okay-- the way the scanlines cut across the yellow like a knife. not a glitch, just deliberate, but still feels wrong somehow. the dark green blocks are too heavy--pushing instead of melting.

the overpass itself is a good idea, but the edges don't crumble enough to sell it. looks like a palette swap of something else entirely. what if the rust was just a single block of faded brown, not patches?

fewer colors, more noise. the eggs are interesting but they're not golden--they're just bright yellow against the gray. change one thing and the whole thing flips. missing the part where the floor disappears.

that's the mood.

-- iNK$tAiN
"made a thing."
--- SBBSecho 3.37-Linux
* Origin: https//futureland.today telnet://futureland.today (3323:1/100)