• Re: Latin Raven

    From Ed Cryer@ed@somewhere.in.the.uk to alt.language.latin on Thu Oct 2 09:42:13 2025
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    t400ec wrote:
    Heic versantibus:

    Metrum horum versuum meliorari velim si possibile est.
    Corvus iste ex 18 strophis constat quinqe et media lineis.
    sive 88 syllabis. (Octameter trochaicus) accentuum non vocalium
    (correptarum aut productarum):

    Abhinc ferme centum sexaginta annos aliquid (Gidley) versionem fecit.

    *la2 (2025)-a-a-a 1587 syllabae nunquam ultra (* 88 18) = 1584

    Olim media nocte quadam, tristi mente fessus verso
    Multos libros curiosos priscae artis, diu oblitos rCo
    ...
    ....


    Sustolletur rCo nunquam ultra!-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a 108

    Haec versio mihi videtur melior. https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Raven;_with_literary_and_historical_commentary/Latin

    Sed quare non simpliciter hexametri vel elegi?

    Vale et valete


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  • From Desidarius@desidarius@free.fr to alt.language.latin on Thu Oct 2 16:53:33 2025
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    Le 02/10/2025 |a 10:42, Ed Cryer a |-crit-a:
    t400ec wrote:
    [..]

    Sustolletur rCo nunquam ultra!-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a 108

    Haec versio mihi videtur melior. https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Raven;_with_literary_and_historical_commentary/Latin

    Sed quare non simpliciter hexametri vel elegi?

    Vale et valete



    Habito rationem contextus, mihi videtur "Numquam ultra" magis convenire
    quam "Non amplius". Nonne haec expressio magis radicalis est?
    --
    Desidarius Gallus.

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