• poetic lyrics

    From Tara@tsm@fastmail.ca to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 05:29:58 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy



    rCLSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.rCY
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC. Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".
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  • From Noah Sombrero@fedora@fea.st to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 09:26:26 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 05:29:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:



    oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC. >Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    Do you think the complexity of thought of cohen's lyrics compares with
    dylan's?

    Not that cohen's lyrics were erudite or syntactically complex

    Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
    Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
    Everybody knows the war is over
    Everybody knows the good guys lost
    Everybody knows the fight was fixed
    The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
    That's how it goes
    Everybody knows


    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And donAt criticize
    What you canAt understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is rapidly aginA
    Please get out of the new one
    If you canAt lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changinA


    See the difference?

    Ok, you like bird on a wire? Here you go

    Like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free
    Like a worm on a hook
    Like a knight from some old fashioned book
    I have saved all my ribbons for thee

    [Bridge]
    If I, if I have been unkind
    I hope that you can just let it go by
    If I, if I have been untrue
    I hope you know it was never to you

    [Verse 2]
    Oh like a baby, stillborn
    Like a beast with his horn
    I have torn everyone who reached out for me
    But I swear by this song
    And by all that I have done wrong
    I will make it all up to thee

    [Bridge]
    I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch
    He said to me, "You must not ask for so much"
    And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door
    She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

    [Outro]
    Oh like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free


    Do you think dylan ever wrote anything that compares with that?
    --
    Noah Sombrero mustachioed villain
    Don't get political with me young man
    or I'll tie you to a railroad track and
    <<<talk>>> to <<<YOOooooo>>>
    Who dares to talk to El Sombrero?
    dares: Ned
    does not dare: Julian shrinks in horror and warns others away

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  • From Tara@tsm@fastmail.ca to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 14:12:14 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Oct 13, 2025 at 9:26:26rC>AM EDT, "Noah Sombrero" <fedora@fea.st> wrote:

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 05:29:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:



    -oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.-o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    Do you think the complexity of thought of cohen's lyrics compares with dylan's?

    Not that cohen's lyrics were erudite or syntactically complex

    Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
    Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
    Everybody knows the war is over
    Everybody knows the good guys lost
    Everybody knows the fight was fixed
    The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
    That's how it goes
    Everybody knows


    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And don-At criticize
    What you can-At understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is rapidly agin-A
    Please get out of the new one
    If you can-At lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changin-A


    See the difference?

    Ok, you like bird on a wire? Here you go

    Like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free
    Like a worm on a hook
    Like a knight from some old fashioned book
    I have saved all my ribbons for thee

    [Bridge]
    If I, if I have been unkind
    I hope that you can just let it go by
    If I, if I have been untrue
    I hope you know it was never to you

    [Verse 2]
    Oh like a baby, stillborn
    Like a beast with his horn
    I have torn everyone who reached out for me
    But I swear by this song
    And by all that I have done wrong
    I will make it all up to thee

    [Bridge]
    I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch
    He said to me, "You must not ask for so much"
    And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door
    She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

    [Outro]
    Oh like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free


    Do you think dylan ever wrote anything that compares with that?

    No.

    Dylan writes poetic lyrics but Cohen puts poetry to song.
    Dylan - musician. Cohen - poet

    But Bob Dylan won the Nobel for literature. "for having created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition"
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  • From Tara@tsm@fastmail.ca to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 14:35:53 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Oct 13, 2025 at 10:12:14rC>AM EDT, "Tara" <tsm@fastmail.ca> wrote:

    On Oct 13, 2025 at 9:26:26rC>AM EDT, "Noah Sombrero" <fedora@fea.st> wrote:

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 05:29:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:



    -oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.-o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    Do you think the complexity of thought of cohen's lyrics compares with
    dylan's?

    Not that cohen's lyrics were erudite or syntactically complex

    Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
    Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
    Everybody knows the war is over
    Everybody knows the good guys lost
    Everybody knows the fight was fixed
    The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
    That's how it goes
    Everybody knows


    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And don-At criticize
    What you can-At understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is rapidly agin-A
    Please get out of the new one
    If you can-At lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changin-A


    See the difference?

    Ok, you like bird on a wire? Here you go

    Like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free
    Like a worm on a hook
    Like a knight from some old fashioned book
    I have saved all my ribbons for thee

    [Bridge]
    If I, if I have been unkind
    I hope that you can just let it go by
    If I, if I have been untrue
    I hope you know it was never to you

    [Verse 2]
    Oh like a baby, stillborn
    Like a beast with his horn
    I have torn everyone who reached out for me
    But I swear by this song
    And by all that I have done wrong
    I will make it all up to thee

    [Bridge]
    I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch
    He said to me, "You must not ask for so much"
    And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door
    She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

    [Outro]
    Oh like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free


    Do you think dylan ever wrote anything that compares with that?

    No.

    Dylan writes poetic lyrics but Cohen puts poetry to song.
    Dylan - musician. Cohen - poet

    But Bob Dylan won the Nobel for literature. "for having created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition"

    Leonard's son Adam writes:

    Leonard and Bob


    "A lot of people have made the comparison between Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen over the years and there's some hilarious stories."

    "Like the two of them are sitting in a cafe in Paris and Dylan says to him, rCyHow long did it take you to write Hallelujah?"

    "And my father completely lied to Dylan and said, rCyOh you know couple of years.rCO "

    "I think it was [actually] seven years", says Adam.

    "And then my father returned the favour and said, you know, rCyHow long did it take you to write Like a Woman?rCO and Dylan said rCyFifteen minutesrCO.

    "And that's very much about process I think. Dylan had this quality where he would rCyfrom the hiprCO, you know spit and polish, spit and vinegar and then this
    old man of mine was much more like chiseling marble."
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  • From Ned Ludd@nedludd@ix.netcom.com to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 07:47:43 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On 10/12/2025 10:29 PM, Tara wrote:


    rCLSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.rCY
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC. Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    I've heard that story lots of times, and once saw
    a video of Cohen telling it, and he said it was
    "Hallelujah", not "Bird On a Wire", that took him
    five years.

    Ned

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  • From Ned Ludd@nedludd@ix.netcom.com to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 07:50:39 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On 10/13/2025 7:35 AM, Tara wrote:
    On Oct 13, 2025 at 10:12:14rC>AM EDT, "Tara" <tsm@fastmail.ca> wrote:

    On Oct 13, 2025 at 9:26:26rC>AM EDT, "Noah Sombrero" <fedora@fea.st> wrote: >>
    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 05:29:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:



    -oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.-o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC. >>>> Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    Do you think the complexity of thought of cohen's lyrics compares with
    dylan's?

    Not that cohen's lyrics were erudite or syntactically complex

    Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
    Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
    Everybody knows the war is over
    Everybody knows the good guys lost
    Everybody knows the fight was fixed
    The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
    That's how it goes
    Everybody knows


    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And don-At criticize
    What you can-At understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is rapidly agin-A
    Please get out of the new one
    If you can-At lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changin-A


    See the difference?

    Ok, you like bird on a wire? Here you go

    Like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free
    Like a worm on a hook
    Like a knight from some old fashioned book
    I have saved all my ribbons for thee

    [Bridge]
    If I, if I have been unkind
    I hope that you can just let it go by
    If I, if I have been untrue
    I hope you know it was never to you

    [Verse 2]
    Oh like a baby, stillborn
    Like a beast with his horn
    I have torn everyone who reached out for me
    But I swear by this song
    And by all that I have done wrong
    I will make it all up to thee

    [Bridge]
    I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch
    He said to me, "You must not ask for so much"
    And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door
    She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

    [Outro]
    Oh like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free


    Do you think dylan ever wrote anything that compares with that?

    No.

    Dylan writes poetic lyrics but Cohen puts poetry to song.
    Dylan - musician. Cohen - poet

    But Bob Dylan won the Nobel for literature. "for having created new poetic >> expressions within the great American song tradition"

    Leonard's son Adam writes:

    Leonard and Bob


    "A lot of people have made the comparison between Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen over the years and there's some hilarious stories."

    "Like the two of them are sitting in a cafe in Paris and Dylan says to him, rCyHow long did it take you to write Hallelujah?"

    "And my father completely lied to Dylan and said, rCyOh you know couple of years.rCO "

    "I think it was [actually] seven years", says Adam.

    "And then my father returned the favour and said, you know, rCyHow long did it
    take you to write Like a Woman?rCO and Dylan said rCyFifteen minutesrCO.

    "And that's very much about process I think. Dylan had this quality where he would rCyfrom the hiprCO, you know spit and polish, spit and vinegar and then this
    old man of mine was much more like chiseling marble."

    Yes, that's the version that I heard Cohen himself say,
    that it was Hallelujah.

    Ned

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  • From Tara@tsm@fastmail.ca to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 15:01:58 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    Ned Ludd <nedludd@ix.netcom.com> wrote:
    On 10/12/2025 10:29 PM, Tara wrote:


    rCLSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.rCY
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    I've heard that story lots of times, and once saw
    a video of Cohen telling it, and he said it was
    "Hallelujah", not "Bird On a Wire", that took him
    five years.

    Ned



    Thanks. All I know is - listening to him got me through a few years of not
    so fun times.

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  • From Noah Sombrero@fedora@fea.st to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 11:02:01 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 07:50:39 -0700, Ned Ludd <nedludd@ix.netcom.com>
    wrote:

    On 10/13/2025 7:35 AM, Tara wrote:
    On Oct 13, 2025 at 10:12:14?AM EDT, "Tara" <tsm@fastmail.ca> wrote:

    On Oct 13, 2025 at 9:26:26?AM EDT, "Noah Sombrero" <fedora@fea.st> wrote: >>>
    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 05:29:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:



    ?Sometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.?
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC. >>>>> Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    Do you think the complexity of thought of cohen's lyrics compares with >>>> dylan's?

    Not that cohen's lyrics were erudite or syntactically complex

    Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
    Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
    Everybody knows the war is over
    Everybody knows the good guys lost
    Everybody knows the fight was fixed
    The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
    That's how it goes
    Everybody knows


    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And don?t criticize
    What you can?t understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is rapidly agin?
    Please get out of the new one
    If you can?t lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changin?


    See the difference?

    Ok, you like bird on a wire? Here you go

    Like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free
    Like a worm on a hook
    Like a knight from some old fashioned book
    I have saved all my ribbons for thee

    [Bridge]
    If I, if I have been unkind
    I hope that you can just let it go by
    If I, if I have been untrue
    I hope you know it was never to you

    [Verse 2]
    Oh like a baby, stillborn
    Like a beast with his horn
    I have torn everyone who reached out for me
    But I swear by this song
    And by all that I have done wrong
    I will make it all up to thee

    [Bridge]
    I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch
    He said to me, "You must not ask for so much"
    And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door
    She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

    [Outro]
    Oh like a bird on the wire
    Like a drunk in a midnight choir
    I have tried in my way to be free


    Do you think dylan ever wrote anything that compares with that?

    No.

    Dylan writes poetic lyrics but Cohen puts poetry to song.
    Dylan - musician. Cohen - poet

    But Bob Dylan won the Nobel for literature. "for having created new poetic >>> expressions within the great American song tradition"

    Leonard's son Adam writes:

    Leonard and Bob


    "A lot of people have made the comparison between Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen
    over the years and there's some hilarious stories."

    "Like the two of them are sitting in a cafe in Paris and Dylan says to him, >> aHow long did it take you to write Hallelujah?"

    "And my father completely lied to Dylan and said, aOh you know couple of
    years.A "

    "I think it was [actually] seven years", says Adam.

    "And then my father returned the favour and said, you know, aHow long did it >> take you to write Like a Woman?A and Dylan said aFifteen minutesA.

    "And that's very much about process I think. Dylan had this quality where he >> would afrom the hipA, you know spit and polish, spit and vinegar and then this
    old man of mine was much more like chiseling marble."

    Yes, that's the version that I heard Cohen himself say,
    that it was Hallelujah.

    Ned

    Chiseling marble.
    --
    Noah Sombrero mustachioed villain
    Don't get political with me young man
    or I'll tie you to a railroad track and
    <<<talk>>> to <<<YOOooooo>>>
    Who dares to talk to El Sombrero?
    dares: Ned
    does not dare: Julian shrinks in horror and warns others away

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  • From Noah Sombrero@fedora@fea.st to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 11:04:44 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 15:01:58 -0000 (UTC), Tara <tsm@fastmail.ca>
    wrote:

    Ned Ludd <nedludd@ix.netcom.com> wrote:
    On 10/12/2025 10:29 PM, Tara wrote:


    oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    I've heard that story lots of times, and once saw
    a video of Cohen telling it, and he said it was
    "Hallelujah", not "Bird On a Wire", that took him
    five years.

    Ned



    Thanks. All I know is - listening to him got me through a few years of not
    so fun times.

    Chiseled marble can do that.
    --
    Noah Sombrero mustachioed villain
    Don't get political with me young man
    or I'll tie you to a railroad track and
    <<<talk>>> to <<<YOOooooo>>>
    Who dares to talk to El Sombrero?
    dares: Ned
    does not dare: Julian shrinks in horror and warns others away

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  • From Noah Sombrero@fedora@fea.st to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 11:13:48 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On Mon, 13 Oct 2025 07:47:43 -0700, Ned Ludd <nedludd@ix.netcom.com>
    wrote:

    On 10/12/2025 10:29 PM, Tara wrote:


    oSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.o
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    I've heard that story lots of times, and once saw
    a video of Cohen telling it, and he said it was
    "Hallelujah", not "Bird On a Wire", that took him
    five years.

    Ned

    Finding a series of rhymes for Hallelujah can take a while.
    --
    Noah Sombrero mustachioed villain
    Don't get political with me young man
    or I'll tie you to a railroad track and
    <<<talk>>> to <<<YOOooooo>>>
    Who dares to talk to El Sombrero?
    dares: Ned
    does not dare: Julian shrinks in horror and warns others away

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  • From Ned Ludd@nedludd@ix.netcom.com to alt.buddha.short.fat.guy on Mon Oct 13 08:32:50 2025
    From Newsgroup: alt.buddha.short.fat.guy

    On 10/13/2025 8:01 AM, Tara wrote:
    Ned Ludd <nedludd@ix.netcom.com> wrote:
    On 10/12/2025 10:29 PM, Tara wrote:


    rCLSometimes I spend an entire day writing one line.rCY
    -Leonard Cohen.

    Dylan wrote "Desolation Row" in 15 minutes in the back of a cab in NYC.
    Leonard took years to write "Bird On the Wire".

    I've heard that story lots of times, and once saw
    a video of Cohen telling it, and he said it was
    "Hallelujah", not "Bird On a Wire", that took him
    five years.

    Ned



    Thanks. All I know is - listening to him got me through a few years of not
    so fun times.


    Same here. There was a time I could sing five or six
    of Dylan's songs from memory.

    Ned

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