1. Forum
  2. USENET
  3. alt.arts.poetry.comments

  • Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery

    From Will Dockery@user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid to alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat Jan 10 21:12:11 2026
    From Newsgroup: alt.arts.poetry.comments


    mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:

    Will Dockery wrote:
    HarryLime wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:
    mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    You've forgotten that the poem is based on a dream, anyhow, apparently. >>>>
    Poetry and dreams are not "real life."

    Here ^^^

    Dream or not, your poem depicts sexual molestation of a minor

    The person in the poem is around 24 years old, far from the age you continue to misrepresent her as being.

    Over 40 years later she'll now be in her 60s.

    Again, absolutely untrue.

    Bullsh*t.

    See above, which makes *your* statement b.s. Harry.

    I don't expect you to agree.

    You shouldn't expect anyone to agree.

    Moh Lou and trolls of your ilk, of course.

    And that really ought to be telling you something.

    It tells me you're trolling me as usual, basically, Harry.

    And so it goes.
    --
    Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:
    https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery
    --- Synchronet 3.21a-Linux NewsLink 1.2
  • From Will Dockery@user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid to alt.arts.poetry.comments on Tue Jan 13 06:04:52 2026
    From Newsgroup: alt.arts.poetry.comments


    Original text restored:

    I Met A Girl

    I met a girl
    she came from California.
    It was in a dream
    we knew each other instantly.
    She was a little freckled girl
    from out of
    my high school past.

    And she looked up at me
    and talked real spacey.
    I've forgotten her name
    though she told it to me twice.

    We talked
    a really detached situation.
    She said years ago
    I was so shy
    she thought I was gay.
    At this point I kissed her
    and put my finger to her hole.

    And she looked up at me
    and talked real spacey.
    I have forgotten her name
    though she told it to me twice.

    I don't know why it was
    that I would think of her.
    I made a couple of puns
    about her name that made me blush.
    But her softness in tone
    made me feel all right.

    All I want to do
    is get in contact.

    -Will Dockery
    --
    Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:
    https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery
    --- Synchronet 3.21a-Linux NewsLink 1.2