends,
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so su= ccessful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all the=
asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group ov=
er the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having fo= und many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In pa= rticular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar Al=
am Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects o=
f Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life is=
so much richer because of them.
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this Us= enet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotra = sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting points=
. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here i=
s a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searcha= ble, a gold mine for any future visitors here.
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)
So friends,
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.
My love and regards to all,
__________Zoya
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On Thursday 22 February 2024 at 05:10:32 UTC, Zoya wrote:
Dear friends,=20
=20
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so =
successful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all t=
he asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group =
over the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having = found many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In = particular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar = Alam Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects=
of Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life =
is so much richer because of them.=20
=20
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this =
Usenet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotr=
a sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting poin= ts. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here=
is a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:=20
=20
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk=20
=20
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searc=
hable, a gold mine for any future visitors here.=20
=20
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:=20
=20
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa=20
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)=20
=20
So friends,=20
=20
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........=20
=20
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.=20
=20
My love and regards to all,=20
=20
__________Zoya
jaate ho, xudaa Haafiz, haaN itnii guzaarish hai
jab yaad ham aa jaa'eN, milne kii du3aa karnaa
Jaleel Maanakpuri
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And now continuing with Irfan Siddiqui:
Haal zaalim shikaarii ki suurat mujhe, vaqt ki ziin se baandh kar le chalaa mera maazii mire saath chaltaa rahaa duur tak ek majbuur maaN kii tarah
I can't think of any other term that would describe the situation here better than a 'majbuur maaN'. One of the reasons this she'r is also on my all time favorite list.
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Christmas Day:
ibn-e-Mariam huaa kare koii
mere dukh kii davaa kare koii
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On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positive=
" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best out =
of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in t= hem are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bring=
your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azmi = and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic s= ongs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashiq =
is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "Do = Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better known=
as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occasio=
ns where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.smul= e.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/121= 6696826_4241148234=20
Irfan :Abid:
Irfan sahib,
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago wh= ile channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of th=
e channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie ti=
ll you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and all=
! :)
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to m=
e, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about t=
he duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent ex= ample of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as U= rdu.
I love such random coincidences. :-)
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2022 at 5:55:27 PM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, December 23, 2021 at 12:45:44 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:=20
=20
Now on to my next offering in this thread. I am sharing another "positi=
ve" song this time. Honestly, I believe it's sorrow that brings the best ou=
t of a poet. Probably that's why most of the songs with excellent poetry in=
them are sad songs, at least in my humble opinion. But I don't want to bri=
ng your spirits down every time I share a song! :) This one is by Kaifi Azm=
i and is from the movie "Do Dil" (1965.) Although most of Kaifi sb's iconic=
songs are sad songs, his class is visible even in this song where an aashi=
q is simply expressing his love for his beloved. One thing to note about "D=
o Dil" is that its music director was Hemant Kumar. Hemant da is better kno=
wn as a singer, but he was a composer, too. This is one of those rare occas= ions where Hemant da used Rafi sb's voice. Here is the link:
https://www.sm= ule.com/recording/mohammed-rafi-tera-husn-rahe-mera-ishq-rahe-do-dil-1965/1= 216696826_4241148234
Irfan :Abid:=20
=20
Irfan sahib,=20
=20
I have to tell you about another coincidence. Guess what, a few days ago =
while channel surfing the tv guide on my Hindi pack, I noticed that one of = the channels was playing 'Do Dil'! I had never even heard about this movie = till you mentioned it, and here it was for me to watch, the Rafi song and a= ll! :)=20
=20
I also want to tell you that another song from this movie was familiar to=
me, I believe I used to hear it on AIR back in the day. I am talking about=
the duet "saaraa mora kajraa ChhuRaaya tuu ne". This song is an excellent = example of how comfortable Kaifi Azmi sahib was writing in Hindi as well as=
Urdu.=20
=20
I love such random coincidences. :-)=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!
Thanks for sharing this! It's really interesting to know about these coinci= dences. And yes, "saaraa moraa kajraa" was perhaps the most famous song of = "Do Dil."
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (197=
9) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri. The thing I f= ind interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, almost selfish = plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Here is the link=
:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-yun-hi-sajegi= /1216696826_4268977991
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:
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On Saturday, January 22, 2022 at 1:55:01 PM UTC-6, Irfan Abid wrote:
Zoya sahiba, aadaab!=20
aadaab Irfan sahib,
I am sharing another song today. This is from the movie "Aaj Ki Radha" (1=
979) and is penned by Jaswant Rai Sharma aka 'Naqsh' Lyallpuri.=20
Ahh, another one of those songs I am not familiar with. Great!=20
I had not thought about any Naqsh Lyallpuri in a while. Now that you mentio=
n his name, a few of his songs are coming to my mind, maybe you will record=
one of those in future, we'll see. :)
The thing I find interesting and unique about this song is the carefree, al= most selfish plea to keep moving regardless of what happens around you. Her=
e is the link:
https://www.smule.com/recording/kishore-kumar-clp-ye-mehfil-= yun-hi-sajegi/1216696826_4268977991
You have aptly described the attitude of this song, kind of unusual. Also, = you have rendered in very well. I have not heard the original song, but I a=
m sure your version is pretty close to it. Thanks.
One she'r this song reminds me of is:
daa'im aabaad rahegii duniyaa=20
ham na hoNge, koii ham saa hogaa (Nasir Kazmi)=20
But of course! You know how I love Nasir Kazmi in general.=20
And now the she'r this song immediately reminded me of, from one of Zauq's=
most famous ghazals:
dunyaa ne kis kaa raah-e-fanaa meN diyaa hai saath
tum bhi chale chalo yuN hi jab tak chalii chale
This one is a pretty good fit too, right?=20
Already waiting for whatever surprise you will pull out of what I now call = your 'magician's bag'. :-)
________Zoya
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On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 23:18:22 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, May 10, 2022 at 9:42:28 AM UTC-7, Naseer wrote:=20
On Tuesday, 10 May 2022 at 05:13:20 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:=20
On Monday, May 9, 2022 at 8:54:42 PM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:=20
Mohit, aap ki is baat aur is she'r par to maiN bas yahii keh sakt=
i huuN:=20
=20
hazrat-e-Daagh, hai yeh kuucha-e-qaatil uThiye=20
jis jagah baiThte haiN aap to jam jaate haiN! :-)=20
aur mam is sher par mujhe ye sher yaad aaya=20
=20
ab to jaate hai=C3=B1 but-kade se 'meer'=20
phir mileNge agar =E1=B8=B3huda laaya :)=20
***aap kaheN ge "phir aa gayaa GhalatiyaaN nikaalne vaalaa". kyaa kar=
uuN, Mohit ji, aadat se majbuur huuN. :-)=20
=20
mere Khayaal meN, yahaaN "but-kade" ki bajaaye "mai-kade" hona chaahi=
ye. Please double check!=20
=20
R.K.***=20
Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab 3arz hai=20
=20
Mohit SaaHib kaa tahriir-kardah shi3r durust hai. yih shi3r Meer ke dii=
vaan-i-avval kii Ghazal no.85 kaa maqta3 hai.=20
=20
aap kaa xair-andesh,=20
Naseer
***janaab Mohit sahib v Naseer sahib:=20
=20
aap donoN Hazraat ka is Khush-Khabari ke liye shukriya k --------- ab ki =
baar ReKhta durust Thaihraa! :-)=20
=20
B/W, arz hai maiN ne roz-e-avval hi se is misr'e ko lafz "mai-kade" ke sa=
ath sunaa hai. aaj pahli baar is baat ka aHsaas hu'aa k yahaaN asl lafz "bu= t-kade" hai. mere paas aek kitaab hai jis ka unvaan hai "zarb-ul-masal ash'= aar". is kitaab ko tarteeb dii hai mohtarma Sarvat Sultaana Sarvat ne. is k= itaab meN yeh she'r lafz "mai-kade" ke saath darj hai. mere liye yeh kahna = mushkil hai k yeh saaHiba kahaaN tak mo'tabar haiN.=20
=20
duusri baat yeh k ham ALUPers ne ReKhta ko kayee baar Ghalat paaya hai. a=
lbatta, mujhe yaqeen hai k Naseer sahib ka javaab zaruur kisi mo'tabar maaK= hiz par mabni hoga.=20
=20
Khair-aNdesh, Raj Kumar
moHtaram Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab.
Huzuur is meN hamaaraa kyaa qusuur hai agar aap is shi3r ko roz-i-avval hii=
se Ghalat sun rahe haiN! :-) muHtaramah Sarvat Sultanah, haiN to professor=
lekin achchaa hotaa vuh is shi3r kii siHHat par thoRii taftiish kar letiiN=
! mere mu3tabir hone par aap ko rattii-bhar shakk nahiiN honaa chaahiye lek=
in agar aap kaa iimaan qadre kam-zor hai to bandah aap kii xidmat-i-3aaliya=
h meN kuchh subuut pesh kartaa hai.
jis kitaab se maiN ne is shi3r ko talaash kiyaa, us kaa naam hai "kulliyaat= -i-Meer" aur ise Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi ne murattab kiyaa hai aur taraqqii-i-U= rdu bureau, na'ii sihlii ne 1983 meN shaa'i3 kiyaa hai. is ke shuruu3 meN c= hand daanishvaroN ne apne mazaamiin shaamil kiye haiN jin meN aap ke "guruu=
" janaab-i-Professor Raghupati Sahay "Firaq" bhii jalvah-afroz haiN. diigar=
Hazraat haiN, Professor Rasheed Ahmed Siddiqi, Qazi Abdul Waduud, Professo=
r Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor aur Zill-i-Abbas Abbasi.
Professor Aal-e-Ahmad Suroor farmaate haiN, "Meer kii kulliyaat kaa vuh edi= tion jo Naval Kishor Press ne aaxirii baar shaa'i3 kiaa thaa aur jis kii si= HHat Abdulbari Aasi ne kii thii ab kahiiN dastyaab nahiiN hotaa (1). Ibadat=
Barelvi ne Pakistan se kulliyaat-i-Meer kaa ek nayaa edition ek taviil mu= qaddime ke saath shaa'i3 kiyaa thaa, us ke matn meN bahut sii GhalatiyaaN r= aah paa ga'ii thiiN magar yih bhii ab Hindustan meN nahiiN mil saktaa (2). =
is liye kulliyaat-i-Meer kii ek aise mustanad edition kii zaruurat saxtii s=
e maHsuus kii jaa rahii thii jo diidah-zeb bhii ho. xushii kii baat hai kih=
zer-i-nazar edition is zaruurat ko baRii Had tak puuraa kartaa hai. vaise = adabii dunyaa meN Harf-i-aaxir to ko'ii bhii nahiiN hotaa."(3)
(1) In the 1941 edition, this shi3r is give as;
buto jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(2) In the 1958 edition, the shi3r is..
ab to jaate haiN but-kade se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(3) This is the book I've quoted from and the shi3r is as in (2) above.
In 1960, Sayyid Ja'fri compiled "diivaan-i-Meer" in which the shi3r as per = (2). Later in 1972, Sayyid Ihtisham Hussain compiled a kulliyaat in which t= his shi3r is also as per (2).
The earliest nusxah for "diivaan-i-Meer" is the "nusxah-i-Mahmoodabad" writ= ten down in 1203 hijrii (1788), twenty three years prior to Meer's death. = This has been compiled by Doctor Akbar Haidari. AND the shi3r in question i=
s quoted as:
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
(emphasis mine!:-))
I think it makes more sense for "xudaa" to bring Meer back to a "but-kadah"=
, than to a "mai-kadah". After all, "xudaa" has to compete with the other x= udaas in the but-kadah!
Naseer=20
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
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Gentlemen, aadaab,
ab to jaate haiN *but-kade* se Meer
phir mileN ge agar xudaa laayaa
baat butkade se chali thi aur maiKhaane se hoti hui phir butkade par hii Khatm ho rahi hai, to maiN ne sochaa Riyaz Khairabadi kaa yeh she'r aap sab ko sunaati chaluuN:
dunyaa se alag ham ne maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa
maiKhaane ka dar dekhaa, Allah ka ghar dekhaa!
Naseer
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.
________Zoya
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On Thursday, 19 May 2022 at 02:10:06 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
PS "aHsaas" or "iHsaas" ba-vazn-i-insaaf-o-inkaar"?
Naseer sahib, Prof RK dekhiye idhar kab aate haiN, soch rahi huuN kyuN na=
maiN hii aap ke is savaal kaa javaab deti chaluN.=20
=20
jii haaN, aH-saa-s, in-saa-f, aur in-kaa-r, tiinoN bavazn haiN, 2-2-1.=20
=20
________Zoya
No, you'e misunderstood what I was trying to say, Zoya SaaHibah.
Raj Kumar SaaHib wrote "aHsaas" and I am suggesting to him (baRii 3aajizii =
ke saath) that the word is iHsaas, just like iqraar, inkaar, insaaf (all wi=
th alif zer and not alif zabar). Another word that is similarly mispronounc=
ed is "iHsaan". I pray and hope all is well with Professor SaaHib.
Naseer
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ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
On Thursday, August 11, 2022 at 6:30:13 PM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
ishq ik 'meer' bhaari patthar hai,
kab ye tujh naa-tawaaN se uthTa hai
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On Thursday, September 1, 2022 at 10:58:03 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyun bujh gaya awaargi,
is dasht meiN ik shahar tha, wo kya hua awaargi... - Mohsin Naqvi
haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
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haaN yeh viiraanaa, yeh dil, yeh aarzuuoN kaa mazaar
tum kaho to phir ise aabaad kar letaa huN maiN! :)
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
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On Saturday, September 3, 2022 at 9:50:48 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aap aaye janaab barsoN meiN,
humne pi hai sharab barsoN meiN - Rustam Sehgal 'Wafa'
goya:
aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
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aamad pe terii itr-o-charaagh-o-subuu na hoN
itnaa bhii buud-o-baash ko saada nahiiN kiyaa!
The one and only Parveen Shakir :)
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2022 at 9:58:14 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kisne dastak di ye dil par kaun hai,
Aap to andar haiN baahar kaun hai... - Rahat Indori
Nice. Mohit, yeh she'r mujhe bhi pasand hai. ise maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud Rahat Indori sahib kii zubaani sunaa tha, un kaa sunaane kaa andaaz bhi bahut lutf_aNdoz tha.
aur is she'r ko sun kar aksar mere zehn meN Bahir Badr kaa yeh she'r aayaa kartaa hai:
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back in a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
na jaane kab tire dil par naii si dastak ho
makaan Khaali huaa hai to koi aayegaa!
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On Thursday, September 8, 2022 at 12:41:20 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ik tere ehtaram se chalte haiN seena taan kar,=20
naaz ho jata hai paida tera kehlaane ke baad - ( read it long time back i=
n a random book, so unsure about the technicalities of the sher )
Mohit, nice attitude in this she'r. And it is perfectly in meter, no worrie=
s. :)
Now that the Covid curve is on a decreasing path, the still-masked-me is ge= tting more comfortable with some indoor gatherings. Last night I attended a=
mehfil featuring a classical singer, who is a disciple of Shanti Hiranand = who had trained directly under the legendary Begam Akhtar. It was amazing s= inging, Thumri, daadra, kajri, awadhi folk and best of all some Begam Akhta=
r ghazals that are like nursery rhymes for me, I spent my entire childhood,=
starting at about age two, listening to those timeless compositions!
ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn=
meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
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ab is saari bhuumika ke ba'ad aap voh she'r suniye jo kal raat se mere zehn meN ghuum rahaa hai, an old favorite that I quote often:
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
To get the full effect of what I am saying, you have to listen to the entire ghazal, more than once, aur phir yeh aap ke dil-o-dimaagh meN bhii ghuumne lagegii. :)
Here is a link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uzq1rpuFMig
_______Zoya
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On Sunday, September 11, 2022 at 9:39:50 AM UTC-6, Zoya wrote:
<snip>
=20
jise aap ginte the aashnaa, jise aap kehte the baavafaa=20
maiN vahii huN Momin-e-mubtalaa, tumheN yaad ho k na yaad ho
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho ki=
na yaad ho=20
Dinesh
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 2:56:07 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ma'm first heard this sher from Chitra ji's ghazal, one of the oldest composition of Jagjit Singh... one of my fav album Rare Gems...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umrX8JCeiAs
Yes, many different singers have sung this ghazal over the years, but I am particularly biased towards Begam Akhtar version, my first love. :)
aaj ka sher Haqeem Momin sab ka hi hai
tum humare kisi tarah na hue,
warna dunia mein kya nahi hota...
hakiim Momin kii is ghazal kaa zikr ho rahaa hai, phir yeh she'r to laazim hai:
tum mire paas hote ho goyaa
jab koii duusraa nahiiN hotaa
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On Monday, September 12, 2022 at 7:19:44 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
One of the other sher from this GHazal that I really like is ...=20
=20
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=C4=
=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad ho =
ki na yaad ho=20
=20
Dinesh
Dinesh sahib,=20
Very interesting that you have brought up this particular she'r. Every time=
I read this ghazal, I have always paused over this she'r. I find it sort o=
f intriguing, perhaps because I find this qaafia to be somewhat unexpected.=
I mean unless I have already uttered the "baat", how would I know that 'tu= mhaare jii ko burii lagii'? This is the ambiguity that makes me pause and p= erhaps expect the qaafia to be different. Maybe something like "bayaaN se p= ehle hi Toknaa", like you are about to say something insensitive, the other=
person sees it coming and stops you in your tracks.=20
Of course, I dare not question any she'r of Momin, I am totally unqualified=
to do so. However, I wanted to share my thoughts on this one, since I have=
pondered over it more than once. Let us see if I am making sense to anyone=
else, including you.
________Zoya
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ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bur=
=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad h=
o ki na yaad ho=20
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it = even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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I interpret in this way
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain...
Still thinking out loud.
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot it even before you responded, do you still remember that??"
I do, what a loss! :-)
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aaj ka sher
sunne wale ghaNtoN sunte rehte haiN,
mera fasana sabka fasana lagta hai - Kaif Bhopali
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 6:08:49 PM UTC-4, Zoya wrote:
ko=C4=AB baat ais=C4=AB agar hu=C4=AB ki tumh=C4=81re "j=C4=AB" ko bu=
r=C4=AB lag=C4=AB=20
to bay=C4=81=C3=B1 se pahle h=C4=AB bh=C5=ABln=C4=81 tumhe=C3=B1 yaad=
ho ki na yaad ho
PS:=20
Still thinking out loud.=20
One way I interpret this she'r to make good sense is this:=20
"Whenever I said something unpleasant, you were so nice that you forgot i=
t even before you responded, do you still remember that??"=20
=20
I do, what a loss! :-)
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it's =
in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means "=
to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2022 at 10:16:19 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I interpret in this way=20
=20
when two people are in love they forget every unpleasant thing the other =
one say... shikayat se pehle hi bhool jaate hain
On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 12:47:01 AM UTC-5,
ami...@gmail.com wrot=
e:
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why it'=
s in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only means = "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at fa=
ce value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first glan= ce, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first pe= rson or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it co= uld be either one?=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I believe=
is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are few = and far between these days.
____________Zoya
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I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...=20
What if "jee" does not mean what it would commonly mean? I wonder why i=
t's in double quotes in this transliteration .... and does bayaaN only mean=
s "to say"? it could also mean .. .to clarify, to explain... right?
Amit, it is always nice to see you back on Alup. :)=20
=20
The quotes simply meant that I was talking out loud, to myself.=20
=20
I like Mohit's explanation of the she'r under discussion, pretty much at =
face value. I believe the ambiguity I was talking about is that at first gl= ance, I am not sure if "bayaaN se pehle hii bhuulnaa" applies to the first = person or the second. I think second makes more sense, or as Mohit says it = could be either one?=20
=20
Amit, I agree 'bayaaN' could have a wider meaning here, but 'jii' I belie=
ve is simply 'dil/man', the most obvious usage.=20
=20
This is fun gentlemen, reminds me of normal Alup activities, which are fe=
w and far between these days.=20
=20
ALUP must be saying
meharbaaN ho ke bula lo mujhe chaho jis waqt
maiN gaya waqt nahiN hooN ki phir aa bhi naa sakooN :)
____________Zoya
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On Saturday, September 17, 2022 at 9:43:59 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I feel jii here same what Bashir Badr wrote=20
=20
na jii bhar ke dekha na kuchh baat ki,=20
badi aarzoo thi mulaqaat ki...
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa:
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About 1=
5 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically trai= ned Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghulam=
Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu po= etry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring him=
to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during th=
e ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for m=
e. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also told =
me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorded = numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always t= hink of it very fondly.
Cheerio,
___________Zoya
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I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewing = him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself writ=
e, then he recited his own sher,=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I stil=
l have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tragi=
c car accident... and that's today's sher too :)
=20
baat 'jii' ki ho rahi hai to phir aap yeh she'r suniye, Sufi Tabassum kaa=
:=20
=20
yuuN tirii yaad se jii ghabraayaa=20
tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho jaise=20
=20
Let me also share a very special memory associated with this she'r. About=
15 years ago, Ghulam Ali sahib visited our city. One of the classically tr= ained Sikh bhai sahibs here is a former student and personal friend of Ghul=
am Ali sahib, calls him "ustaad jii". Bhai sahib knows my passion for Urdu = poetry, so he asked me to pick Ghulam Ali sahib from the hotel, and bring h=
im to his home for lunch. One of my girlfriends and I did that, and during = the ride I asked Ghulam Ali sahib to quote some of his favorite asha'ar for=
me. The above written she'r is high on his list. Ghulam Ali sahib also tol=
d me that Nasir Kazmi is his favorite poet, we all know that he has recorde=
d numerous Nasir Kazmi ghazals. That day was memorable for me, and I always=
think of it very fondly.=20
=20
Cheerio,=20
=20
___________Zoya
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On Tuesday, September 20, 2022 at 10:08:21 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
I had the similar experience with Jagjit Singh ji, when I was interviewin=
g him 2003, I asked him after reading so many greats, doesn't he himself wr= ite, then he recited his own sher,=20
=20
ik arse ke baad bhi ab tak taaza teri baateiN hain,=20
shaam wahi hai, sahar wahi hai, aur wahi barsaateiN haiN,=20
=20
har aahat par yuN lagta ho jaisa tera aana ho,=20
lekin kadwa sach kehta hai, ye sab jhoothi baateiN haiN=20
This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great question,=
I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one has=
ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I bet = most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I st=
ill have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a tra= gic car accident...=20
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'chiT=
hi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, al= ways gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagjit=
Singh:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
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This is very interesting Mohit. You asked Jagjit Singh ji a great questio=
n, I have listened to/read numerous other interviews with him, but no one h=
as ever asked such a question. Thanks for sharing the asha'ar with us, I be=
t most people, just like me, are unfamiliar with these.
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though I =
am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn't=
have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tune= '=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...=20
I asked him, for whom did he write this sher, he didn't tell me, but I =
still have the feeling he wrote it for his son Vivek who passed away in a t= ragic car accident...
I think your hunch is right, makes sense. I believe Jagjit Singh sang 'ch=
iThi na koi sandes' in Vivek's memory. I have heard him sing it live also, = always gut wrenching.=20
In the vein of she'r-o-naghma, here is link to a live performance by Jagj=
it Singh:=20
=20
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DY_5HOsGdXew
and that's today's sher too :)
Keep it up! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and to=
be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to be=
here...=20
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya=20
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
Mam unfortunately the recording of that interview is unavailable, though =
I am trying to find it for years now, even in the network I worked in doesn=
't have it anymore... in Jagjit ji's words 'Kakka, badhiya sawal poochhe tu= ne'=20
=20
and this is what I will remember my whole life...
What a loss, I hope the recording can be found in some archives somewhere. = The good thing is you at least preserved the asha'ar he quoted. This remind=
s me, I had recorded an amazing interview with Amjad sahib for Mehfil-e-Suk= han once, don't have it anymore. Maybe Shoaib sahib has it archived, I'll h= ave to ask him. I am generally bad about preserving important pictures/reco= rdings. But as you said, we have the memories! :)
Jagjit ji's though disliked by many, brought Urdu to laymen like me, and =
to be honest I found ALUP only because of his ghazals, and I feel lucky to =
be here...=20
I agree, Jagjit Singh singlehandedly brought ghazals to masses in India, hu=
ge contribution. His selection of poetry in relatively simple Urdu helped t= oo. There is a sort of vacuum since he passed away.
=20
_________Zoya
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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:03:55 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aaj ka sher
kya sitam hai ki ab teri suurat,
gHaur karne pe yaad aati hai... - Jaun Eliya
Ahhhhh JE! One of my favorite asha'ar by one of my favorite poets.
aur ab aap yeh she'r suniye, Ahmad Mushtaq kaa, another one of my favorites:
abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
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abhi mahfuuz hai tiraa chehraa
abhi bhulii nahiiN tirii aavaaz! :-)
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
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On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 10:42:11 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
aavaaz se yaad aaya...
jiski aavaaz mein silvat ho, nigaahoN meiN shikan,
aisi tasweer ke tukde nahi joda karte - Gulzar
Profound. 'aavaaz meN silvaT' is so typical Gulzar, kind of like 'aaNkhoN kii Khushbu'.
is vaqt besaaKhtaa mere zehn meN Azhar Inayati kaa ek she'r aa rahaa hai. yeh un asha'ar meN se hai jo ek baar paRhne/sun_ne par hii mujhe hameshaa ke liye yaad reh jaate haiN:
kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
_________Zoya
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kuchh der tak to us se mirii guftguu rahii
phir yeh huaa k voh mire lehje meN aa gayaa
I find this she'r particularly interesting. It can be interpreted either way, 'lehjaa' can be sweet or not-so-sweet, how after a while the other person's attitude starts reflecting in our own during a conversation.
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2022 at 1:28:28 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
ye thoda sa ye feeling bhi deta hai
raah par unko laga laaye to haiN baatoN meiN-
aur khul jaayeNge do-chaar mulaqaatoN meiN - Daagh
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
ab aap Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r suniye:
husn ke samajhne ko umr chaahiye jaanaaN
do ghaRii kii chaahat meN laRkiyaaN nahiiN khultiiN!
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On Friday, September 30, 2022 at 10:18:04 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kabhi to khul ke baras abr-e-meharbaaN ki tarah,
mera wajood hai jalte hue makaaN ki tarah... - Prem Warbartoni
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
This provides a perfect opening to quote Shakeb Jalali, another one of my favorite poets:
ye ek abr ka TukRaa kahaaN kahaaN barse
tamaam dasht hi pyasaa dikhaai detaa hai!
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On Saturday, October 1, 2022 at 9:36:12 PM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
and this is another on pyaas
pyaas kahti hai chalo ret nichodi jaye,
apne hisse meiN samandar nahiN aane wala - Meraj Faizabadi
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Parveen Shakir kaa ek she'r hai, jo mere zehn ke kisii kone meN maHfuuz hai aur ba'az_auqaat achaanak saamne aa jaaya kartaa hai. suniye:
barsaa bhi to kis dasht ke be_faiz badan par
ik umr mire khet the jis abr ko tarse
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2022 at 1:40:55 AM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
barsaat ka baadal to deewana hai kya jaane,
kis raah se bachna hai, kis chhat ko bhigona hai - Nida Fazli
Nida ji ne 'bhigona' use kiya hai wo kaafi interesting hai
Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
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Yes, 'bhigonaa' is an interesting usage indeed, but if you look at the qaafia restriction for this ghazal, 'khilonaa/sonaa/ronaa' etc., you will see this is the only way it would fit here.
aur jab chhat par barsaat ki baat ho rahii hai to phir laazim hai k hamaare aziiz dost Amjad Islam sahib kaa yeh she'r bhi yahaaN darj kiyaa jaana chaahiye:
vo tire nasiib ki baarisheN kisi aur chhat pe baras gayiiN
dil-e-beKhabar miri baat sun, use bhuul jaa, use bhuul jaa
And I always tell Amjad sahib, "great advice, but not easy to follow"! :)
this reminds me of a sher I read when I was probably 13-14 years old, not sure if the meter etc is right... but here it goes
tujhe bhula ke tere khat jala diye maine,
lutaa ke apna asasa udaas tha maiN bhi...
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apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
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roshni aadhi idhar aadhi udhar,
ik diyaa rakha hai deewaroN ke beech - Obaidullah Aleem
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vO karam karte haiN ya hum pe sitam karte haiN
is nazar se unheiN hum ne kabhi dekha hi nahiiN
Shamiim Jaipuri
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yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
On Thursday, December 1, 2022 at 10:13:45 AM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
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ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:22:29 PM UTC+5:30, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN, kitaabeiN,
kabhi to wo aaNkheiN wo rukhsaar padhna...
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Wishing everyone a Happy New Year here... hoping everyone is doing fine.
ik ajnabi ke haath meiN de kar humara haath,
lo saath chhodne laga aakHir ye saal bhi - Hafeez Merathhi
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adaab dosto,
Here I am, after a relatively long absence from the group. Hope everyone is doing well.
On this Valentine's Day, let me quote my friend Amjad Islam Amjad sahib.
Amjad sahib muhabbat kii nazmoN ke betaaj baadshah the.
"muhabbat aisa daryaa hai
k baarish ruuThh bhii jaaye
to paanii kam nahiiN hotaa"
_______Zoya
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2022 at 7:41:20 PM UTC-5, Dinesh Shenoy wrote:
apne chehre se jo z=C4=81hir hai chhup=C4=81.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
ter=C4=AB marz=C4=AB ke mut=C4=81biq nazar aa.e=C3=B1 kaise=20
-- Waseem Barelvi
Well, Dinesh sahib, in that case, try harder! :)
baqaul Iftikhar Arif:
kare kalaam jo mujh se to mere lehje meN
maiN chup rahuuN to mere tevaroN kaa saathii ho!
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On Wednesday, November 30, 2022 at 10:43:45 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
yuun teri yaad se ji ghabraya,
tu mujhe bhool gaya ho jaise...
Ahhh Mohit, one of my all time favorites, I call it a gem. And this always reminds me of another 'gem', by our very own Mohib:
itni muddat Khafaa nahiiN rehtaa
voh mujhe bhuul hii gayaa hogaa :(
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On Saturday, December 3, 2022 at 11:58:01 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehandedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii haiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!
Yes? :)
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On Monday, December 19, 2022 at 10:52:29 AM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrote:
ilm ki ibtida hai hangaama
ilm ki intiha hai khamoshi
aadaab arz hai Shoaib sahib. is baat par to aap kii nazr yeh she'r:
ilm-o-fan ke diivane, aashiqii se Darte haiN
zindagii ke KhwaahaN haiN, zindagii se Darte haiN!
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Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometimes = even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group, a=
nd I honestly tried searching for that as well :) ek ghabrahat si hone lagi=
thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school chhodna pade... bahut ba= hut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon... 13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthda=
y tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/Devnagri meiN hai to pata nahi = sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-sh= er-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
=20
I really hope everyone in the group is fine...
Mohit, thanks for keeping this thread alive, lately pretyy much singlehan=
dedly.
khamoshi khud apni sadaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai,=20
sannata hi gooNj raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai... - Zaqa Siddiqui
yeh radiif bahut zarKhez hai aur is meN kaii sho'raa ne ghazaleN likhii h=
aiN. ab aap is zamiin meN Malikzaada Manzoor sahib kaa ek she'r dekhiye, jo=
maiN ne ek mushaare meN Khud un ki zubaani sunaa tha:=20
=20
darvaaze par aahaT sun kar us ki taraf kyuN dhyaan gayaa=20
aane vaalii sirf havaa ho aisaa bhi ho saktaa hai!=20
=20
Yes? :)
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2023 at 11:05:35 PM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Zoya mam, it brings me relief to know you and others are fine, I sometime=
s even thought that due to people like me you all have created a new group,=
and I honestly tried searching for that as well :)=20
Awww Mohit, of course not. Alup is like a home to me, of course there is no=
new group, at least not that I am aware of. In any case, I am not at all a= ctive on other social media.=20
ek ghabrahat si hone lagi thi... jaise kisi ko padhai ke beech se hi school=
chhodna pade... bahut bahut rahat aur khushi mehsoos kar raha hoon...=20
I understand, I can actually relate to that. I get worried too if long time=
Alup friends are absent for extended periods of time. In future, if you ha=
ve any such concerns, feel free to reach out to me via email. Our group is=
so small now, at least I should try to participate somewhat regularly.
13th ko Faiz sahab ka Birthday tha, un par ek article likha tha... Hindi/De= vnagri meiN hai to pata nahi sab padh payenge ya nahi=20
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https://hindi.news18.com/news/literature/faiz-ahmad-faiz-shayari-faiz-ke-=
sher-ghazals-faiz-ahmad-faiz-books-and-literature-5389325.html=20
Thanks for the link. I enjoyed reading your article. Very well written. Kee=
p up the good work.
aur Faiz sahab ka hi ek sher jo aap log ke yahan na hone par feel hua=20
=20
kar raha tha gHam-e-jahaaN ka hisaab,=20
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye
baat Faiz kii ho rahi hai, to yeh suniye:
jab tujhe yaad kar liyaa subH mehak mehak uThhii
jab tiraa gham jaga liyaa raat machal machal gayii
______Zoya
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Friends,
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably w= ell. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer an= ymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Alup=
is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to keep = the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occasi= onally, if not regularly, in future.
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his own:
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.
_________Zoya
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On Friday, February 24, 2023 at 9:18:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
Friends,=20
=20
I spoke to Prof RK on the phone earlier this week. He is doing reasonably=
well. It is not easy for him to sit and spend a lot of time on a computer = anymore, therefore, his extended absence from the group. I told him that Al=
up is not the same without him, and he agrees that we need an anchor to kee=
p the group going. Let us hope he will be able to participate at least occa= sionally, if not regularly, in future.=20
=20
As usual, at the end I asked him for a she'r, and he quoted one of his ow=
n:=20
=20
aaye the tere paas masiihaa samajh ke ham=20
dekhaa tujhe to aur bhi biimaar ho gaye=20
=20
We miss you Prof RK, stay well.=20
=20
_________Zoya
I, too, am returning after a long absence. News of Jamil Sahib's passing c= ame as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted, he was universally admired fo=
r his great knowledge and his willingness to share his wisdom with those wh=
o would most benefit from it - laypersons like me. I am also saddened to h= ear of Aslam Sahib's passing. On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib=
's condition makes an already dark day even darker. My prayers for his qui=
ck recovery.
Nagesh
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On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
I, too, am returning after a long absence.=20
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib noted,=
he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness to = share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons lik=
e me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. His = contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.=20
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the group=
over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of Bol= lywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definitel=
y creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already d= ark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.=20
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come b= ack, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit worr= ying so much.=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one of= ten, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently quo= ted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and e= ven he loved it!
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.
Nagesh
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.
_________Zoya
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2023 at 5:41:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-8, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 12:43:43=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:=
=20
=20
I, too, am returning after a long absence.
Welcome back Nagesh sahib,
News of Jamil Sahib's passing came as a great shock. As Nasser Sahib note=
d, he was universally admired for his great knowledge and his willingness t=
o share his wisdom with those who would most benefit from it - laypersons l= ike me.
I agree, Jameel sahib was one of the pioneer founding members of Alup. Hi=
s contributions to the group are priceless.
I am also saddened to hear of Aslam Sahib's passing.
You mean Afzal sahib. Very sad indeed. He was an integral part of the gro=
up over many years. In particular, his posts related to the golden era of B= ollywood movies and music were always such fun to read. His absence definit= ely creates a vacuum in the group.
On top of all that - news of Raj Kumar Sahib's condition makes an already=
dark day even darker. My prayers for his quick recovery.
I too hope and pray that Prof RK feels better soon. RK sahib, please come=
back, at least to post a quick message so all of your friends here quit wo= rrying so much.=20
=20
And now I will post my most favorite she'r of RK sahib. I quote this one =
often, in writing as well as in verbal conversations. In fact, I recently q= uoted this to my brother, who doesn't have much to do with Urdu poetry, and=
even he loved it!=20
=20
mirii Khamosh labii par shikaayateN kaisii=20
maiN apne aap se boluuN to tujh se baat karuuN=20
=20
Raj uncle, we miss you. Be well and be back.=20
=20
Nagesh=20
=20
Nagesh sahib, do keep in touch.=20
=20
_________Zoya
Zoya Sahiba:
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew hi=
m and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) a= necdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahib.
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed = and also those who remain with us.
Nagesh
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On Friday, March 3, 2023 at 10:50:50=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Nagesh wrote:
Zoya Sahiba:=20
=20
I was not aware of Afzal Sahib's demise. My condolences to all who knew h=
im and enjoyed his posts. I was a huge fan of his many rambling (his word) = anecdotes about his days in Bombay. He had an agile mind and his posts woul=
d often connect multiple topics that might seem unrelated.=20
Well put Nagesh sahib, I can echo this.
=20
My regrets were on the passing of your friend, the famous poet Aslam Sahi=
b.=20
Ahhh, you mean my friend Amjad sahib. Thank you. I still haven't absorbed t=
he loss fully, it is global as well as personal.
=20
This has been a year with many deaths. May the Lord preserve the departed=
and also those who remain with us.=20
Amen.
Nagesh
Now let me share a beautiful short nazm of Amjad sahib that I heard from hi=
m in person more than twenty years ago. I loved it then, and still love it = just as much. I remember back then I had asked Amjad sahib to explain the m= eaning of the title. Also, during my last meeting with him in Fall 2022, I = had asked him to recite this poem impromptu in a private mehfil, and he sai=
d he couldn't recall it fully right at that moment.=20
Here it is:
inkeshaaf
na vaadaa hai koii tum se koii rishtaa nibhaane kaa
na koii aur hii dil meN iraadaa hai
kaii din se magar dil meN ajab uljhan si rehtii hai
na tum is daastaaN ke sarsarii kirdaar ho koii
na qisaa itnaa saadaa hai
ta'alluq jo maiN samjha thaa
kahiiN us se zyaadaa hai!
Amjad Islam Amjad
What a profound thought, and what an appropriate title.
_________Zoya
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Friends,
A couple of days ago, one of my dad's friends sent me some Punjabi ghazals =
of the legendary Urdu poet Zafar Iqbal. It was a pleasant surprise for me s= ince I had never read ZI's Punjabi poetry. In fact, dad's friend, who himse=
lf is a Punjabi poet, is now planning to collaborate with some people to ge=
t ZI's Punjabi ghazals printed in Gurmukhi script from Shahmukhi script. I = think it is a wonderful idea and will allow the people in Indian Punjab, mo=
st of whom can not read Urdu script, access to ZI's Punjabi poetry.
I have always been a huge Zafar Iqbal fan and suddenly started craving his = asha'ar, and have been reading his kuliyat again.
ab aap ZI kaa voh she'r suniye jo pichhle do din se mere zehn-o-dil par taa=
ri hai, aur maiN ne ise pehle kabhi post nahiiN kiyaa.
TakTakii baaNdh ke maiN dekh raha huuN jis ko
yeh bhi mumkin hai k vo saamne baiTha hi na ho!
This thought just wowed me.....maybe because there are times I can so relat=
e to it.......
___________Zoya
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sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2023 at 3:04:11=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Mohit wrote:
sunte haiN ishq naam ke guzre haiN ik buzurg,=20
hum log bhi faqeer isi silsile ke haiN... - Firaq
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
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On Wednesday, June 7, 2023 at 9:03:43=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
shaayad mujhe nikaal kar pachhta raheiN hoN aap,=20
mehfil mein is khayal se phir aa gaya hooN maiN - Abdul Hameed Adam
Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking a= bout posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
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Mohit, Sufi Tabassum kaa yeh she'r suniye:
is aalam-e-viiraaN meN kyaa anjuman_aaraaii
do roz kii mehfil hai, ik umr kii tanhaaii :(
muhabbat ek khushbuu hai humesha saath chalti hai,
koi insaan tanhaai mein tanha nahi rehta - Bashir Badr
How are you? Hope all is well. For the last few days, I had been thinking about posting something on Alup, thanks for the little nudge. :)
I am good Mam, hope everyone else is doing good as well... I keep coming here almost everyday and it saddens me to see no conversation here... for me this platform is like a classroom where I get to learn something everyday...
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kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 1:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
shukriya, Mohit sahib, kyaa Khuub she'r pesh kiyaa hai aap ne. :-)
agar ijaazat ho to inheeN Hazrat ka aek halka-phulka qit'a sunaataa chaluuN=
. arz hai
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
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dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
R.K.
shayad ma'ashuuq ki ghalati nahi hogi unko bhi
ishq ne Ghalib nikamma kar diya,
warna hum bhi aadmi the kaam ke :)
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On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' sir
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa ga= ya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 2:31:18=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, August 7, 2023 at 3:06:03=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Mohit wrote:=20
=20
kyuuN aa ke mire dil pe ko'ii deta hai dastak=20
yaaN ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN, ko'ii nahiiN hai! - Rajkumar 'Qais' si=
r
Mohit, is baat par mere zehn meN besaaKhta Rahat Indori kaa yeh she'r aa =
gaya, jo maiN ne ek mehfil meN Khud un ki zubaani suna thaa:=20
=20
kis ne dastak dii yeh dil par, kaun hai?=20
aap to andar haiN, baahar kaun hai??=20
=20
dekhiye ab apne Qais sahib is par kya kehte haiN! :)
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?
Raj Kumar***
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On Friday, August 18, 2023 at 9:03:28=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
***na jhaaNko Qais ke dil meN, na jhaaNko=20
vahaaN ko'ii chhupaa ho, kaun jaane?=20
=20
Raj Kumar***
RK sahib, yeh she'r suniye, I find it kind of 'cute':
dil ki taKhtii pe naam hai teraa
yaaN nahiiN to kahaaN rahoge tum?! :)
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrote:
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remind=
ed me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii
=20
R.K.
_________Zoya
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wrot=
e:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this remi=
nded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------
***To change the topic,
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!
R.K.***
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On Sunday, 1 October 2023 at 05:15:26 UTC+1, Raj Kumar wrote:
On Tuesday, August 22, 2023 at 8:35:07=E2=80=AFPM UTC-7, Zoya wrote:=20
On Wednesday, August 9, 2023 at 12:16:07=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wr=
ote:=20
=20
dekhne meN jo lagii naaraNgii=20
us ko chheelaa to musammii niklii=20
ko'i va'ada na dilaasaa na yaqeeN=20
meri ma'ashuuq nikammii niklii=20
There must be some relevance, perhaps the color orange, because this re=
minded me of a Jaun Eliya she'r:=20
=20
jis din voh milne aaii thii us din kii ruudaad hai yeh=20
us kaa blouse naaranjii thaa, us kii saarii dhaanii thii=20
=20
R.K.=20
_________Zoya
------------=20
=20
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of subj= ect as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short space=
of time in recent days. But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my=
contribution.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe
Miir Babr Ali Anees
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On Saturday, September 30, 2023 at 11:15:26=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Raj Kumar wro= te:
***To change the topic,=20
=20
voh aur hoN ge jin ko milii tujh se ziNdagii=20
ham par to jab bhi aaNkh paRii, aur mar gaye!=20
=20
R.K.***
Hmmm, back to JE:
ab mirii koi zindagii hi nahiiN
ab bhi tum meri zindagii ho kyaa??
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On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of su=
bject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short spa=
ce of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.=20
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa
_________Zoya
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On Friday, 6 October 2023 at 21:19:55 UTC+1, Zoya wrote:
On Sunday, October 1, 2023 at 4:04:36=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:=20
=20
vaah, Raj Kumar saaHib, vaah! But, I am not sure I like this change of =
subject as two of my very close relatives have passed away within a short s= pace of time in recent days.
Naseer sahib, please accept my condolences on the loss of your loved ones=
.
But life and death go hand and hand, so here is my contribution.
So true.
kyoN-kar nah lipat ke tujh se so'uuN ai qabr=20
maiN ne bhii to jaan de ke paayaa hai tujhe=20
=20
Miir Babr Ali Anees
And the classic by Chakbast:=20
=20
zindagii kyaa hai anaasir meN zuhuur-e-tartiib=20
maut kyaa hai inhiN ajzaa kaa pareshaaN honaa=20
=20
_________Zoya
bahut bahut shukriyah, Zoya saaHibah.
aap kaa pesh-kardah shi3r to Chemistry meN entropy kaa do misr3oN meN xulaa= sah hai!
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai
maut ke din qariib hote haiN
Nooh Narvi
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?
Naseer
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mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se
~ JE
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On Saturday, October 7, 2023 at 3:01:03=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Naseer wrote:
jab tabii3at kisii par aatii hai=20
maut ke din qariib hote haiN=20
=20
Nooh Narvi=20
Naseer sahib, baqaul Mohsin Naqvi:
vo zaKhm de ke mujhe hauslaa bhi detaa hai
ab is se baRh ke tabiiyat shanaas kyaa hogaa!
=20
aaj-kal Irfan saaHib kahaaN haiN? sab xairiyyat to hai?=20
abhi chand roz pehle maiN ne Irfan sahib ko ek message kyaa tha, Khairiyat =
se haiiN, aur masruuf rehte haiN. maiN to unheN idhar aane ki guzaarish ka=
r hii diyaa karti huuN, aur kabhi kabhi vo sun bhi lete haiN. :)
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On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.
________Zoya
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On Sunday, October 15, 2023 at 10:26:55=E2=80=AFPM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
On Friday, October 13, 2023 at 10:52:39=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
mustaqil boltaa hi rahtaa houN=20
kitna khaamosh houN maiN andar se=20
=20
~ JE
Amit! Stranger!! :)=20
=20
But of course I am now going to quote this one by Ghalib for you:=20
=20
maiN jo bolaa kahaa k yeh aavaaz=20
usii Khaanaa Kharaab kii sii hai!! :-)=20
=20
Always good to see you around here. Be in touch.=20
=20
________Zoya
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,
Nagesh
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2023 at 4:53:11=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Nagesh wrote:
Mir? I am tempted to scan it. Regards,=20
Nagesh
Yes Nagesh sahib, absolutely, totally Meer! Dah! Did someone say Ghalib, wh=
at were they thinking?! :-)
I could try to pull one and say it was a bait to lure Prof RK back in this = thread! Well, it hooked you for sure. :)
Honestly, I have no idea how this error crept in, you have to believe I kno=
w better.
How have you been my friend? Hoping to see more of you around here.
__________Zoya
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'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
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On Wednesday, October 25, 2023 at 7:21:56=E2=80=AFAM UTC-7, Mohit wrote:
'MoHsin' ko kuChh to Hadd-e-sitam kaa suraaGh de=20
kab tak raqam karuuN maiN tiri mehrbaaniyaaN
***apni hastii meN jo maHduud hai, voh bhii mujrim
apni hastii se guzarnaa bhi sitam hotaa hai***
RK
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Sat Jan 13 08:34:09 2024
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nazr-e-Alup:
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 16:34:11 UTC, Zoya wrote:
nazr-e-Alup:=20
=20
tire saath guzre hasiin lamhoN kii shoKhiyaaN=20
vahii rang-o-buu vahii raunkeN mire saath haiN
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations. Thank you=
for this shi3r. You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to p= ost in ALUP here after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's pos=
t. I have spoken with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to = have a word with you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time = for us to move over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obv= iously, this is everyone's personal decision.
Best Wishes,
Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai=20
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.=20
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I got = there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is b= etter now and I am back home.
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this ti= me. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has in=
store. Let us hope for the best!=20
Thank you for this shi3r.=20
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.=20
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP here=
after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spoken=
with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word with=
you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move o= ver to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this is = everyone's personal decision.=20
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotional=
reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time, = just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have n=
ot been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave me=
solace.
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am no=
t much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, I =
am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activate = it.
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages in = Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify that=
I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. Ju=
st wondering if anyone else is having such issues.
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer
More later,
________Zoya
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ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
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On Saturday 13 January 2024 at 17:44:00 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 10:43:30=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:=
=20
=20
Zoya SaaHibah, aadaab 3arz hai
aadaab Naseer sahib,
I hope you have had pleasant Christmas and New Year celebrations.
It=E2=80=99s been ok. I was on an extended trip to India. Soon after I go=
t there, my dad became unwell and was hospitalized, pretty stressful. He is=
better now and I am back home.=20
=20
Somehow, I didn=E2=80=99t feel like really celebrating the new year this =
time. With all that is going aroundthe world, I am uncertain what 2024 has =
in store. Let us hope for the best!
Thank you for this shi3r.
Thanks, it kind of portrays my feelings for Alup.
You are no doubt aware that we will no longer be able to post in ALUP he=
re after 22/02/2024. You have probably scene UVR SaaHib's post. I have spok=
en with Raj Kumar SaaHib abouit this matter and asked him to have a word wi=
th you. This was before UVR SaaHib's post. I think it's time for us to move=
over to FB ALUP started by UVR SaaHin in September 2014. Obviously, this i=
s everyone's personal decision.
Yes, I have been thinking about this for a few days and having an emotion=
al reaction to it. Alup has been a constant in my life for a very long time=
, just took it for granted. Even though most members, myself included, have=
not been too active recently, the mere fact that Alup existed always gave =
me solace.=20
=20
I have responded to UVR sahib in the other thread. As I said there, I am =
not much of an FB fan, but if that is the only channel to keep Alup alive, =
I am open to it. I had created FB account once, let me see if I can activat=
e it.=20
=20
One more thing, I am already having trouble typing and posting messages i=
n Alup. On Microsoft edge, the message does not post even after I verify th=
at I am not a robot. Anyways, I switched to Firefox to post earlier today. = Just wondering if anyone else is having such issues.=20
=20
Best Wishes,=20
=20
Naseer=20
=20
More later,=20
=20
________Zoya
Zoya SaaHiba, aadaab
I have been trying to post for weeks but have faced the same problem as you=
have encountered. Only today I was able to post a messge to you. Thank you=
for your prompt response. Even now, I am having difficulty writing this me= ssage. I couldn't open the link to UVR SaaHib's link to Option 2. Naseer
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On Saturday, January 13, 2024 at 1:29:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
ab naye saal ki mohlat naheeN milne vaali=20
aa gaye ab to shab-o-roze azaaboN Vaale
aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye!
aadaab arz hai, Shoaib sahib.
Happy 2024? :)
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After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes:
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 5:33:38=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
After a long while, I've been thinking about a she'r by Majaaz. Here goes=
:=20
=20
us mehfil-e-kaif-o-mastii meN, us anjuman-e-irfaanii meN=20
sab jaam-ba-kaf baiThhe hii rahe, ham pii bhi gaye, chhalkaa bhi gaye!
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Maj=
az himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra wro= te:
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps Ma=
jaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this newsgr= oup is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/= c/1HAOY7PGIKE)=20
Amit, I totally agree.
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and r= emain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisite.
One more, in same behr:
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!=20
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2024 at 11:27:23=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 16, 2024 at 9:04:01=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Amit Malhotra w=
rote:=20
=20
Love this sh'er! So expertly recited in the movie Pyasa by ... perhaps =
Majaz himself? There's even an old ALUP thread about it. Goodness this news= group is full of gold! (
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetr= y/c/1HAOY7PGIKE)
Amit, I totally agree.=20
Alup archives are a gold mine, so grateful all this will be preserved and=
remain searchable.
rudaad-e-gham-e-ulfat unse, ham kya kahte kyuuN kar kahte=20
ik harf na nikla hoNThoN se, aur aaNkh meiN aaNsuu aa bhi gaye!
Ahhhh Majaaz. I find all his ghazals so lyrical, flowing gently. Exquisit=
e.=20
=20
One more, in same behr:=20
=20
ai shauq-e-nazaara kyaa kahiye nazroN meN koii suurat hi nahiiN=20
ai zauq-e-tasavvur kyaa kiije, ham suurat-e-jaanaaN bhuul gaye!
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
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On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wr= ote:
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
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On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir =
wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" faci= lity. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah cou=
ld be a "taalaab"! :-)
Naseer
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On Friday, January 19, 2024 at 9:04:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer wrote:
On Thursday 18 January 2024 at 21:35:07 UTC, Zoya wrote:=20
On Thursday, January 18, 2024 at 3:03:25=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvi=
r wrote:=20
=20
voh sitaara thi, ke shabnam thi, ke pool=20
eik soorat thi ajab yaad naheeN!=20
shaayad huzuur se koii raghbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye! :)
Zoya SaaHibah aadaab.=20
=20
It's a pity ALUP Google Groups (like this group) do not have an "edit" fa=
cility. Without this facility we may think that Shoaib SaaHib's maHbuubah c= ould be a "taalaab"! :-)=20
Naseer sahib, I noticed the 'pool' too. Well, it could be "taalaab", or it = could be a group of "maHbuubahs", I mean he could be 'pooling' a whole bunc=
h of them together! :-))
But we can't really pick on him for this, he has his tracks covered by post= ing 'phool' in Urdu script.
But 'maHbuubah'? Really?? I would have typed 'mehbuuba'. Would you let me g=
et away with that? :)
Talking about editing, I posted the above she'r from my long term memory, a=
nd am now thinking that it is actually 'nisbat', not 'raghbat' in the first=
misra. So, the edited version is:
shaayad huzuur se koii nisbat mujhe bhii ho=20
aaNkhoN meN jhaaNk kar mujhe pehchaan jaaiiye!
_____________Zoya
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Friends,
aaj kal maiN ek arse ke baa'd dobaara 'Ishrat Afreen' ki kitaab paRh rahii huuN.
Absolutely brilliant, stark, contemporary female perspective.
she'r dekhiye:
ab ek rishta-e-benaam se use puujuuN
k por por vo paththar mujhe banaa hi gayaa!
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vo harf thaa na sitaaraa magar chamaktaa thaa
k mere zard gulaaboN ke biich mehkaa thaa
ye aur baat k kam_hauslaa to maiN bhii thii
magar ye sach hai use pehle maiN ne chaahaa thaa
na mere haath hinaaii na us ke Khwaab gulaab
to phir ye rang sa pairaahanoN pe kaisaa thaa
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN
Ishrat Afreen
___________Zoya
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On Saturday, January 27, 2024 at 11:12:57=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
kis ko ma'luum huii kaun si aayat mansuub=20
yaad utrii thi tirii suurat-e-ilhaam kahiiN=20
=20
phir se vo garmi-e-anfaas kahaaN se laayeN=20
lauT bhi aayeN agar vo sahar-o-shaam kahiiN=20
=20
Ishrat Afreen=20
___________Zoya
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 3:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
waah!=20
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN kah= iiN
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN ja= ayeNge??
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 8:51:49=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w= rote:
tu nigaahoN ki zabaaN khoob samajhta ho ga
teri jaanib to uTha karti haiN aksar aaNkheN
Sure!
mere chehre pe ghazal likhti gaiiN
she'r kehtii hui aaNkheN us kii
So says Parveen Shakir.
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ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 4:07:53=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
ik intizaar magar kis kaa intizaar hai ab=20
ye dastakoN se ulajhtii hui havaa aur maiN!
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2024 at 4:33:35=E2=80=AFPM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, January 30, 2024 at 2:19:27=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:=20
=20
jinko jaanaa hai chale jaanaa hai=20
jinko aanaa hai woh aate hoNge=20
=20
ab to is shahr ke rehne waale=20
dusraa shahr basaate hoNge
bahut Khuub Zuhra jii.=20
=20
avval-e-shab ka mehtaab bhii jaa chukaa sehn-e-maiKhaana se ab ufaq meN k=
ahiiN=20
aakhir-e-shab hai Khaali haiN jaam-o-sabuu, tum kahaaN jaaoge ham kahaaN =
jaayeNge??
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
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yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
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hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer
I really hope this sher gets through...
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:27:37=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
roz hole se dareecha mira kyoN khultaa hai=20
koi aahat, koi dastak, koi jhonkaa bhi naheeN
havaaeN jab ghaNTiyaaN bajaayeN to lauT aanaa
kisii ki aaNkheN diye jalaayeN to lauT aanaa!
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:30:09=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Zuhra wrote:
ham apni apni raah chal diye magar=20
'ajeeb hai vaheeN rukaa huaa hai dil (Fariha Naqvi)
This reminds me of a gem by Firaaq Goarkhpuri:
vo uTh bhi chuke kab ke, vo jaa bhi chuke kab ke
dil hai k 'Firaaq" ab tak daaman ko ChhuRaaye hai!
Disclaimer: Prof RK remembers a slightly different version of this she'r, w=
e have not been able to find it in any authentic printed source, the quest = continues.
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On Friday, February 2, 2024 at 3:41:14=E2=80=AFPM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wrot=
e:
yaar bhi raah ki divaar samajhtay haiN mujhay=20
main samajhta tha miray yaar samajhtay haiN mujhay
bas jaan gayaa maiN tiri pehchaan yahii hai
tuu dil meN to aataa hai samajh meN nahiiN aata! :-)
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On Saturday, February 3, 2024 at 8:03:00=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
Welcome back Mohit :)
hoga kisi deewar ke saaye meiN padaa Meer,=20
kya rabt muhabbat se us araam-talab ko... - Meer Taqi Meer=20
=20
I really hope this sher gets through...
I am reading Ishrat Afreen's book these days. This classic Meer she'r remin=
ds me of the one I just read yesterday, and liked:
muhabbatoN meN mashaqqat bahut thi so tum ne
mire Khayaal se shaayad mujhe thakaaya nahiiN
Beautiful thought, isn't it?
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JjinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
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On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is so=
'you'! :)
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 10:38:37=E2=80=AFAM UTC-5, Zoya wrote:
On Monday, February 5, 2024 at 10:12:45=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir w=
rote:=20
=20
jinheN ham zaihr lagtay haiN=20
hameN voh Khaa ke mar jaayeN
Shoaib sahib, you actually had me laughing out loud on this one, this is =
so 'you'! :)=20
=20
BTW, zahr Khud bhi khaayaa jaa saktaa hai,, yes? ;)=20
varnaa baqaul Ghalib to yahi sunte haiN k:=20
=20
zahr miltaa hi nahiiN mujh ko sitamgar varnaa=20
kyaa qasam hai tire milne kii k khaa bhii na sakuuN
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2024 at 9:50:16=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Shoaib Tanvir wro= te:
Zoya sahiba, na-haq hum majbooroN pe tohmat hai mukhtari ki=E2=80=A6=20
jii bilkul Shoaib sahib, 'chaahte haiN so aap kare haiN.......', "aap" as i=
n "ham". :)
zihr aloud sahi lab pe tabassum to saja=20
kuchh bichhaRne ke bhi aadaab hua karat=C3=A9 haiN
But of course, you know tabassum is my middle name. :-))
vaise bhi bichhaR kaun rahaa hai? I am moving with the gang to the alternat=
e Alup sites, varnaa phir aap kuchh yuuN na kehne lageN:
tum se bichhaR kar zindaa haiN
jaan, bahut sharmindaa haiN!
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
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vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
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On Wednesday 7 February 2024 at 20:39:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
vafaaon kay tasalsal se mohabbat rooTh jaati hai=20
kahaani meiN zara si be~vafaii mangtay rehna
kyaa bataayeN pyaar kii baazii vafaa kii raah meN=20
kaun jiitaa kaun haaraa ye kahaanii phir sahii
Salaam,
I came across a Urdu nazm (poem) translated into English.
Poem is written by lyricist (poet) Sahir Ludhianvi from India in 1943 when =
he was 19 year old.
He wrote this for a female friend, Amrita Pritam.
This song is regarded to have been a masterpiece by lyricist Sahir Ludhianv=
i.
"Kabhi Kabhie Mere Dil Mein" (English: 'Sometimes...in My Heart') is a song=
from=20
1976 Bollywood movie Kabhi Kabhie (English title: Sometimes...)
Translated by Elizabeth Kurian =E2=80=98Mona=E2=80=99, a multilingual poet.
Enjoy...
Now and again the thought crosses my heart
That life may have brimmed with happiness
If spent in the soft shadow of your tresses;
The destiny of my existence...this darkness,=20
May have melted in the bright rays of your eyes
It wouldn=E2=80=99t be strange if, estranged from this world,=20
I lost myself in the brilliance of your beauty,=20
Immersed myself in the exquisite romance =20
Of your supple body and half closed eyes.
When the world=E2=80=99s bitterness called out to me,
I could drink the sweet nectar from your lips
When life shrieked and roamed bare-headed
I could hide in the shade of your thick tresses
***
=20
But this did not happen and now my condition is this
Neither you, nor your grief, nor your craving remains,
Life trudges along in such a fashion as though
It has no desire for the support of any soul
I have embraced entire humanity=E2=80=99s sorrows=20
I make my way through unfamiliar paths
Advancing towards me are frightening shadows
From the scary thorny jungles of life and death=20
No pathway, no purpose, no sign of radiance=20
My life drifts aimlessly in the barrenness
I shall be lost some day in this nothingness
I=E2=80=99m aware of this, my love, but nevertheless,
Now and again the thought crosses my heart...
(Translated by Elizabeth Kurian 'Mona')
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan wro= te:
Hi,
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are app= roaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this included =
in the group archives.
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam, = but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it h=
as gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more o=
f a one sided affair on her part.
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, details =
in a separate thread.
___________Zoya
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qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
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On Friday, February 16, 2024 at 2:08:40=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
qasid payaam-e-shauq ko dena bahut na tuul,=20
kehna faqat ye unse ki aankheiN taras gayiin - Jaleel Manikpuri
jinheN ham dekh kar jiite the 'Nasir'
vo log aankhoN se ojhal ho gaye haiN :(
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On Wednesday 14 February 2024 at 22:29:23 UTC, Zoya wrote:
On Tuesday, February 13, 2024 at 5:07:24=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Naseer Aryan w=
rote:=20
=20
Hi,=20
=20
Welcome! Thanks for posting this translation, very well written. We are a=
pproaching the tail end of Alup life, it will be great to have this include=
d in the group archives.=20
=20
A quick comment, this famous Sahir nazm was not written for Amrita Pritam=
, but for another lady love from his college days. Even though with time it=
has gotten a lot of mass coverage, Amrita Pritam's love for Sahir was more=
of a one sided affair on her part.=20
=20
Hoping to see more of you on the alternate sites we are moving to, detail=
s in a separate thread.=20
=20
___________Zoya
Hi,
Thanks for correction. I will try to post something whenever I could.
Regards,
Nasir
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So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tarah thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tarah :-((
__________Zoya
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 7:00:14=E2=80=AFAM UTC+5:30, Zoya wrote:
So the countdown has really begun, two more days to go. :(=20
=20
aaj kaa she'r, by one of my most favorite poets, Irfan Siddiqui:=20
=20
sochtaa huuN k mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meiN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tar=
ah=20
thoRii hii der meiN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tara=
h :-((=20
=20
__________Zoya
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2024 at 6:19:22=E2=80=AFAM UTC-6, Mohit wrote:
kahaani khatm hui aur aisi khatm hui,=20
ki log rone lage taaliyaN bajate hue... Rahman Faris
Nice. This is one of those asha'ar that stayed with me the first time I hea=
rd it. I remember quoting it at the memorial service of a young Sikh, hands= ome, dedicated local sheriff's deputy who was gunned down by a criminal dur= ing a routine traffic stop. Horrific tragedy.
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Dear friends,
I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so su= ccessful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all the=
asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group ov=
er the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having fo= und many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In pa= rticular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar Al=
am Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects o=
f Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life is=
so much richer because of them.
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this Us= enet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotra = sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting points=
. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here i=
s a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searcha= ble, a gold mine for any future visitors here.
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)
So friends,
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.
My love and regards to all,
__________Zoya
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alt.language.urdu.poetry on Thu Feb 22 02:02:24 2024
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On Thursday 22 February 2024 at 05:10:32 UTC, Zoya wrote:
Dear friends,=20
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I want to thank all of you for making the "aaj kaa she'r" threads 1-4 so =
successful. I have always had a lot of fun posting as well as reading all t=
he asha'ar and related discussions in this series.=20
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In a broader sense, I really appreciate all the time spent in this group =
over the years, this has been a true gift for me. I am grateful for having = found many amazing friends here, who enjoy Urdu poetry as much as I do. In = particular, I would like to thank my ustaads, Raj Kumar Qais sahib, Sarwar = Alam Raz sahib, and Irfan Abid sahib. They have taught me the finer aspects=
of Urdu poetry and language with a lot of patience and affection, my life =
is so much richer because of them.=20
=20
As we have been discussing in two other recent threads, even though this =
Usenet group as we know is coming to an end, thanks to UVR and Amit Malhotr=
a sahibaan, at least three alternate avenues are open to us as meeting poin= ts. Several group members, including myself have already joined those. Here=
is a link to the thread detailing the available alternatives:=20
=20
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.language.urdu.poetry/c/IwQeq3rc_mk=20
=20
As per google, the Alup group archives will be preserved and remain searc=
hable, a gold mine for any future visitors here.=20
=20
Let me now quote a she'r by my most favorite poet, Nasir Kazmi:=20
=20
shahr ujRe to kyaa, hai kushaada zamiin-e-Khudaa=20
ik nayaa ghar banaayeNge ham, sabr kar sabr kar! :)=20
=20
So friends,=20
=20
gufatguu band na ho, baat se baat chale........=20
=20
See you in one of the alternate forums, it is not a goodbye.=20
=20
My love and regards to all,=20
=20
__________Zoya
jaate ho, xudaa Haafiz, haaN itnii guzaarish hai
jab yaad ham aa jaa'eN, milne kii du3aa karnaa
Jaleel Maanakpuri
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And now continuing with Irfan Siddiqui:
Haal zaalim shikaarii ki suurat mujhe, vaqt ki ziin se baandh kar le chalaa mera maazii mire saath chaltaa rahaa duur tak ek majbuur maaN kii tarah
I can't think of any other term that would describe the situation here better than a 'majbuur maaN'. One of the reasons this she'r is also on my all time favorite list.
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