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On Mon, 19 Aug 2024 18:21:57 +0000, Bruce wrote:
So Bob, what do you think of Jim's recording of the song he and I wrote?
I always enjoy Jim's guitar. I liked his vocals. I thought he wrote a functional tune for your lyrics.
My suggestion to you for future projects is to pay more attention to the rhythm of your vowels. You have said that you don't care about the
meaning of lyrics but you do care about their sonic qualities. Toward
that end, I would suggest paying more attention to the pattern of open
vs. closed vowels in your verses. Done well (Chuck Berry, Jerry Leiber),
it makes a song fly.
On 8/19/2024 3:35 PM, BobRoman wrote:
On Mon, 19 Aug 2024 18:21:57 +0000, Bruce wrote:----------
So Bob, what do you think of Jim's recording of the song he and I wrote?
I always enjoy Jim's guitar. I liked his vocals. I thought he wrote a
functional tune for your lyrics.
My suggestion to you for future projects is to pay more attention to the
rhythm of your vowels. You have said that you don't care about the
meaning of lyrics but you do care about their sonic qualities. Toward
that end, I would suggest paying more attention to the pattern of open
vs. closed vowels in your verses. Done well (Chuck Berry, Jerry Leiber),
it makes a song fly.
Years ago I studied linguistics, but I don't recall ever hearing about
"open vs. closed vowels." Care to explain what you're talking about
here?
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 18:29:43 -0500, Jim Colegrove---------
<coolg@thecoolgroove.com> wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 13:32:30 +0000, bbug2@optonline.net (bbug) wrote:
Who's doing the vocals?
Jim is.
If you can only find a spot for Bruce on the recording, I thought of a
good name for the artists:
Chip & Dip
DipChip would be better.
That goes with the recording nicely, well done!
On 8/14/2024 12:02 AM, RWC wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 18:29:43 -0500, Jim Colegrove---------
<coolg@thecoolgroove.com> wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 13:32:30 +0000, bbug2@optonline.net (bbug) wrote:
Who's doing the vocals?
Jim is.
If you can only find a spot for Bruce on the recording, I thought of a >>>> good name for the artists:
Chip & Dip
DipChip would be better.
That goes with the recording nicely, well done!
I don't get it, what's the meaning?
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 22:54:07 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 16:37:48 +0000, Bruce wrote:Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Jim and I wrote another song together. Do you guys remember a couple of >>>> years ago I dashed off the words to a rockabilly song to show Dean how >>>> easy it was and what type of lyrics belonged in rockabilly. Here are
those lyrics.
ROCK AND ROLL MAMA
Words by Bruce Grossberg
Music by Jim Colegrove
Well I got a baby who can't be beat
She's the hottest woman on two feet
Every guy in town wants to steal her away
But I never worry because there's no way
She and I go out and ball all night
We're so cool together, never had a fight
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
FIRST GUITAR BREAK
My baby and me will last forever
We'll never part, no, no, no, never
She's the sweetest thing that I've ever had
Always makes me happy, never makes me sad
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
SECOND GUITAR BREAK
I've never been so happy in my life
As when my sweet girl became my wife
I know that me and her will never part
Because we love each other with all our heart
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues.
Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 05:55:11 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 22:54:07 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 16:37:48 +0000, Bruce wrote:Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Jim and I wrote another song together. Do you guys remember a couple of >>>>> years ago I dashed off the words to a rockabilly song to show Dean how >>>>> easy it was and what type of lyrics belonged in rockabilly. Here are >>>>> those lyrics.
ROCK AND ROLL MAMA
Words by Bruce Grossberg
Music by Jim Colegrove
Well I got a baby who can't be beat
She's the hottest woman on two feet
Every guy in town wants to steal her away
But I never worry because there's no way
She and I go out and ball all night
We're so cool together, never had a fight
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
FIRST GUITAR BREAK
My baby and me will last forever
We'll never part, no, no, no, never
She's the sweetest thing that I've ever had
Always makes me happy, never makes me sad
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
SECOND GUITAR BREAK
I've never been so happy in my life
As when my sweet girl became my wife
I know that me and her will never part
Because we love each other with all our heart
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues. >>Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
Perfectly stated.
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 14:12:50 +0000, Jim Colegrove wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 05:55:11 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues. >>>Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
Perfectly stated.
Absolutely!
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 19:20:38 +0000, mariabus@blueyonder.co.uk (Roger)
wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 14:12:50 +0000, Jim Colegrove wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 05:55:11 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues. >>>>Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
Perfectly stated.
Absolutely!
Yes, Jim and Roger, I've often heard the following or similar lyrics
in White Rockabilly music:
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
I've never had Roger's awesome, off the top of one's head, music
memory, so perhaps Roger (and/or Jim, Steve) can remind us of some
50s/Cusp Rockabilly songs that had such lyrics.
If needed as a memory jogger, this Rockabilly lyrics site might help: https://rockabillyrules.com/lyrics/
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 14:12:50 +0000, Jim Colegrove wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 05:55:11 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 22:54:07 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 16:37:48 +0000, Bruce wrote:Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Jim and I wrote another song together. Do you guys remember a couple of >>>>>> years ago I dashed off the words to a rockabilly song to show Dean how >>>>>> easy it was and what type of lyrics belonged in rockabilly. Here are >>>>>> those lyrics.
ROCK AND ROLL MAMA
Words by Bruce Grossberg
Music by Jim Colegrove
Well I got a baby who can't be beat
She's the hottest woman on two feet
Every guy in town wants to steal her away
But I never worry because there's no way
She and I go out and ball all night
We're so cool together, never had a fight
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
FIRST GUITAR BREAK
My baby and me will last forever
We'll never part, no, no, no, never
She's the sweetest thing that I've ever had
Always makes me happy, never makes me sad
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
SECOND GUITAR BREAK
I've never been so happy in my life
As when my sweet girl became my wife
I know that me and her will never part
Because we love each other with all our heart
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues. >>>Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
Perfectly stated.
Absolutely!
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 19:20:38 +0000, Roger wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 14:12:50 +0000, Jim Colegrove wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 05:55:11 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 4:09:45 +0000, RWC wrote:
On Tue, 13 Aug 2024 22:54:07 +0000, savoybg@aol.com (Bruce) wrote:
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 16:37:48 +0000, Bruce wrote:Extremely strong R&B influence here!
Jim and I wrote another song together. Do you guys remember a couple of >>>>>>> years ago I dashed off the words to a rockabilly song to show Dean how >>>>>>> easy it was and what type of lyrics belonged in rockabilly. Here are >>>>>>> those lyrics.
ROCK AND ROLL MAMA
Words by Bruce Grossberg
Music by Jim Colegrove
Well I got a baby who can't be beat
She's the hottest woman on two feet
Every guy in town wants to steal her away
But I never worry because there's no way
She and I go out and ball all night
We're so cool together, never had a fight
When the night is over and we're all alone
I make her scream and she makes me moan
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
FIRST GUITAR BREAK
My baby and me will last forever
We'll never part, no, no, no, never
She's the sweetest thing that I've ever had
Always makes me happy, never makes me sad
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
SECOND GUITAR BREAK
I've never been so happy in my life
As when my sweet girl became my wife
I know that me and her will never part
Because we love each other with all our heart
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
She's a rock, rock, rock and roll mama
Rockin' all night and day
Clearly rockabilly is the Southern white man's take on rhythm and blues. >>>>Lots of rockabilly records from that time mention rhythm and blues.
Perfectly stated.
Absolutely!
So Rog, what do you think of the recording?
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 23:17:30 +0000, Bruce wrote:
So Rog, what do you think of the recording?
It's very good tho "Baby Let's Play House","Blue Suede Shoes" and "One
Hand Loose" can still sleep soundly at the top of my personal rockabilly chart. Jim's instrumentation is excellent and your lyrics fit the bill
well. Not bad for someone who (just like me) doesn't usually give them
that much attention :-)
On Tue, 20 Aug 2024 23:34:21 +0000, DianeE wrote:-----------
On 8/19/2024 3:35 PM, BobRoman wrote:
On Mon, 19 Aug 2024 18:21:57 +0000, Bruce wrote:----------
So Bob, what do you think of Jim's recording of the song he and I
wrote?
I always enjoy Jim's guitar. I liked his vocals. I thought he wrote a
functional tune for your lyrics.
My suggestion to you for future projects is to pay more attention to the >>> rhythm of your vowels. You have said that you don't care about the
meaning of lyrics but you do care about their sonic qualities. Toward
that end, I would suggest paying more attention to the pattern of open
vs. closed vowels in your verses. Done well (Chuck Berry, Jerry Leiber), >>> it makes a song fly.
Years ago I studied linguistics, but I don't recall ever hearing about
"open vs. closed vowels." Care to explain what you're talking about
here?
An open vowel is a vowel sound that occurs when the tongue is positioned
as far away from the roof of the mouth as possible. In U.S. terminology,
open vowels are sometimes called low vowels because of the low position
of the tongue.
An open syllable is a syllable that ends with a vowel sound that is
spelled with a single vowel letter (a, e, i, o, or u) and has no
consonants blocking the vowel. The vowel sound is long and says its
name, such as "A", "E", "I", "O", or "U". For example, the words "hi",
"no", "she", "he", "we", and "so" all have open syllables. Open
syllables can also be found within words, such as the word "tiger",
which has an open syllable at the front ("ti").
A closed vowel is a vowel that is followed by a consonant and makes a
short sound. For example, the word "hat" has a closed syllable in the
"at" part because it ends with the consonant sound /t/, which makes the
vowel sound /æ/ short. Here are some more examples of closed vowels:
dish, bas/ket, sit, rabbit, cap, and up.
In a closed syllable, the consonant "closes in" the vowel, which is why
it's called a closed syllable. A syllable can have more than one
consonant closing it in, like in the words "dish" and "stretch". Many multisyllable words, like "insect", "rabbit", and "napkin", also contain closed syllables.
Pretty good, but not my style.
On Thu, 15 Aug 2024 5:09:21 +0000, Roger wrote:
On Wed, 14 Aug 2024 23:17:30 +0000, Bruce wrote:
So Rog, what do you think of the recording?
It's very good tho "Baby Let's Play House","Blue Suede Shoes" and "One
Hand Loose" can still sleep soundly at the top of my personal rockabilly
chart. Jim's instrumentation is excellent and your lyrics fit the bill
well. Not bad for someone who (just like me) doesn't usually give them
that much attention :-)
Funny, I had those as the top 3 on the GREATEST ROCKABILLY SONGS list I
did for DDD. CLEARLY to me the Mount Rushmore of rockabilly acts is
Elvis, Perkins, Feathers and the Burnette Trio.
https://digitaldreamdoor.com/pages/best_songs-rbilly-x.html
I've got "Rock And Roll Mama" as an 8. That's amazing for something just recorded now. If this was 50 years ago I'd put it on a 45 and I'm sure
you would have moved a lot of copies in your store.
No doubt about it; Bruce got excellent mileage out of that rhyming dictionary!
"If anybody wrote those kind of suggestive lyrics back then they likely
never made it on to the final recording."
Was there a reason for the "suggestive lyrics? I'm sure you could have
found clean lyrics which provided the same acoustic sound. If there was
a reason, that would belie your oft stated profession that lyrics mean nothing to you beyond their acoustic contribution to the overall sound.
There was a ton of off color recordings that were released back then.
found clean lyrics which provided the same acoustic sound. If there was
a reason, that would belie your oft stated profession that lyrics mean
nothing to you beyond their acoustic contribution to the overall sound.
They mean nothing to me as a listener, but I wasn't writing the lyrics
just for myself. Lyrics mean something to most listeners, so as a song
writer I chose to give them something to pay attention to. It doesn't
mater to me either way, so why not give something to those who it does
matter to?
Was there a reason for the "suggestive lyrics? I'm sure you could have
found clean lyrics which provided the same acoustic sound. If there was
a reason, that would belie your oft stated profession that lyrics mean
nothing to you beyond their acoustic contribution to the overall sound.
They mean nothing to me as a listener, but I wasn't writing the lyrics
just for myself. Lyrics mean something to most listeners, so as a song >>writer I chose to give them something to pay attention to. It doesn't
mater to me either way, so why not give something to those who it does >>matter to?
Oh I see, pandering. Stifling your creativity for profit. Isn't that
selling out and what Billy Joel was accused of by many here (not me, but probably you)?
So are you admitting to pandering and selling out, or claiming that you----------
are representing the interests of Jim?