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Live version in development with Mark on lead guitar, bass and rhythm guitar players being auditioned.

Have fun finding it, stalkers.

EfyA


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TWILIGHT GIRL*

Mexican dungarees are falling --
It's Twilight Girl.
Pablo's down on his knees, he's balling,
Will's Twilight Girl.
When Will is strapped for cash and
And can't afford a beer,
He pimps Kathy out at twilight time.

Swarthy Don Juans all gather 'round her,
It's Twilight Girl.
Slip Will a ten and you can pound her,
Will's Twilight Girl.
If you've got forty and
A bed, then you can stay
Together, all night, with Twilight Girl.

Here... in the neon's velvet glow
She'll blow you for a fin between the cars.
Here... just behind the Taco Bell
She'll make you come and then, she'll go again.

All through her pubes, the crabs are crawling
But you won't care.
Clay's watching from the pickup bed, but
Just let him stare.
Will counts the bankroll and
She takes her ten percent --
Then Will goes to sleep with Twilight Girl.


*With apologies to Buck Ram, Morty Nevins, Al Nevins, and Artie Dunn.


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Twilight Girl by Will Dockery & Henry Conley written for Lady Katherine:

https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--will-dockery-henry

Twilight Girl

Six or six thousand,
we will meet again.
At blazing dusk,
or quiet dawn.
On that shore... again.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

On that quiet morning,
clear, crispy light.
Seeing a movie from a distance,
mourning in front of her flight.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy,
Twilight Girl.

She offered me her cup,
asked me to fill it up,
I said "Later, babe.
Right now we have to talk
untangle the chakra
that crosses over."

Ghost horses,
from the car ahead,
looks like engine exhaust.
Blink my eyes through bitter tears,
a smile for what we've lost.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

-Will Dockery

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[quote="Will-Dockery"]
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TWILIGHT GIRL*

Mexican dungarees are falling --
It's Twilight Girl.
Pablo's down on his knees, he's balling,
Will's Twilight Girl.
When Will is strapped for cash and
And can't afford a beer,
He pimps Kathy out at twilight time.

Swarthy Don Juans all gather 'round her,
It's Twilight Girl.
Slip Will a ten and you can pound her,
Will's Twilight Girl.
If you've got forty and
A bed, then you can stay
Together, all night, with Twilight Girl.

Here... in the neon's velvet glow
She'll blow you for a fin between the cars.
Here... just behind the Taco Bell
She'll make you come and then, she'll go again.

All through her pubes, the crabs are crawling
But you won't care.
Clay's watching from the pickup bed, but
Just let him stare.
Will counts the bankroll and
She takes her ten percent --
Then Will goes to sleep with Twilight Girl.


*With apologies to Buck Ram, Morty Nevins, Al Nevins, and Artie Dunn.


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Will-Dockery wrote:
Check out "Twilight Girl" by Will Dockery & Henry Conley:
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--
will-dockery-henry?0

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[quote="Will-Dockery"]
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TWILIGHT GIRL*

Mexican dungarees are falling --
It's Twilight Girl.
Pablo's down on his knees, he's balling,
Will's Twilight Girl.
When Will is strapped for cash and
And can't afford a beer,
He pimps Kathy out at twilight time.

Swarthy Don Juans all gather 'round her,
It's Twilight Girl.
Slip Will a ten and you can pound her,
Will's Twilight Girl.
If you've got forty and
A bed, then you can stay
Together, all night, with Twilight Girl.

Here... in the neon's velvet glow
She'll blow you for a fin between the cars.
Here... just behind the Taco Bell
She'll make you come and then, she'll go again.

All through her pubes, the crabs are crawling
But you won't care.
Clay's watching from the pickup bed, but
Just let him stare.
Will counts the bankroll and
She takes her ten percent --
Then Will goes to sleep with Twilight Girl.

*With apologies to Buck Ram, Morty Nevins, Al Nevins, and Artie Dunn.

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I bow to the master. That's one hell of a job on that revision.

Donkey could learn a lot from this experience but likely won't.

Such a loser, such a failure, such a Douchebag.
--
"The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to
you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -
Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon
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Cujo DeSockpuppet <cujo@petitmorte.net> posted:

Will Dockery wrote:

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Such a loser, such a failure

Kevin Fries, such a worthless no talent troll.

EfyA
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Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery
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Will Dockery wrote:

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You definitely have a knack for satire, Pendragon.

You should be working for Mad Magazine.

EfyA

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Will-Dockery wrote:
Check out "Twilight Girl" by Will Dockery & Henry Conley: https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--will-dockery-henry?0

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Twilight Girl by Will Dockery & Henry Conley written for Lady Katherine:

https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--will-dockery-henry

Twilight Girl

Six or six thousand,
we will meet again.
At blazing dusk,
or quiet dawn.
On that shore... again.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

On that quiet morning,
clear, crispy light.
Seeing a movie from a distance,
mourning in front of her flight.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy,
Twilight Girl.

She offered me her cup,
asked me to fill it up,
I said "Later, babe.
Right now we have to talk
untangle the chakra
that crosses over."

Ghost horses,
from the car ahead,
looks like engine exhaust.
Blink my eyes through bitter tears,
a smile for what we've lost.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

-Will Dockery

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TWILIGHT GIRL*

Mexican dungarees are falling --
It's Twilight Girl.
Pablo's down on his knees, he's balling,
Will's Twilight Girl.
When Will is strapped for cash and
And can't afford a beer,
He pimps Kathy out at twilight time.

Swarthy Don Juans all gather 'round her,
It's Twilight Girl.
Slip Will a ten and you can pound her,
Will's Twilight Girl.
If you've got forty and
A bed, then you can stay
Together, all night, with Twilight Girl.

Here... in the neon's velvet glow
She'll blow you for a fin between the cars.
Here... just behind the Taco Bell
She'll make you come and then, she'll go again.

All through her pubes, the crabs are crawling
But you won't care.
Clay's watching from the pickup bed, but
Just let him stare.
Will counts the bankroll and
She takes her ten percent --
Then Will goes to sleep with Twilight Girl.


*With apologies to Buck Ram, Morty Nevins, Al Nevins, and Artie Dunn.


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Will-Dockery wrote:
Check out "Twilight Girl" by Will Dockery & Henry Conley: https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--will-dockery-henry?0

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Twilight Girl by Will Dockery & Henry Conley written for Lady Katherine:

https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/24647258-twilight-girl--will-dockery-henry

Twilight Girl

Six or six thousand,
we will meet again.
At blazing dusk,
or quiet dawn.
On that shore... again.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

On that quiet morning,
clear, crispy light.
Seeing a movie from a distance,
mourning in front of her flight.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy,
Twilight Girl.

She offered me her cup,
asked me to fill it up,
I said "Later, babe.
Right now we have to talk
untangle the chakra
that crosses over."

Ghost horses,
from the car ahead,
looks like engine exhaust.
Blink my eyes through bitter tears,
a smile for what we've lost.

This is the wait,
the weight of the world.
Comes down sweet and heavy...
Twilight Girl.

-Will Dockery

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HarryLime wrote:

[quote="WillDockery"]

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TWILIGHT GIRL*

Mexican dungarees are falling --
It's Twilight Girl.
Pablo's down on his knees, he's balling,
Will's Twilight Girl.
When Will is strapped for cash and
And can't afford a beer,
He pimps Kathy out at twilight time.

Swarthy Don Juans all gather 'round her,
It's Twilight Girl.
Slip Will a ten and you can pound her,
Will's Twilight Girl.
If you've got forty and
A bed, then you can stay
Together, all night, with Twilight Girl.

Here... in the neon's velvet glow
She'll blow you for a fin between the cars.
Here... just behind the Taco Bell
She'll make you come and then, she'll go again.

All through her pubes, the crabs are crawling
But you won't care.
Clay's watching from the pickup bed, but
Just let him stare.
Will counts the bankroll and
She takes her ten percent --
Then Will goes to sleep with Twilight Girl.

*With apologies to Buck Ram, Morty Nevins, Al Nevins, and Artie Dunn.

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Applause!
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